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Imprints on my SOUL!!(a poem)

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 11:54am | IP Logged
Hey guys.I m backHugThis tym with something different.Lately all of us have been discussing about that phase of sajan relationship when gunjan was going thru the bitter pain of a one sided love.So in that direction only i sat to pen down this poem...tried to capture the feelings of a one-sided lover.Hope all of u will like it.This is my first attempt at poetry writing so dont beat me up hun...bear it even if its bad or sounds wierd!LOL.Here it goes guys...my first self written poem...

Imprints on my soul

 

"Move on" or "Hold on"

A tossy situation lingers my head

Why lament over something left unsaid?

Living alone is a turmoil- the head debate

shrieks aloud...What's a lyf sans a soulmate??

Loneliness will leave ur senses paralysed

even before its time for the real death bed

A single emotion doesn't halt life

And there's no worth of this empty strife.

The head screech...Its time to move on!

But layers beneath, I know...something is still not gone

Oh god! what do I do of this stupid heart

That has embedded him as its inherent part

Its ready to bleed...ready to slit

Just to keep inside, his spirit lit

His smile still conquers my thought

In his sweet memories my soul still lost

His deep voice still resonates in my air

His essence scattered everywhere

The feel of his warm touch I can still sense

What still surrounds my world, is his timeless presence...

There is no way I can help it out even a bit

How do I do this? How can any1 do it...

How do I "move on" from my very own existence?

How do I forget my years long persistence?

For what all I have come across, I know one for sure,

He is the life that breaths inside me...the one who completes me as a whole

I cant forget him! for he is the one who has left his everlasting imprints on my soul...



Edited by princessyashika - 30 December 2010 at 11:57am

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Hey yaashi OMG!!Wow!!ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapThumbs UpStarStarStarStarSmileClapClapClapIs this really ur 1st attempt on writing a poem?Shockedif it is then I am shocked dear Shockedas Ur poem is just Fabulous Clap SmileWow!! dear Superb Thumbs UpVery beautifully n very well writtenThumbs UpSmileClapClapClapClapClap................Please donot stop writing u write really really well......ClapDo write more Poems..it is very good.......Thumbs Up......................

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:36pm | IP Logged
Hey ! congratulations YASHiThumbs Up 4 your 1st PoemClap.Its really Good.U describe very beautifully,The pain of a single sided love. SUPERB Hug& AWESOME
Keep It Up.

-S O H A M.



Edited by SHAMSHIR-MJHT - 30 December 2010 at 6:37pm

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
yashi this is ur words from heart i am touched honey HugHugHugHugHugHug its amazing creation and may be i know why HugHugHugHug i must say one thing ppl who fall in love r seriously very lucky and u know what once our samrat said to his chashmish in neil track's end adhura pyar bahot hi beautiful hota hai its one sided feelings one treasure for those who gives their soul to other without wanting back their soul and love and for that hats off to them and hats off to u too for this heart touching and outstanding poem  HugHugHug u should seriously right more ClapClap

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
OMGGGG it directly touched my heart yashi!!! GOSHHH such a beautiful poemHugHug..hats off to u!!! love it sweetheart!!!! very beautiful!!!! well written!!! u should write more honey!!! m just loving this!!! mwahhh

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 2:39am | IP Logged
m still not breathing write
it had been soo beautiful mallu totally lovely muah muah muah muah muha
 
god saved it already n this is ur first???
'its par excellance mallu
gosh i am soo spell bound na k dont even know what to say n what not too say n it described sajan soo well
i could see thm in these words u know???
they r totally amazing yaar totallly muahhhh

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omggggg! Yashi that was soo beauutiful honey... Clap Embarrassed Hug    Hug  Superb poem..Embarrassed

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