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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 14)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
wowww mehak i just read part 2 and 3 and they both are mind blowing loved them alot plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
wonderful ff mehakClap
i think u r the 1st one to show mayamk in totally a different characterLOL
it shows how one small mistake can ruin ur entire life...mayank even after having so much of sucess still cant leave a happy life...
i really feel sad for nupur.......how she must have gone through this phase of her life
no girl will forgive such a person....but  if he is really guilty then i think she should forgive himApprove
once again  superb concept dearSmile





Edited by rashmirao1991 - 02 January 2011 at 10:25pm

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
wow Mehak..awesome part!!
u were describing Mayur's feelings vividly...
I want Mayank to be tortured ...he shudnt be forgiven so easily by Nupur...
He shud understand the pain she went thrugh ...
pls pm me wen u update the next tym...

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
edited com on pg 11

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 12:47am | IP Logged
Another great part! It gave us a lot of background info, I was wondering about. I wanted to know Nupur's reaction on knowing her pregnancy. Also, u really showed how much Mayank regretted his own actions.
 
She is working in the same place? Poor girl. I mean, how painful it must be to work in a place where u were tortured mercilessly.
 
I'm waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 03 January 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
ohh mehek....u don't know how much m i involved with your story....i have become just a fan of you....u don't know how long i waited for this exact story...u created this...and i started to live this

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mehak........i just finshed reading all the three parts.......nd the way i am feeling right now i just cant describe it.....first of all its totally shocking to see mayank like this as a rapist....i am really disgusted with him .....poor nupur my heart goes out to her......i feel terrible for her........nd this issue is such a sensitive one nd the you have written it beautifully.........very well written ...the way u have interconnected everything .......it was fab............i am looking forward to read the next part.......wat ll happen when nupur comes to know dat he is ther person who ruined her life........he is priya's father ..........do continue soon..........

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