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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 18)

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 11:19am | IP Logged
Mehakkk...why such a short update?????OuchOuchOuch


OMG Mayank was about to figure out her eyes....but he did not....and she also did not recognise him or anything....

Now they will be working together..and i wonder how they will realise that they were the ones 8 years ago....who will realise first....though i feel it will be Mayank who will realise first...considering her eyes have haunted him for the past 8 years and all...and without recognising her, he realises she wont forgive anyone...and he realises that she wasnt like this before but something caused her to be like this....im just soooo curious to know how he will gain her forgiveness...Gosh Mehak...update soon...make it 2 updates a day, if you canLOLLOLLOL

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
Wow.. This FF is sure the show stealer for suspense..

Part 3...
i LOVED IT.. Tongue
Poor Nups.. she's been throught a lot..Ouch
I liked the way you showed their 8years and esp Nups. Suffering
Making me want Mayank to suffer more even though its clear he has felt guilt over the years..

Part 4...
SO short...
I feel so sad.. for Nups.. She is in so much pain..CryCry
I would too hate the word SORRY..Confused
GOSH.. ITS STARTING TO ANNOY ME WHEN Mayank says SORRY..Angry
Thats becoz i know what he did...
Overall very nice part..Big smile
I can't wait to read more...Day Dreaming


THANKS FOR PM!!!Hug

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:20pm | IP Logged
mehak update to bohot short tha Ouch but it contained many unsaid feelings.
none of them recognized till now Shocked
loving ur twist Big smile
they r going to work 2gether thats gr8.eagerly waiting to know who recognize 1st.
Update soon.as u know tumhara ff ka trp bohot high LOL Wink

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
Short one but still the Great one
Feeling so sorry for nups
hope soon they will recognize each other
Thanks for pm dear

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
KInza.. tht was such a heart wrenching update... their hearts must be aching so much.. and specially Nupur.. being a girl, I cannot imagine, what pain she must have undergone..
 
and for the Mayank, the pang of guilt is more than enuf to kill him....
 
Update fast.. I want to see what punishment Mayank gets for this.. and promise me that.. after this FF.. you will write something light, something similar to Mayank and Nupur.. Its just that I cant imagine Mayank as a rapist.. beyond my imagination..

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
Nice update Mehak......2nd part was good.....the way u merged their lives far away.......it was niceClap

hope everything will be fine for Nupur!!!!Ouch

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Brilliant update Mehak. Waiting for the next part.

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