MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 18

recheck my coment!!!!!!! :p :p

mind blowing update mehak plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm

It was sweet to see Mayank connect with his daughter, but somehow the mere image of the horrible past does not escape my mind and i'm made to think of it over and over again whenever you mention mayank. Anyway he seems like a loyal worker...and he kinda of made nupur smile so i give him that but otherwise theres still venom in my heart for him.

Nupur and Priya moment was adorable. this mother and daughter rock!

Cinderella awsome update.

Sajjal

PS: you started to learn to cook today, how wonderful.😛

Edited by -Sajjal- - 13 years ago

they are walking and my heartbeat is increasing... update the next part fast...

Missed ur ffs so much...Got fever so culdnt come here...I know its late but congrats for the new ff and wish u a brand new year with full of happiness...
This ff is very diff from ur other ones...And even though mayank is realized his mistake i cant take his side and prefer him...He ruined not only the girl's life also her full family...He commited the biggest sin and i hate him here for this...Beautifully written...U portrayed nupur's pain so beautifully that i literally had tears in my eyes...
Loved this ff and thnx for writing on such a realistic topic...
Im lil inactive these days so may be culdnt comment in every part but u keep pming me...I love reading ur ffs and will surely comment whenever i come here...

Hi Kinza So Lovely part 

i forgot to ask, how was your cooking class? kab aaoon khane pe?

very nicely written!....i know i should hate mayank for what he did but somehow i want things to turn okay and reading how he interacted with his daughter made me smile.....i guess its cuz i love mayank in the show so much that its hard to hate him in the fanfics haha even though the character mayank is different in your fanfics......naina

Fantastic update Mehak. Loved the meeting between Mayank and Priya. Can't wait for the next part. Thanks for the pm.

mehak beautiful update...............i want to know what happens next................this is getting interesting day by day.........................mehak i want mayank to suffer too..............he shouldnt be easily forgiven