Finally I am here with my feeling towards this story ....When I read the first part, I was shocked and I couldn't believe that you - who always writes about the positivity of life would attempt to write on a such disgusting issue but minutes later I was proud of you on the attempt you were making ...
But you know why I decided not to comment on this story earlier, because I am a strong supporter of feminism - for me the self-respect matters the most and I just didn't want to see this story as a love story ... I always prayed that you wouldn't end it with - they getting together and I am very thankful to you for it ...
What He did wasn't a mistake - He knew it was wrong and yet he did it ... It was a crime and no one has a right to play with someone's life ... This was no way of getting better off but actually his conscience died the minute he thought of that ... Using the physical power and destroying the innocent life of someone doesn't give him anything except the darkness and the fire ...
In the fire he was burning - he gave it the invitation to destroy his life - what you give comes back to you ... The eight years he was guilt ridden was still very less ... If it was in my hands I would have tortured him for the rest of his life but then I cannot be that cruel - loneliness was his punishment ... no physical punishment would be enough ....
Families in such cases leave the hand of the victim and I am glad you showed Her family supporting her ... In such dark times, if you get support - it comes s a hope that we can stand up again and I am glad you showed the supportive family ... The father's pain and the mother's grief pierced my heart - I just couldn't imagine the strength they held to support their daughter - it is commendable ...
The way you showed Her love for her daughter was so pure - a mother can never hate her daughter, can she? Though the circumstances were just not right but the love of a mother overcame the wounds of a woman - and it was perfect ...
The connection which you showed between the three of them was perfect - a beautiful way to bring out the strings of the past ...
When He ran away after her revelation of the past - I just hated him more ... The whole guilt of 8 years just went in the drain - I would have respected him A BIT if he would have confessed then and there ...
A coward like him can't do a thing - when he confessed I just prayed you won't show her breaking down and her love for him overpowering her - Thank you Di ....
A coward like him doesn't deserve it - how can he even expect forgiveness??? In the end, the way you showed Priya becoming her strength, I really liked it but again, he being a coward - decided to end his life ... no strength to bear what he started ... I have zero sympathy for him - his death or for that matter his letter - they just didn't move me - he deserved it all and yet it was too less ...
I didn't like her shedding tears for him - but somewhere in her heart she had loved him and it's okay ....
The best part is the way you brought out the whole story - It's commendable the way you wrote the whole thing .... No woman can forgive a disgusting act like this one - no woman should forgive - no respect at all ... And this case was even worse, it was like for fun he destroyed her life!! This one of your best stories - actually with every story you have grown and this is just another wonderful work of yours ....
Looking forward to more beautiful stories by you ...
Jaee D. Rathore😊
Edited by -jaee- - 13 years ago
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