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MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
mehak kahan gayi???kab karegi yar update??jaan nikal rahe hai mere....yar is time give a large update
Edited by chandraarunita - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Another great part!! I really thought Mayank would figure out who Nupur was from her eyes but I guess the fact that he is not fully sure makes the story more interesting..
 
U have done a wonderful job portraying Nupur's character and how much the event 8 years ago had affected her...poor girl! Is she going to fall in love with him before she realizes who he is? I feel sorry for her if that is the case. I mean she has already gone thru so much.
 
Convo between Mayur was nice...very in character.
 
Looking forward to read the next part!
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
mehak beautiful part !!!!
but mayur in so much pain ..............😔 
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update mehak.......cant wait to read the next part........very beautifully written.
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Posted: 13 years ago
mehakuuuuuuuuu  first of all  why such a choto motu update😒

i thought that he'll will recognize her  ..but they will be doing project together

looking forward to the updates..when  both will  remember...

anywz  i'll  also give chotu sa comment😆 for ur chota sa update😉(jk)

thnx alot 4 pm....keep pming 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
i'm really sorry mahek.. 4 readin d updates so late!
just read d part 1

gosh... mahek...
man.. meri bolti bandh kar di..
such an beautiful concept!!!
* bows my head in front of u*
terrific re!

Edited by -SupriyaluvsMN- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2...
such an irony..
one ws gettin soo much & d other... ws sufferin 4 each & evrythng!
bravo... wt an writin mahek!
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Posted: 13 years ago
eekkksss..
part 3... ws awesum mahek!
mayur .. wil meet  now... ab kya hoga?
mummy.. i'm soo scared of d consequense now!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww... part 4 ws sooo heartwrenchin!
my poor nups! feelin soo bad 4 her!
luvd it re!

mahek.. ek baat bata... i'm bit confusd... does mayank now she's d same gal .. becoz.. d last lyn is confusin me more now!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Mehak read part 3 ..great update👏
but Nupz alone wid child n none parents that's horrible