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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 41)

.rumki. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Mehak ji update

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RoseFairy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
update kr mehak....Angry

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
i am sorry for the delay guys..was not at home..Embarrassed
Mayank's feet frooze, his mind was taking over his heart..he stepped out of the home and started walking towrds his car, the burden he thought that slipped down from his shouders was there again..

M..mujh se nahi hoga..mujh main maafi mangne ki himaat nahi hai..

He got back to his car and drove back to his apartment..

us ki ankhon main nafrat kaisi dekhon ga..mujh se nahi hoga..main kabhi nahi batoon ga..

he was standing by the window again seeing the sunset, his life was again filling with darkness..

agr main nahi bataon ga tu kisey pata chale ga..i am  the only one who knows the truth..main..

again and again the same confusion was running in his mind.
.main nahi bataon ga..haan ..main..
Mayank Sharma was a weak person, so his heart and mind both were weak, he tried to be strong, but he  couldn't...he was not a strong person.
Next morning mayank entered the school building and he observed some kind of hustle and bustle, children were sitting in buses, he saw nupur and priya, he walked towards them when priya saw him coming and ran towards him shouting his name,
P..mayank sir...
She ran towards him and mayank picked him up in his arms,
P..mujhe pata tha ap zaroor aao gey, main kab se maa ko keh rahi thi.. mtlb..
Nupur also came towards them..
P..dekha maa, main ne kaha tha na mayank sir zarrorr ayen gey, aur tum keh rahi thi k..
Nupur was avoiding mayank's look,..
N..priya abhi mil liya hai na, ab jao.. 
M..kahan jana ho raha hai?.
P..main competetion main participate karne ja rahi hon..inter school debate comepetition..kal aaon liya main maa ko  rahi thi k main ap se miley bagier nahi jaon gi..
N..priya late ho rahi ho..
Mayank looked at nuur, who was again and again avoiding his look, he understood that maybe bcz of yesterday.
M..acha acha..chalo priya main ap ko bus tak chor k ata hon..
P..haan ye thek hai..bye maa..
Nupur moved a step forward and kissed her forehead..
N..all the best..
Mayank again tried to look at her, but she ignored...he took priya to the bus and then on reachng the door, he sat down on his knees, and kissed his cheeck..
M..all the best beta..
Priay hugged him and whispered in his ear..
P..thank u daddy..
Maynk was shocked..the word he wanted to hear had collided with his ear drums..he separted priya from him..
priay placed her finger on his lips..
P..maa sun le gi..
Mayank removed her finger..
P...ap mujhe bht psnd ho, pata nahi merey daddy kahan hain, maa se kabhi nahi pocha main ne, lekin ab merey daddy bus ap ho..
Mayank's eyes started to blurr with tears..
P..per maa ki mat batana plz, wo dante gi..
Mayank kissed her finger..
M..nahi bataon ga..promise..
Priay ran in the bus, leaving mayank with the best feeling of his life..the bus left and maynk wiped off his tears..he turned back and nupur was standing there, she turned on seeing maynk ..
she stopped and mayank rushed towards her..
she looked at him and mayank wanted to bow down in front of her and apologize..
M..i am sorry nupur..main kal..
N...mayank plz..dont say sory, meri ghalti thi..shaiyed kuch ziyada hi expect kar liya tha main ne..
M..nahi plz, aisa mat kaho..mujhe pata hai mujhe aisye nahi jana chiya tha..i am sorry..
N..koi baat nahi mayank, atleast mujhe pata chal gaya k mera aur tumhara ristha kiasa hai..
she was about to take a step ahead when mayank stood infornt of her..
M..nupur..plz...tum ne itni bari baat itni achanak keh di, main..
he turned his eyes away..
M..main dar gaya tha..i..i never expected..mian..
his words were fumbling..but this time he looked into her eyes..
M..ik last chance nupur..main tumahre aur priya k bina apni life imagne nahi kar sakta..mujhe tumhare past k bare main baat nahi karni hai...
Nupur's eyes widened and her eyes filled with tears, she was waiting for maynk the whole night, but he didnt return ,she thought that she had lost her only companion, cursed herself for telling the truth, but now..
Nupur lowerd her eyes, letting the tears flow..mayank wa sabout to say sioemthing when his cell phn rang..
M..umm..sham ko dinner pe baat karen?..tumhare ghr?
She looked up, she noticed mayank was nervous, but she nodded and left ..
mayank was again feeling like a thief, he had again kept nupur in dark, but the blush on her face was making him selfish, the warmth of priya was making him selfish..he decided to bury all his morals, he could not put this happiness on risk.
Nupur felt as if the words of her mother were turning out to be true..
"her ksi ki us k hisye ki khushi milti hai"
mayank was her share of happiness!!
she started blushing, she marked leave in the school and went home, the whole afternoon she spent deciding clothes, she was never so happy, she felt that it was the biggest occasion in her life..finally she decided on a white chirdaar frock, she left her hair open, wore siver bangles in one hand..
sher heart was skipping beats, she was thankful to mayank from the core of her heart, he was the one who filled her life again with happines, colors, and most of all he loved her daughter more than she does..
it was evening and nupur had almost checked herself 20 times in the mirror..she was walking here and there restlessly..then there was a knock on the door..
she thought that her heart stop beating..her cheeks turned pink and her lips curved into a smile, taking small steps she headed towards the door and opened it.
.mayank was standing , holding a small bouqet of red roses..
for a moment mayank's heart also threatened to stop beating..she was looking heavenly..
Nupur had started adjuting her duppatta nervously and he followed nupur in the home,  
M..nupur ye..
nupur turned back and took the bouqet.
N..thank u..mujhe roses bht psnd hain..
Her eyes had a beautiful twinkle, and maynk heart was melting, but at the same time, the guilt was engulfing him that it is wrong..
She went inside and mayank sat on the sofa, when she came with water..
M..priya thek se phonch gayi?.. ki teacher ka phn aya tha..phonch gayi hai..
M..hmmm...mujhe bhi number dena..mujhe bhi baat karni hai..
Mayank was drinking water and nupur's eyes again got teary..
her eyes conveyed a strange kind of expression which scared mayank..
N..mujhe samjh nahi ata mian tum se kaise ..
M..plz nupur..kuch mat kaho..
N..nai mayank..tum jo karte ho, is dunia main koi aur nahi kar sakta, such main, main tu pe khud se ziyada bharosa karti hon, tum ne..
M..bus karo nupur..
he stood up and so did nupur..
N..nai mayank..tumne meri zindagi main her khushi wapis bhari hai..
mayank closed his eyes..she didn't knew what was happening..he was the one snatching her happines and now,..this wrong, his heart ahd stopped had finally taken teh bold decsion..
he turned towards her..and held her hand..
M..mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai nupur..
Nupur closed her eyes, her heart beating at a double speed....she sensed mayank  had sat  down on his knees..her beats were getting out of control, this was the moment she had once dreamt off,
he had cluctched her hand very tightly..
her cheeks were turning pink..
her blush deppened..her heart beating fast
M..i was the one who raped u..

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RoseFairy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
ohh god finallly truth came out...m so restless to knw wht would happen nxt....bichari nupur..

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.rumki. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
awesome update Big smile

detail commented on pg 42.actually dimag kharab hogayi.yaha res karka bhul gayi or pg 42 ma comment ki hai LOL Ouch

Edited by .rumki. - 08 January 2011 at 12:33pm

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sumonetolub IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
finally the most awaited update haha.......omg i feel so bad for nupur.....and im glad mayank told her himself becuz she deserves to know the truth.....and it was so sweet when priya called mayank her daddy......i feel so bad for both nupur and priya.....priyas still too young to understand anything but i have a feeling shes going to be the one to bring her parents together......naina

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cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
oh dear finally he spoke......
GOD i jus so loved when nupur ws getting ready..all her feelings n blushing....i jus loved dat...
n mayank n priya convo ws soooo cutieeee......m jus loving priya
oh GOD waiting anxiously for tomorrowSmile

Edited by cutiepie12 - 08 January 2011 at 1:13pm
love.mayurarti IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
OMG!!!!!!!!!!wat a update yaar
feel soooo bad fr nupur n priya...loved priya wen she called mayank as daddy....n nupur was so happy dat he was going to propose her
and finally mayank told her the truth...totally shocked
dying to read the nxt update

Edited by love.mayurarti - 08 January 2011 at 12:11pm

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