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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 45)

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Part 9

Nooo........Nooo.......Noo......Mehak!!!!
You ended the update on such an interesting point..CryCry

Well....as always awesome update!!!!!!!ClapClap
Priya calling Mayank Daddy was really sweet..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Good that finally truth came out!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Cont soon..Big smile


Edited by jes_jade - 09 January 2011 at 9:57am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 9:56am | IP Logged
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gr8 update mehak
u have described this part very well.
But nupur already loves mayank now what she'll do!!
waiting 4 next part
con soon

Edited by .rumki. - 09 January 2011 at 10:52am

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Part 10

What an excellent & awesome update Mehak!!!!!!ClapClap
Mayank - Nupur convo was superb & heart touching....Nupur's reaction was totally justified....& I liked Mayank's reaction too...but sorry Mayank...I have less sympathy for you...
Well-written..ClapClap

Cont soon..Big smile


Edited by jes_jade - 09 January 2011 at 10:30am

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:02am | IP Logged
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The convo was great Mehak....you portrayed Nupur as a very strong woman....she has learnt to live the hard way and she has gained a lot of strength....now waiting to see what happens next...considering they are working together and Mayank told her he loves her....you are doing proper justice to this story dear...great goingSmile always leaves me wanting to read more and moreSmile


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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:03am | IP Logged
well done NUPUR...........

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lekin mayu kya hoga ?????????????????



PLS UPDATE SOON TOM

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
oh my lil genius u completely did justice to it......Smile
jus loved it part...it ws da best.....Big smile
nupur did da very rite thing.........u cudnt hav shown her in a better way....awesum jaani jus loved her confidence........
u truely rocked dis part.......Clap
m soo proud of nupur.......m jus gonna read it again cz i simply loved it


Edited by cutiepie12 - 09 January 2011 at 10:15am

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amazing updateHug the dialogues were amazing, especially where mayank had no answer to her questions and also where he says meri beti ke barey mein mat sochna....................how will nupur forgive him now...............it wont be easy for her.....................maybe priya can bring them close.............but still it would take time for nupur to forgive him

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Posted: 09 January 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged

o larki wat can i say yarr....???

its beyond the words...
amazing part...
waiting 4 nxt part

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