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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 48)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:00pm | IP Logged
hi!!!
part 10 was shockin...
mayank deserved all the anger from nupur!!
i felt bad that nupur's hurt very badlyCry
continue soon
thnx for pmSmile

divya

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
i loved the way you handled this part mehak......the dialogues were awesome....and i loved that nupur took control over the entire situation without being caught up by her emotions....such an incident can only leave you cold....the fact that mayank couldnt hear her say anything about priya and nupur telling him that she was someones daughter too.....nothing can make up for nupurs pain.....but im sure priya will be the source of magic in this story....naina

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
loved the update mehak..............OMG nupur's reaction ........loved reading it.......... now cant wait to read wat happens next.............

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:35pm | IP Logged
Mayank got a slapDancingPartyso so happy.LOL he seriously deserves it though. Love the way you're portraying Nupur, she is a strong headed woman and thats a really good thing. She definitely shouldn't forgive him so easilyApprove
Keep up the great work and thanks for the PMHug

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
it was emotionalOuch.....feeling bad for nupur.....

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
Wow!!! It was awesome. Their convo was superb! u've portrayed both their emotions/feelings really well. I'm so happy to see Nupur so strong and she slapped him! I really don't feel sorry for Mayank...he deserves it and more.
 
Poor Nupur. She has just started to love someone after 8 years and it brought her back to the same point in her life. I'm waiting for the next part...what will Nupur do? and Priya? She has already started bonding with Mayank; how is she going to react when Nupur doesn't let her (I think she prob would want no connection with Mayank)
 
thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
gr8 part
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Gr8 update....
Interesting....!!

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