MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 10

Brilliant update Mehak but you stopped at such a crucial point. Mayank and Nupur have come face to face. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Thanks for the pm.

amazing part.
it was sad knowing the pain nupur went through..
waiting to read wht happens next
cont soon :)

amazingly written...................it must have been the toughest one to write...........i could actually feel nupur's pain..............i dont want her to forgive mayank😡🤢
continue soon.....................i want to read the next update now😆

Superb dear

Wait I think nupur will fall for him without realizing he's the rapist 😲
Lovely update as usual 👏

i read it first time but i must say you are fantabilous writer .

.feeling extremely bad for nupur

Nice to sese Nupurs mother support her but her father died. Mayank has caused someone this much harm no wonder he is a rock now.Sometimes our life leads us to commit such acts that can never be repented regardless of how much we gravel for forgivenesses.....but then again forgiveness is the key to moving on...

Please don't make Nupur fall in love with him...before knowing he was the one who did the wrong deed. It would be a heart break for her. Poor girl has suffered so much already.

Cinderella your handling such an intense story beautifully.

Do continue soon.

Mehak..u started a new FF😃..Fabulously written..............👏

promising update,Mehak. waiting for the next part.

Wow....