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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 31)

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
mehak kahan gayiii??aur kabtak wait karwaigi??Unhappy

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Ravjot-


Ravjot: I love how we got her to make her own siggyROFL
 
Mimi: Weren't you incharge of that?ROFL
 
Ravjot: OopsROFL
 
Fatima: Ravz sucksSmile Anyway since we're on the topic of creativity, lets announce another creative award. How about...best fanfic writer?
 
Mimi: I love FanficsShocked
 
Ravjot: SameShocked And I love writers who actually finish writing one too
 
Mimi: Cuz it's pretty darn hard to updateROFL
 
Fatima: Why how many of you guys completed?
 
Mimi: I finished oneBig smile
 
Ravjot: I finished noneBig smileROFL
 
Fatima: Kaamchors. Anyway, best fanfic writer award goes to....-Mehak
 
 


THANK U ALL...

Kinza Arshad is honored ...


i really didn't expected that i would get this one day..
.thank u..

God bless u all...

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged

PART 7:


Mayank and nupur withdrew their hands, smiling but both of them felt some kind of a strange feeling, which was not possible to comprehend in words...

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their heart was adamant that their was something which was there, but they decided to over look it..they decided to ignore

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stop it mayank!..aisaey tu pagal ho jaye ga!..pechely 8 saal se tu haer larki main us ki ankhon ko dhoondh raha hai..plz stop it, nupur ka us se kia taluq hai..plz stop..

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plz nupur, khud ko sanbhalo..tumhara past sari duniya ka qassor nahi hai, mayank thek kehta hai k aisay tu kaam affect hoga...plz control urself..tum pori duniya ko saza nahi de sakti..

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they started to live in a trance, again and again ignoring their heart, living in an allusion that everything is normal.

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M..nupur..

Nupur was working on the survey forms when mayank's voice made her lift her eyes,

N..yes..

M..ahh..wo..highlighter pass karna plz..

N..sure..


she gave him the pen and mayank couldn't help praising her..

M..ur eyes are beautiful nupur..

fora moment was shocked, but she smiled

N..and ur smile is beautiful..especially the dimples..


Both of them broke into a giggle, finally happy that they had behaved liked normal people

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but the binding factor was always their daughter..

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N..umm..mayank..aj mujhe jali jana hai..kal priya ka exam hai tu mujhe...

M..haan haan ofcourse..plz, ye sab tu hota rahe ga..tum jao..

N..mujhe drafts de do, main ghr pe..

M..plz nupur, priya ka exam ziyada important hai..plz tum jao..aur ye..

he took out a paper and wrote all the best on it..and gave it to nupur..

M..ye meri taraf se..

nupur smiled and went away, whereas mayank made a silent prayer for priya.

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apart from their child, their own heart was also melting..

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M..i think Montessori classrooms ko kisi maze k from main hona chiye..children should look forward going to the classrooms, aur main..


he turned, and saw nupur staring at him, he was shocked..

M..nupur..

N..umm..haan..wo..


she looked her and there to avoid awkwardness, and mayank couldn't help blushing..

M..main repeat kar deta hon..

leaving nupur's cheeks pink..

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first time in 8 years they thought that
may be....
.just may be..they could move on


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mujhe lagta hai nupur aur husband main separation ho gai hai..priya ne bhi kabhi baat nahi ki..but i wonder nupur ko kaun chor k jaye ga..aur priya jaise beti se kaun alag rehna chahe ga..i pity that person..

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america main parhta tha tu girl friends tu hon gi..


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they were leaving the past behind..

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mehta...kia baat hai mayank..tum ne tu khush rehna shoro kar diya hai..

mayank took help of his mobile to hide his blsh..

M..mehta sir ap kabhi serious bhi hotey hain..

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P..maa aj kal tum mujhe bht pyari lagti ho..

Nupur pulled her to her lap..

N..acha g..wo ku?..

she kissed her cheek..

P..ku k tum khush rehti ho..

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but the past pulled them back..!!

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P..maa barish ho rahi hai..ab hum ghr kaise jaye gey..

N..beta taxi le len gey..

M..aur agr driver hazir ho tu?..


both of them turned and mayank was standing there holding keys in his hands..and priya ran towards him..

P..mayank sir..

mayank picked her in hia arms..

M..ku priya..main ap ko ghr chor sakta hon?..

P..ofcourse..

N..nahi mayank..its ok..


P..ku maa?..

M..main batata hon..actually nupur nahi chahti k main ap k ghr aaon..

P..huh?..what?.

N..huh?..main ne kab mana kiya?..

M..man nahi kiya tu invite bhi tu nai kiya..ku priya?..

P..haan..how rude maa?..

N..arey!..acha thek hai..Mr Sharma will u plz have lunch with us today..

mayank and priya started laughing..

M..sure..

three of them went to nupur's house and nupur was opening the door and priya was constantly speaking..

P..sir main ap ko apna doll house dikhaon gi, aur apna kamra, aur apna teddy aur..

N,..priya stop...mayank pata nahi..ye kabhi aisye nahi krti hai..pata nahi tumhare sath ku..

M..its ok nupur..after all we are friends..

N..haan wo tu hai..

M..maiin apni aur priya ki baat kar raha tha..


mayank winked at priya who started laughing..

N..very funny..chalo ander..

they moved inside and priya dragged mayank into her room and nupur went to the kitchen...unable to drag mayank out of her thoughts....mayank was the only person how had managed to make his place in their family..he was the one genuinely who cared for her daughter..she had started trusting and respecting him..

she went to the room..

N..chalo lunch..

M..bus ik minute..priya ka akhri doll house reh gaya hai..wo dekh k atey hain.

Nupru was left totally numb to react..she was seeing both of them playing and giggling..it seemd as if priya was..his daugher..she left the rrom, without saying anything, her tears were choking her voice..

they both came to the dining table and again they both were talking and nupur was staring at them..

M..mujhe tu gjar halwa bht pasnd hai,..

P..mujhe bi,per mujhe bhindi bilkul psnd nahi hai..

M..mujhe bhi..


nupur had never seen priya s happy before, her heart was unintentionally flowing for mayank..

M...ok ab main cahlta hon..


Nupur was again quet, he hugged priya and left, he also said her something, but she was just to lost to hear him..she came to sense after her left..

it was still raining..

priya slept for her afternoon nap and nupur was standing by the backyard observing the drops of rain, thinking what if..mayank was in in their life..what if..the door bell broke her thoughts..she went their and it was mayank..she couldn't believe that God actually listened...

M..wo shiyed main an cell phone bhol gaya hoon..

he smiled and entered and picked his phone from the table..

M..ok..main..

he was about to leave, but she wanted him to stay..

N..umm..wo..chai piyo gey..


Mayank couldnt avoid the twinkle in her eys, he had to say a yes..

M..ok..priya so rahi hai?..

N..haan..drawing room main betho..


she herself was amazed at her impulsive reaction, she took the tea in in the drawing room .

they were having tea in silence when mayank spoke up..

M..nupur kuch personal poch sakta hon..

N..ofcourse..

M...priay apne dad k bare main baat nhai karti hai..


finally mayank had managed to ask what was going in his mind for so long...he thought that they had become good friends, he could ask..but seeing nupur's reaction he thought he was wrong..nupur dropped the biscuit in her hand.and tears started forming in her eyes..

M..dekho mupur.main ne bus..

she closed her eyes..tears sqeezing out of them..

he came bit close to her and he was about to place his hand on her shoulder

M..tumhare husband..

N..i was raped..



Edited by -Mehak - 06 January 2011 at 10:48am

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:41am | IP Logged
ResBig smile

Sorry cant comment much Mehak...you understand im sureLOLLOL

Loved the fact that MayUr are getting closer...but now i wana see Mayank's reaction after these words of Nupur's...will he realise she was the one???


Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 06 January 2011 at 4:09pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Shocked nupur told mayank abt being raped
awesome part
mayur n priys scene was soooooooooo cute
thnx for pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged
wowwwwwwwwwww mehak awesome loved it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:55am | IP Logged
it is very very very very nice update.......
now mayank will knw priya is his daughter......
waiting 4 nxt part

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:03am | IP Logged
HEY congo!!!!!!!!!
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abt d update 
FREEK ! BANG ON !

waiting for the next.........

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