MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 23

hi mehak was busy tht's why sorry for late comment.....i really love moyank and priya convo....i hv falle in love wit your writing style....go ahead dear

mehak .......i just finished reading both the updates.............part 5 nd 6...........both were fab very beautifully written ........... mayank nd priya's convo it was soooo sweet ......... cant wait to read the next part do continue soon.........

Awesome! I liked Priya-Mayank covo. Like I said earlier, she is a such a sweet child.

oye mehak paajee😆

mehak kahan gayiii??aur kabtak wait karwaigi??😔

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Ravjot: I love how we got her to make her own siggy🤣

 

Mimi: Weren't you incharge of that?🤣

 

Ravjot: Oops🤣

 

Fatima: Ravz sucks😊 Anyway since we're on the topic of creativity, lets announce another creative award. How about...best fanfic writer?

 

Mimi: I love Fanfics😲

 

Ravjot: Same😲 And I love writers who actually finish writing one too

 

Mimi: Cuz it's pretty darn hard to update🤣

 

Fatima: Why how many of you guys completed?

 

Mimi: I finished one😃

 

Ravjot: I finished none😃🤣

 

Fatima: Kaamchors. Anyway, best fanfic writer award goes to....-Mehak

 

 

PART 7:

Mayank and nupur withdrew their hands, smiling but both of them felt some kind of a strange feeling, which was not possible to comprehend in words...








M..nupur..

Nupur was working on the survey forms when mayank's voice made her lift her eyes,

N..yes..

M..ahh..wo..highlighter pass karna plz..

N..sure..

she gave him the pen and mayank couldn't help praising her..

M..ur eyes are beautiful nupur..

fora moment was shocked, but she smiled

N..and ur smile is beautiful..especially the dimples..

Both of them broke into a giggle, finally happy that they had behaved liked normal people




N..umm..mayank..aj mujhe jali jana hai..kal priya ka exam hai tu mujhe...

M..haan haan ofcourse..plz, ye sab tu hota rahe ga..tum jao..

N..mujhe drafts de do, main ghr pe..

M..plz nupur, priya ka exam ziyada important hai..plz tum jao..aur ye..

he took out a paper and wrote all the best on it..and gave it to nupur..

M..ye meri taraf se..

nupur smiled and went away, whereas mayank made a silent prayer for priya.




M..i think Montessori classrooms ko kisi maze k from main hona chiye..children should look forward going to the classrooms, aur main..

he turned, and saw nupur staring at him, he was shocked..

M..nupur..

N..umm..haan..wo..

she looked her and there to avoid awkwardness, and mayank couldn't help blushing..

M..main repeat kar deta hon..

leaving nupur's cheeks pink..



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mehta...kia baat hai mayank..tum ne tu khush rehna shoro kar diya hai..

mayank took help of his mobile to hide his blsh..

M..mehta sir ap kabhi serious bhi hotey hain..


P..maa aj kal tum mujhe bht pyari lagti ho..

Nupur pulled her to her lap..

N..acha g..wo ku?..

she kissed her cheek..

P..ku k tum khush rehti ho..




P..maa barish ho rahi hai..ab hum ghr kaise jaye gey..

N..beta taxi le len gey..

M..aur agr driver hazir ho tu?..

both of them turned and mayank was standing there holding keys in his hands..and priya ran towards him..

P..mayank sir..

mayank picked her in hia arms..

M..ku priya..main ap ko ghr chor sakta hon?..

P..ofcourse..

N..nahi mayank..its ok..

P..ku maa?..

M..main batata hon..actually nupur nahi chahti k main ap k ghr aaon..

P..huh?..what?.

N..huh?..main ne kab mana kiya?..

M..man nahi kiya tu invite bhi tu nai kiya..ku priya?..

P..haan..how rude maa?..

N..arey!..acha thek hai..Mr Sharma will u plz have lunch with us today..

mayank and priya started laughing..

M..sure..

three of them went to nupur's house and nupur was opening the door and priya was constantly speaking..

P..sir main ap ko apna doll house dikhaon gi, aur apna kamra, aur apna teddy aur..

N,..priya stop...mayank pata nahi..ye kabhi aisye nahi krti hai..pata nahi tumhare sath ku..

M..its ok nupur..after all we are friends..

N..haan wo tu hai..

M..maiin apni aur priya ki baat kar raha tha..

mayank winked at priya who started laughing..

N..very funny..chalo ander..

they moved inside and priya dragged mayank into her room and nupur went to the kitchen...unable to drag mayank out of her thoughts....mayank was the only person how had managed to make his place in their family..he was the one genuinely who cared for her daughter..she had started trusting and respecting him..

she went to the room..

N..chalo lunch..

M..bus ik minute..priya ka akhri doll house reh gaya hai..wo dekh k atey hain.

Nupru was left totally numb to react..she was seeing both of them playing and giggling..it seemd as if priya was..his daugher..she left the rrom, without saying anything, her tears were choking her voice..

they both came to the dining table and again they both were talking and nupur was staring at them..

M..mujhe tu gjar halwa bht pasnd hai,..

P..mujhe bi,per mujhe bhindi bilkul psnd nahi hai..

M..mujhe bhi..

nupur had never seen priya s happy before, her heart was unintentionally flowing for mayank..

M...ok ab main cahlta hon..

Nupur was again quet, he hugged priya and left, he also said her something, but she was just to lost to hear him..she came to sense after her left..

it was still raining..

priya slept for her afternoon nap and nupur was standing by the backyard observing the drops of rain, thinking what if..mayank was in in their life..what if..the door bell broke her thoughts..she went their and it was mayank..she couldn't believe that God actually listened...

M..wo shiyed main an cell phone bhol gaya hoon..

he smiled and entered and picked his phone from the table..

M..ok..main..

he was about to leave, but she wanted him to stay..

N..umm..wo..chai piyo gey..

Mayank couldnt avoid the twinkle in her eys, he had to say a yes..

M..ok..priya so rahi hai?..

N..haan..drawing room main betho..

she herself was amazed at her impulsive reaction, she took the tea in in the drawing room .

they were having tea in silence when mayank spoke up..

M..nupur kuch personal poch sakta hon..

N..ofcourse..

M...priay apne dad k bare main baat nhai karti hai..

finally mayank had managed to ask what was going in his mind for so long...he thought that they had become good friends, he could ask..but seeing nupur's reaction he thought he was wrong..nupur dropped the biscuit in her hand.and tears started forming in her eyes..

M..dekho mupur.main ne bus..

she closed her eyes..tears sqeezing out of them..

he came bit close to her and he was about to place his hand on her shoulder

M..tumhare husband..

N..i was raped..
Edited by -Mehak - 13 years ago

Res😃

Sorry cant comment much Mehak...you understand im sure😆😆

Loved the fact that MayUr are getting closer...but now i wana see Mayank's reaction after these words of Nupur's...will he realise she was the one???
Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 13 years ago

😲 nupur told mayank abt being raped
awesome part
mayur n priys scene was soooooooooo cute
thnx for pm

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cont soon

thx alot for the pm