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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 21)

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Awesome update meahk
i feel really sad for NUPUR.
pata nehi kya hoga jab nups ko pata chal jayegi ki wo insaan mayank tha.


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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Mehak.Part 4 was very well writtenClap
u told it was not satisfying  for u.........but it was perfect i thoughtBig smile

u're going great.......keep writing such fab updatesBig smile

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
mehak do updateeeee

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
kinzu(Big smileLOL)update re...........waiting!Big smileLOLLOLWinkLOLLOLLOL

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 04 January 2011 at 9:28am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:39am | IP Logged
i am really sorry for the delay people..actually today KINZA ARSHAD formally started to learn cooking...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..

thank u all for the appreciation..Hug


PART 5:


Mayank was still standing by the window of the office when someone knocked on the door, he was still looking outside ..

may i come in sir.

He turned immediately..

A small girl dressed in school uniform was standing at the office door, her hair tied in two pony tails and and her school bag was on her shoulders..a sweet  innocent voice, mayank just couldn't help smiling..

the girl took a few steps forward..

sir was Miss Nupur Bhushan here?

Her voice was even sweeter than her innocent face..

M..she was here a few minutes ago, but she has left..


Mayank observed a disappointing expression on her face, but she still forced a smile..

Ok ..thank u sir..

She turned towards the door..

M..ik minute..

The girl stopped and turned..mayank couldn't deny the attachment his heart was signaling,.he walked towards her and on reaching near he sat down on his knees,  to come on an eye-contact with the girl..

M..ap ka naam kia hai beta?.

This time the girl smiled fully..

Priya...

Mayank's heart was awwwing at her sweet innocent smile..

M..bht pyara naam hai...bilkul ap jaisa..


He gently patted her cheek..

P..thank u sir..


M..u are welcome..


P..sir can i leave..

Suddenly mayank's smile vanished..

M..ummm..yes ..sure..

He got up from his knees

P..thank u sir..

She left the office, melting mayank's heart completely.

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Priya had looked for nupur in the staffroom and now even in the office, everyday she used to  meet her in the staffroom at off time, but today she was not there..

P..maa kahan chali gayi hai..

She was sitting on the bench and when she sensed her mother, nupur had placed her hands on her eyes..

P.maa..

She jumped, and smiling fully..

N..haan g!..sorry bache..main aj late ho gai na..

Nupur held her ears as a gesture of apology..priya seeing this stood on the bench as to come on nupur's level..

P..maa plz sorry mat kaha karo..

Priya held nupur's hand and kissed them..nupur's eyes got teary, no matter what problems she faced, she was thankful to God that she had an angel in her life.

P..maa ghr chalen?..

N..ummm..haan..


Priya was standing on the bench and nupur picked her up, and she was about to loose her balance..

P..maa gir jao gi..kia kar rahi ho?..

Nupur held her properly maintaining her balance..

N..nahi giro gi..

She started walking ..

P..maa plz neche utaro na..meri friends dekh rahin hain

Nupur was giggling

N..tu kia hua?..

Now they were on the road and priya started enjoying  that her mother was carrying her up.
They reached home and after the normal routine they both were lying down to sleep priya asked.

P..maa hamare school main naye sir aye hain?..

N..nahi..ku?..

P..jab main office main tumhara pochne gayi na tu ik naye sir they wahan..


Nupur understood that she was talking about mayank..

N..wo sir nahi hain..wo architect hain,,school renovate ho rah hai..

P..maa lekin..

N..priya so jao..


Priya closed her eyes after sensing the irritation in nupur's voice..and nupur didn't want to talk abt mayank..and she couldn't figure out the reason.

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For the first time in 8 years mayank slept without sleeping pills, remembering the smile of that little girl.

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Next morning, nupur knocked but mayank was so busy writing that he didn't notice.she knocked second time again he was not listening..this time she knocked vigorously and mayank lifted his eyes..

M..oh,.i am so sorry..mian ne notice nahi kiya...plz come in..

He stood up form his seat and nupur again got irritated by his sorry...

M..plz sit..

Nupur sat down ans mayank took the seat opposite her..

M..good morning..ap..

N..aj drawings hain ap k pass?..

Mayank's smile vanished..

M...umm..hain..per pehle mujhe students ka opinion chaiye..unhain school ki building kaisi lagti hai, kaunsa corner un ka favorite hai, kan sa part hai jo wo change nahi karna chate, kaunsa karna chate hain..i need a general survey..,after all school main parhna tu un ko hai..so it should be according to them..

N...wow!..great idea..

And mayank sharma witnessed something, which made his heart skip a beat..he saw her smile..

N..great..main survey kar lon gi..

Sh saw a glimpse of happiness on her face, but her eyes..what was with them..he had seen..

N..ab main jaon.

Again nupur's disturbed his thoughts.

M..ummm..y..yes..

She left leaving mayank with her another expression, her smile...

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It was almost afternoon and he was making rough drafts a when he saw children playing through the window..suddenly he was reminded of that girl..

M..recess hai..shayed wo bachi bahir mil jaye..

He came out of his office and started observing children in the play ground, when his eyes saw priya...she was slitting in a corner, reading a book..mayank's heart was again filled with warmth he felt so happy, as if finding something very precious.. he started walking towards her..

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N..priya k wroksheets meri file main kaise reh gayi?..usey de ati hon..nahi u pereshan ho jaye gi..wasie bhi abhi recess hai

and she also started walking towards the   ground..

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Mayank and nupur..walking towards ..their child...


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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:41am | IP Logged
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i m first coz i made res before u pmed Approve..LOL(thnk  god i m not late)LOL

wowww  kinza arshad started to learn cooking hun Wink..gud gud keep it up LOL

i  just came to read ur update only....Wink

and update was fab  as alwayss....Clap

..loved mayank and  priya's convo it was soo  cuteee..

mayank  slept without sleeping pills...

thinking about that smile of her daughter...hope he get to know soonBig smile

awwww  nupur and priya's convo..

.i loved the ruthna manana  of mom and daughter..was so cuteeeDay Dreaming

and  mayank and nupur  walking towards their child....

dunno whatz gonna happend in  next update.

will be waiting for ur next update...thnx alot 4 pm Hug


Edited by -Arti4ever- - 04 January 2011 at 9:55am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:42am | IP Logged

mehak...EmbarrassedSmile

this part was cute.......seriously priya n mayuz meetin was so cute.....n d way u described priya na....she looked so adorableEmbarrassedLOL
n nupur carrying her till home....awwwww
this part so sweet....
but then i keep thinkin wat will happen wen she'll cum to knw d truth.....m so curious...LOLbut for now....i really liked this part.....
the connection mayu feels wid priya...........awwwww.......but then......
anyways do cont soon haan........
i hv bcum really curious n restless to read furtherBig smileLOL......
n congoz re...cookin n all......great goinWinkBig smileEmbarrassedLOL
n  needless to say re......u wote really really wellEmbarrassedHeartLOL
 
 
tc!Smile


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 04 January 2011 at 10:01am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
very nice update..waiting for next...whn nupur gonna c him with her daughter

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