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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 23)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:29am | IP Logged
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awesome part mehak
liked mayank and priya's convo
nupur and priya's part was also sweet.the way nupur take care priya Smile
ending was super duper----mayank and nupur walking towards their child.hope mayank will realize that it is his child.
Waiting to see nupur's reaction

Edited by .rumki. - 04 January 2011 at 10:49am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:35am | IP Logged
Mayank and nupur..walking towards ..their child...Clap Clap Clap
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!
and Mayank feelings towards Priya and Nupur!!!!!!!!
toooo goooooooooooddddd!!!!!!!!!
Smile Smile
beautifully writn kinza!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Big smile
Priya is sooo cute and her mom and dad to bht he aala!!!!!
outstanding kinza!!!!!!
ths is ur best story soo far!!!!!!!!!!! Smile
p.s. hmen kb check karwa rahe ho apne cooking???? Wink Wink 10th jan is ur deadline girl!!!! LOL wese aunty ka plan kr rahe hain???? plz waqt se bata dena!!!!!! LOL LOL do u folow me???


Edited by mulan. - 04 January 2011 at 10:58am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Hmm so Mayank finally met his daughter...and he feels a connection to her which he cant figure outBig smile

He has a feeling he has seen those eyes somewhere but whenever he tries to think of it, Nupur interrupts with something....though i hope he realises soon....

I loved his short convo with his daughter and his feeling of happiness on seeing Nupur smileBig smileBig smile And wow, for the first time in 8 years he slept without pills....because he was thinking of Priya...is this an indication that Priya will be the cause of the peace between her parents???Big smileBig smile

And Nupur, for some reason unknown to her, doesnt wish to discuss Mayank with her daughter....

Everyone is going through a havoc of emotions in this story...diferent ones, at that.....

Loved the end, where both Mayank and Nupur are walking towards Priya....waiting to see the conversation that takes place nextBig smileBig smile

And congratulations on starting cooking lessons officially dearBig smileBig smile


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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:53am | IP Logged
forgot to congrate u as ur learning cooking
all the best
it is 1st time that i came to know ur name is kinza also Big smile

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
recheck my coment!!!!!!! :p :p

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
mind blowing update mehak plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
they are walking and my heartbeat is increasing... update the next part fast...
 
very nice update

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