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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 46)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
wen r u updating??
waiting 4 ur amazing updates...!

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
waiting for the next part Big smile

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:48am | IP Logged
waiting eagerly for next part!!!
read part 6 7 8 & 9 at one go!!!

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:52am | IP Logged
thank u so much guys..i hope i did justice..

PART 10:

M..i was the one who raped u..

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merey hath ki in lakeron main likhe abhi aur kitne sitam..

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the curve forming a smile on nupur's face slowly vanished..she opened her eye lashes and mayank was sitting in front of her on his knees, holding her hand..saying something..

M..wo min tha nupur..main tha jis ki waja se aj tumhari zindagi is haal main hai..

nupur's mind had stopped working..her eyes were seeing mayank her ears were hearing his words but nothing was connecting..

M..mujhe pata hai mera gunaah itna bara hai k mian kisi maafi k qabil nahi hon.phir bhi main maafi mangne aya hon nupur..plz..


..her hand was getting wet..she could sense it, may be due to mayank's tears.

M..main ne tumhari zindagi barbaad kar di nupur..plz maaf kar do..

Finally her mind started working..every memeory was erased..the only words colliding with her mind were..i was the one who raped u....every emotion which she had been suppressing since 8 years came out in its fullest form..she jerked her hand away..mayank stood up and her eyes followed him..

M..nupur..

N..aisa ku kiya tha?


Mayank was left numb to react..

M..nupur..

N..bolo ku?..


she took a step forward, looking straight into his eyes..

N..main bht khobsorat lag rahi thi..

M..nupru plz dekho..

N..mujhe jawab chaiye..bht khobsorat lag rahi thi..


he shook his head in disapproval..managing to utter..

M..nahi..

N..nashe main they?

M..nahi..

N..mujh se koi badle lena tha?..

M..nahi..

N..pyar karte they mujh se..is liye apna banana chate they..?..

M..nahi..

N..kisi teesre insaan k kehne per kiya tha..

M..nahi..

N..kis ne zabradati karwaya tha..

M..nahi..

M..pani marzi se kiya tha..?


mayank closed his eyes..his tears falling..he took step a forward and tried to hold his hand but she moved away..

N..hath mat lagana..

she was chewing every word..

N..apni marzi se kiya tha?.

Mayank closed his eyes and nodded..and nupur took a step forward slapping him..her nails leaving a mark on his cheek skin..mayank closed his eyes firm..

N..tumahre pass koi waja nahi thi..hain na?..

she grabbed his collar and make him look straight into his eyes..

M..nupur..maaf kar do..

N..bahir niklo mery ghr se..


she grabbed his collar and was taking him to the gate when mayank held her hand..

M.meri baat suno nupur..main maafi mangne aya hon..

N..ghalati ki maafi milti hai..gunaah ki koi maafi nai hoti...


M..mujhe pata hai nupur..gunaah hai phir b..

N..phir bhi kia?..


she was looking into his eyes and mayank was fumbling with words..

M..phir bhi..main..ik dosra mauqa..

N..dosra mauqa..kis chez k liye..

Mayank swallowed a lump in his throat..and moved close to him..

M..nupur..plz..thande dimagh se..

N..kia?
..

M..nn..nupur..main..dekho..main..nupur main ne maagfi magi tum se..tum jo saza dena chati ho..mujhe qabbol hai..main..

N..saza se kia hoga..

M..nupur..

N.mera bachpan wapis a jaye ga?..

M..nupur plz..

N.merey baba wapis a jayen gey?..

M..nupur maaf kar do..

N..merey sare khuwab wapis jur jayen gey?..


Mayank held his hand and pinned her against the wall..making his voice as stiff as he could..

M.meri baat suno nupur..

she was still and cold as rock..looking in his eyes..

M..nupur..main 8 saal se soya nhai hon.her waqt ye gulit mera pecha kart tha k main ne ksi ki zindagi baarbaad kar di..main sach main bht regret kart hon nupur..plz..8 saal pehle main america chala gaya tha...mujhe kal hi pata chala k wo larki tum thi..jab tum ne khud sab bataya..nupur min bhi sharminda hon...mujhe nahi pata tha k tum pregnant ho main..


M..pata hota tu kia karte..

M..nupur..

N..wapis a jate..

Mayank was again numb to react..

N.mujh se shaddi kar letey..

M..nupur dekho..

she pushed him away..

N..main batati hon..tum saaf inkar kar detey..

mayank knew she was right..

N..tum sirf bhagna jante ho mayank..aj jab tumhan lagta hai k koi sawaal nahi kare ga tu ghalti ki maafi mangne a gaye ho?..8 saal main phele ku nahi dhondha?

her voice was becoming weak.and this time accompanied by her tears.

N..tum ik kamzoor insaan ho..agr bahudar hoety tu kal hi maafi mangletey..lekin tum kal bhi bhag gaye they..

M..nupur mian dar gaya tha..mujhe laga shaiyed main tum dono ko kho don ga..is liye mainne..

N...mujhe nahi pata..tum bhair jao..niklo merey ghr se..ye merey baba ka ghr hai..aur un k qatil ko is ghr main ik minute nahi rakhon gi..bahir niklo..

she gain clutched his hand..

M...nupur plz..mujhe nahi pata tha itna sab ghalat ho jaye ga..mujhe nahi paat tha k tumaher baba..

N..kia?..oh!..


her lips again curved ina painful smile..

N..acha..nahi pata tha..thek hai..apni beti k bare main socho..tumhain kaisa lage ga agr tumhari beti..

M..nupur...!!!


Mayank shouted at the top of his voice and held her strongly by her shoulders..

M..meri beti k bare main asia sochna bhi mat..

Nupru jerked his hand again..

N..main bhi kisi ki beti thi mayank..

mayank closed his eyes and he again fell on his knees, and this tiem nupur;s crying voice collided his ears..

N..kabhi socha hai merey baba ko kasia laga hoga?..jab un ki beti is haal main ghr wapis ayi hogi?..kabhi socha hai?...

Mayank agian stood upholding her gently..

M..main tumhare bagier nahi reh sakta nupur..i..i love u..

N..and i dont even hate u...get out....


M..nupur plz..mujhe merey bache ki kasam hai..main sach main..

N..bahir niklo mayank..


she grabbed her arm and he was following her..

nupur didn't creid, she was so stiff, he didn't see a glimpse of weakness in he eyes..her voice did get weak but her eyes..they were stiff..mayank's heart understopd she woud not frogive..

they reached the gate and nupur pushed him out of the house...mayank agin held her and looking into her eyes he said....

M..ais mat karo nupur..main..main mar jaon ga..

N..tu mar jao..mujhe farq nahi parta..



Edited by -Mehak - 09 January 2011 at 9:58am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Part 9

Nooo........Nooo.......Noo......Mehak!!!!
You ended the update on such an interesting point..CryCry

Well....as always awesome update!!!!!!!ClapClap
Priya calling Mayank Daddy was really sweet..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Good that finally truth came out!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Cont soon..Big smile


Edited by jes_jade - 09 January 2011 at 9:57am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
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gr8 update mehak
u have described this part very well.
But nupur already loves mayank now what she'll do!!
waiting 4 next part
con soon

Edited by .rumki. - 09 January 2011 at 10:52am

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Part 10

What an excellent & awesome update Mehak!!!!!!ClapClap
Mayank - Nupur convo was superb & heart touching....Nupur's reaction was totally justified....& I liked Mayank's reaction too...but sorry Mayank...I have less sympathy for you...
Well-written..ClapClap

Cont soon..Big smile


Edited by jes_jade - 09 January 2011 at 10:30am

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The convo was great Mehak....you portrayed Nupur as a very strong woman....she has learnt to live the hard way and she has gained a lot of strength....now waiting to see what happens next...considering they are working together and Mayank told her he loves her....you are doing proper justice to this story dear...great goingSmile always leaves me wanting to read more and moreSmile


Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 09 January 2011 at 10:11am

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