Written update 12/31/2010 complete

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Posted: 13 years ago
It starts with announcer announcing the winner of race on podium,.... He says shravan win the race despite he has bike problems in start.... Haar ke jeetne waale ko Baazigar kahete hai... everyone is clapping... saanchi seems to be more happy...
First he called runner up ranbeer to collect trophy then he calls shravan to collect winner trophy everyone claps....
ranbeer look at shravan with jealousy
( he can only give looks.... MY pov)
shravan collect cheque and hold trophy in air... while looking at saanchi

At Jaiswal mansion
saanchi is praying...Till now I have only asked but today I have came to say you thanks,... Today you kept my trust...
Then Neetu comes and say to saanchi:- everyone is waiting downstairs for shravan welcome and u are here... Lets goo..
saanchi leaves...'

shravan is at door...with trophy and cheque ...
all ladies are there...
besides them happy pratap is standing...
shravan tries to step in dadi stops him..
shravan:- what happened now..
Dadi:- Aarti nahi karwani Neetu bring aarti plate.. My bittu has won biggest race of massourie...
Neetu brings thaali and gives it to saanchi..
saanchi do aarti of shravan...

Madhura:- Today you have came from front door with respect... I pray to god that u did not have to leave house never...
shravan :-arre maa..abb ko kisi ka baap bhi nahi nikaal sakta..
pratap looks at sharavan
shravan get serious and says now i not do anything that no one throw me out of house..
pratap smiles..
Dadi:- let him come inside..
Madhura:- come
shravan comes inside...
neeta:- when ur bike got stopped at start we were frightened..
dadi:- thats why i sent sacred thread through saanchi ..it has to effect...
neeta:- dont say anything shravan do u know dadi got afraid very much
dadi:- mein nahi I got afraid bcoz bike might not come over us not for shravan
everyone laugh
shravan:- there was nothing to be afraid... once shravan registered his name , jeet wahi ho gaye thi..
I let others go ahead otherwise race would have become boring
Madhura:- whatever u say all credit must go to saanchi...
dadi:- hmm why not saanchi gave jaadu ki jhappi and pappi on his cheek before start 
everyone smiles... saanchi get shy and run away
shravan goes behind her...
shravan enter his room finally
saanchi is hiding behind curtain shravan goes to curtain and talks in code language...
shravan then remove curtain amd hold saanchi hand
( so romantic)
saanchi:- someone will see us
shravan:- so what see this cheque... now we will live fearless...
no one can say anything now..
saanchi:- okay keep cheque down..
shravan:- it has two benifits one by giving this to papa conditions got fulfilled other hiding behind it we can romance also..
saanchi smiles ( what a lovely smile)
shravan:= i thought when papa gave me bike or sent me to holiday was happy days but it was his (pratap)
saanchi:- aaj yeh aapki khushi aapne kamaye hai
shravan:- No you are also behind it...
shravan tries to kiss her.. neetu enters and cough..
Neeta:- if milan ki bela has finished then come down papa has asked
shravan:- usne kahe woh wait kare abhi shravan romance kar rahe...
Neetu:- uff... Yesterday bheegi cat became lion today
shravanshows her cheque and says I have done so big hunting today
Neeta:- Teek hai jahapanah Jo hukhm mere aaka...
and she leaves..
shravan and saanchi lies on bed and talks... saanchi:- chale now..
shravban:- okay
they both come down and see everyone in serious mode...
shravan seeing them said says:- if you are not happy with my victory atleast dont be sad
Pratap:- giving look:- you call this victory...
shravan:- victory ko victory hi kahenge na ki jalebi
Pratap:- what proof u have..
shravan:- cheque I have..
neeta:- that cheque is fake..
pratap:- if you will take that big cheque to bank u will not get single penny
shravan:- that one is symbolic cheque papa i will get real cheque.. and you have seen me winning
Dadi starts laughing and says i cant stop my laugh for long
neeta:- we were kidding
everyone starts laughing
shravan:- papa aap
pratap:- you always use to give me chakma why i cant give u once,,,,
shravan:- yeah u can afterall u r my father
madhura:- keep quiet shravan
pratap:- let him speak today
shravan why tommorow i have to keep silence...
pratap:- chup nalayak.... hh sorry now icant call u nalayak my bahu proved that she was right and me wrong,,my son is too good...
shravan:- what papa when turn came to give something then u are just giving blessing,,,, saanchi should get big gift
pratap:- both of you got each other what can be bigger gift
shravan:- Baatein mat banao papa... atleast give one gift
PrataP;- i will give u so many gift that u will get tired taking them
neeta bring boxes of gifts and give to pratap
pratap gives first gift it was mobile
he make mock call and says saanchi how are you.. i called you just like that
neetu:- bekhwoof in this no sim
shravan:- bhabhi u will not understand... This ois network from one heart to other..
if you say yes i can give u and bro one connection
neetu:- chup
( lovely comic timing)
pratap gives second gift to saanchi a chain
pratap:- this one is old but on u it will look good
he gives bike key... shravan look at it emotionally
and take it..
Then he gives purse full of credit card and tell him to spend as much
shravan:- what u r saying to spent money
pratap:- i havent changed ,.. next gift is whatever u will spent u will have to earn more than that
he gives letter..
shravan read its juniour manager post at office..
shravan hesitate,,, but saanchi convince...
shravan:- I have to say thanks not for gift but for everything else
pratap:- nahi I need to say thanks you make me proud.. they both hug each other..

then ranbeer enters... and say wait one min...

pratap:- what r u saying ranbeer
shravan goes near to him and smells and say:- some burning smell is comming
ohh its comming from there
ranbeer:-if you are saying bcoz i lost no.. but win by cheat is more embrassing then defeat...
shravan:- what u mean
ranbeer;_ if you want i will keep quiet but tell how u win
shraavan:- by sitting on bike
ranber:- once again u did cheating
pratap ask shravan if ranbeer is saying right
everyone ask shravan to speak truth
shravan:- he is talking rubbish
ranbeer:-okay uncle one min... He goes near tv and place cd with wicked smile and comes near them and turn it and says let see who is saying truth and false..
video shows shravan and ranber fighting while on bike...shravan kicking by leg on ranbeer bike is shown... everyone is looking at it.,.. ranbeer gives wicked smile to shravan

Saanchi and shravan says to watch India ne bana di jodi on 2nd jan'11 at 8:00 am so better watch it...They are shown doing dance... really shravan is very bad in dancing skills(no offense)

Precap:-
Ronak is saying I will make you tear of blood... mandira is crying... he says to chavani arrange jaimala ...by evening... chavani will u bring horse... ronak:- I will bring him on jeep by hanging... chalo he goes with two men...

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Edited by akhl - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
😃 love it 😃 ughhh ranbeer needs to go now 😡Edited by mirchi_tirchi - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Its complete now  ... Please enjoy....😉
Posted: 13 years ago
Luckkyyyyyyy!
Thnks for the updatee!
urghh im so not liking ranbir!
Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the lovely update
Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update
Posted: 13 years ago
thnx . . .finaly shravan is bck home
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