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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ (Page 11)

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
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yaayy yipieeee  me first after so longShocked..LOL

i m commenting here  first time   Big smile

i loved the concept of ur fan fic  !!

ur first part horrified me OMGG Shocked

mayank in a very diff role....in first part mayank rapist Shocked

i never expected mayank in this role LOL in 2nd part...

 OMGG nupur was pregnant nd  she gave birth to a girl  she was in school naa Shocked

back to recent update...it was fab mehaku Clap

 this part was amazing....very touching 

and nupur in school remembering what happened with her...

eagerly waiting for next part Big smile....thnx alot 4 d pm.....Hug


Edited by jainypatel - 02 January 2011 at 9:06am

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u knw readin ur ff my heartbeats are at a peak..............lolLOL

again poor nupur seriously.......she has suffered so so so much.........d disgust d hatred d terror she feels...omg.....Confused
but m happy atleast her parents supported her n let her giv birth to her child....thr r parents who dont even support their daughters aise time pe..........
 
anyways , d way ur unfoldin everything..........
but somehow can nvr forgiv mayank.....n i hope hez punished.....Big smilei knw hez sufferin from 8years but then........Ouch
waitin for d nxt part.......!!now that they hav come face to face.......really wanna knw wat happens nxt.....


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 02 January 2011 at 9:24am

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
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wow mehak what a update yar
u have described abt their past beautifully
they came face to face----and u stopped it hear.update soonnnnnn Smile

Edited by .rumki. - 02 January 2011 at 11:51pm

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Posted: 02 January 2011 at 8:50am | IP Logged
o it;s fabuloussssssssss

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wow excited to know mayur mein aage kya hoga 
mehak luv u for this part ........:)

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wonderful update.............!

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OMG Mehak...they have come face to face now....im eager to see whether they recognise each other....they are connected to the extent that the day he was arriving, she felt her hatred for him more than ever......i loved the way you inter-connect their parts......it shows the connection between them very clearly......

But i wonder how Nupur will ever forgive Mayank for what he did...because of him she has faced so many troubles....no fault of hers yet she went through so much,,and Mayank is also indirectly the cause of Nupur's father's death.....

Now im soooo eager to see what happens next...yaar why did you leave it at a cliffhanger......il keep wondering how the story will shape up now...

And yeah dear....One more thing...you are getting better and better as the stories and days go byBig smile I am eager to see how you handle this story since it is a very sensitive issue....i am sure though that you will exceed expectations of your readersBig smileBig smile

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