Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

India-Forums

   
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

OS: Relations

sharmishtha01 Goldie

Joined: 05 September 2010
Posts: 2107

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:12am | IP Logged
THE ACCOUNT OF THE MEMBER WHO POSTED THIS MESSAGE HAS BEEN TEMPORARILY BANNED.

If you think this is an error please Contact us.

The following 64 member(s) liked the above post:

-nupur-inlwgeetscarce05wala66angelmmkajol.kasuJaanbuntykdg129zebronicsvij10hemvbshivangi783maaneetkimeetMs-Min-HoQueenbeePallaviangelina_2005masinTishuuEscapistzaqxswDoJin-Urvi-shreya_lJULIELTania.kDhara_ssldeepsjazzerettemausam19GurruKiDeewani-macho_muffinmrk-1sanu3108-Veritaserum-punjabi.princesanjucoollily_k25nisha_hc_bs_ddesha143-pixie-vrsharmaliv2laughMishtyShonat_areeb_Invincible_..hinal....Amri..sona-raijnawazcharmed ones-afsha---Nargis--nanditasinghCrazzyBusymchopraSoapoperasrfunroseinbloomLoNeLy..GaLRiMa_972VSai2008-Mrinalini-Mrs.Hulknotfadedawayspvd

jazzerette IF-Dazzler
jazzerette
jazzerette

Joined: 12 August 2010
Posts: 4888

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:45am | IP Logged
You write very well....I always look forward to reading what you write. Its not only about what you bring forth in terms of romance and Maaneet moments....but it also has an underlying sense and sensibility prevailing through the story. Keep writing...and regularly. And please add me to your PM list...that is if you do send them outSmile
mchopra IF-Sizzlerz
mchopra
mchopra

Joined: 02 April 2009
Posts: 11275

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:47am | IP Logged
wow just loved it..YUP even the thesis..u are right..i really dont think any realton has given her as much as he as..18 years they couldnt make her smile but here he gave her all in span of few months..
thanku for the wonderful OS..
sharmishtha01 Goldie

Joined: 05 September 2010
Posts: 2107

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 4:52am | IP Logged
THE ACCOUNT OF THE MEMBER WHO POSTED THIS MESSAGE HAS BEEN TEMPORARILY BANNED.

If you think this is an error please Contact us.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

jazzerette

LoNeLy..GaL IF-Sizzlerz
LoNeLy..GaL
LoNeLy..GaL

Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 14400

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Wow superb loved it outstanding mind-blowing I Dnt hv word so say hw much good excellent perfect story was .in future ur gone be a good writer I think so no I'm sure .So Best Of Luck
macho_muffin IF-Rockerz
macho_muffin
macho_muffin

Joined: 18 August 2010
Posts: 5723

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 1:53pm | IP Logged
Happy New Year everyone!Big smile
 
Heyy,
 
aww this was such a touching OS....and seriously, hats off to you cuz that one paragraph about Geet explaining how maan is everything for her literally moved me!!Clap....i think that is one of the most beautiful things I have heard....and ofcourse, brilliant job at analyzing their relationship to this level!!Embarrassed
ofcourse, only maan knows what looks best on his mishtiEmbarrassed....and a truly apt title too....maan has fulfilled every relation for Geet!!....*sigh goes into maaneet land again*LOL
beautiful OS!!....loved it!
thanks for the pm
liv2laugh IF-Sizzlerz
liv2laugh
liv2laugh

Joined: 24 November 2009
Posts: 11643

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
This is beautiful Clap Clap Clap

I loved how he asked Geet about whether she wanted her family Big smile

But I loved her reply the best Star  Star Star

I am completely on board with your sentiments about her family and about Dev. They failed her when she needed them the most and so lost the right to partake in her happiness.

Please write some more.
Wish you a very happy new year
Jhan
roseinbloom IF-Sizzlerz
roseinbloom
roseinbloom

Joined: 11 November 2010
Posts: 12952

Posted: 31 December 2010 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Golden Line:
 
Maan! Rishte khoon se nahin bante, nibhane se bante hain. Aapne ek pita ki tarah meri hamesha raksha ki hai. Jab bhi main pareshaan aur udaas hui, ek maa ke tarah aapne mujhe shaant karaya hai, mujhe bharosa diya hai. Bhai-bahnon ki tarah aap mere saath hanste-khelte hain, jhagadte hain, mujhe chhedte hain, mujhe hansate hain. Aur ek sachche jeevan-saathi ki tarah har kadam par mere saath rahte hain. Mere saare rishte aap par shuru hote hain, aur aap par hi khatam hote hain Maan. Mujhe kissi aur ki zaroorat nahin hai. Mujhe apni khushiyan kissi aur ke saath nahin baantni hain."
 
 
That truly deserves an applause! Clap I love how you summed up their relationship and the many different roles Maan has played in her life. That is a really beautiful line! I hope the CVs read this and think of incorporating that line somewhere because I loved it! And I totally agree with your thesis. Smile

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Violent Relations!!!!Today...

2 3 4 5 6

Author: -Selcouth-   Replies: 42   Views: 4084

-Selcouth- 42 4084 28 July 2010 at 11:41am by Opti

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Check these Celebrity also

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index