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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 39)

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awwwwwwwwesome updatupdate soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanxxx for d pm

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lovely part..........

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Posted: 07 January 2011 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Mahek baji that was so so good. I'm glad mayank knows the truth now, and it's a good thing that he's repenting for what he has done, but rape is one of those crimes that can never be forgiven and nupur's life has been ruined because of him. So can't really sympathize with him Ouch
Keep up the good work and Congrats for winning best writer award Party

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Part 7

Another great part! I loved how u went back and forth b/w M & N's thoughts! It shows their pain but of different kind.

I love how they r getting along but scared of the future that awaits them.

Poor Nupur (I don't feel bad for Mayank, he deserves it..)..she doesn't realize that she is not moving on but is going back to that very same point.

I love Mayank-Priya bond…father-daughter bonds are always special! & they have the same taste too!

She told him? U left at a cliffhanger…thank god, I read them together.

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Part 8

-I liked how u handled the whole Nupur-Mayank convo @ the beginning. U portrayed their emotions and the dialogues were simple yet powerful….and how u brought back the dialogues from part 1.

 

So Mayank knows now? So far..I really didn't feel sorry for him at all but this part made me feel a bit sorry for him but one can't forgive the kind of thing he did. U described his feeling well….first making the connection and then remembering Priya and smiling…then remembering Nupur again, then deciding to confess….and then last minute distraction…I really hope that mayank will come clean with the truth but seeing the last part, it seems like he won't tell her…Looking forward to the next part.

 



 



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Posted: 08 January 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged
mehak mein ne saray parts ab parhay a bit slowD'oh
tujey tou pata tha kay mein yahan nae thiLOL
awesom yaar ti tou chupa rustam nikliLOL
btw good work yaarHug
aur ab pm kar diya karna i'll readBig smile

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amazing update mehak.....again u have stopped at such a crucial juncture.........so finally mayank knows the truth .......... now i just hope he doesnt lie to nupur...........nupur has already started trusting nd loving him .........now when ll she come to know the person who ruined her life was none other than mayank then again she ll be shattered ...........cant wait to read the next part .........do continue soon ..loved it lots......

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Mehak..........what an updateClap

how did Nupur say everything to Mayank so easily...i was really surprisedShocked

and finally Mayank realizes that he shud repent.........
waiting for next updateBig smile

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