MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Mehak. waiting for the next part. which dish did you cook? how was the first lesson?๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi

nice part๐Ÿ˜Š
i love priya in ur ff๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mehak...........great update....๐Ÿ‘............ur FF is getting more interesting by day๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ
update soon haan.............๐Ÿ˜†

Mayank n Priya's meeting was cute too๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope mayank finds out soon, but i doubt it. He'll probably know shes nupur's daughter but wont figure out shes his yet..
as usual lovely update๐Ÿ‘keep up the great work๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
mehak aka kinza๐Ÿ˜›....i am really getting hooked 2 the story....loved the part where nupur carried priya nd she was all like..."maa mere dost dekh rahe hai"....haha....waiting for ur next update๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
mehak kitna amazing part hai 
hmmmmmmmm so priya mi vayegi mayur ko ....... :)
next part jaldi haan !!!!!!

Posted: 13 years ago
really sweet updates mehak๐Ÿ˜›

i thought to hate mayank in this ff- but the way u are portraying the beautiful bond btw father & daughter.......i can't stop awwwing at him๐Ÿ˜†

seriously there is so much hurt & sadness in this ff but very heart-touching

looking forward to mayur meeting & all the best for ur cooking lessons & people who taste ur cooking๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†



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Posted: 13 years ago

sorry for the late comment!

very interesting concept
all the parts r mindblowing ๐Ÿ‘
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
nd thnx for the pm ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanxxx 4 d pm
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another awesome part! I loved Mayank-Priya interaction...Mayank fell in love with his daughter already. Priya seems like a sweet child.
 
Nupur-Priya relationship is adorable..how she carried her home. Priya understands her mum so much to know when to stop the questions.
 
Though I hate Mayank for what he had done...I can't help but like how he was admiring her smile.
 
Both are going towards their child...wonder what nupur's reaction would be. Looking fwd to the next part.
 
U started cooking?Good job..Hope u have a better time with it than me. I love baking but cooking ...not so much.