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Posted: 13 years ago
                                        PART-8

(panchi,tracker,angad and other students wait 4 kabir,piya,abhay and misha)

yeh log kahan chale gaye,aab takto une ajana chahiye tha-panchi

panchi mujheto lagraha hai woh log pondme naharahehai-tracker

naharahahe?r ur mad?woh log itne raatko kyu nahayenge?aur woh bhi jungle mein-panchi

eine kahi parata ki raatko pondme naahanese face GLOW karta hai-tracker

tracker tum pagaloki tarah baatein karna band karo-panchi

hai..panchine tik kahan...mujhe to lagraha hai woh log na junglemein bet k picnic manarahe hai-angad

PICNIC??Tum dono apna bakwas band karo...aur mere saath chalo unlogoko hum eksaath doondenge-panchi

thik hai-all students

(T wit her 2 chamchi says)

1min..im not going..mujhe neend arahi hai so im going 2 sleep-T
T tum baadme nahi sosakti?-tracker

plzzz...agar mein raatko late songi thn meri aakhon ki niche dark circles ho jayenge..and i dnt want tht to happen-T

ok watever...hum log jate hai-panchi

(all students goes inside the jungle to find them)

com on girls lets go to sleep-T

yaar T hum yahan akele hai,mujhe bohot dar lagraha hai-1st chamchi

hai T mujhe bhi dar lagraha hai,agar koi wild animal agaya toh??...humein unlogoke saath jana chahiye tha-2nd chamchi

oh plz stop u both...hum logo ko kuch nahi hoga..don't worry...now com on lets go 2 sleeep-T
(T and her chamchis goes near to the tent but suddenly they see a shadow)

T woh deko...mujhe lagta hai is tentke piche koi hai-2nd chamchi

(T and her chamchis looks each other)
T...U..mm dono fikar ma..at karo mein hoo..on na,chalo hum deke tent ki piche kon hai-T

(T and her chamchis bcomes frightened and walks slowly and goes backside of the tent)

(wen they reach thr,they c a horrible man,thn they scream and becomes behosh..and the horrible man is BRIJ)

(seeing thm becoming behosh brij says 2 himself in a confusion state)

yeh theeno mujhe dekkar behosh kyu hogayi??mein kya itna bura dikhta hoon??-BRIJ


TO BE CONTINUED.........

Edited by dddds - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part
do cont soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
ya its realy nice and plz fast update karo yar
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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: shoaibagha50

ya its realy nice and plz fast update karo yar



yaar i wanna uptade fast but i hav skool so i can't but i wil try😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
                                          PART-9

(At the other side abhay takes piya(who is still behosh) in his shoulder and lys her in a save place and strts slapin on her cheeks )

i think piyako yeha rakna save hoga...piya hoshme aao..hoshme aao piya....mujhe lagta piyake liye pani lana parega-abhay

(thn abhay leaves piya in the save place and goes 2 bring water  her)

(At the backside of the save place maan and geet searches the end of the jungle...suddenly geet stops)

maan..ruko-geet
kya huwa..kisi bayanak bhootko dekliya kya?-maan
(thn geet whispers)

aapse zyada bayanak  aur kon hosakta hai-geet

kya kahan tumne-maan

kuch nahi...mujhe bohot pyaas lagi hai pani leayena-geet

itne bare jungleme pani....ik hai tum yahan ruko mein abhi aata hoon kahin mat jana-maan

tik hai-geet
(thn maan goes 2 brig water 4 geet..and geet stands thr and wait 4 maan..suddenly a man comes out from the tree and it is our DANISH....he saw geet's back and thought it was pia thn he strts talkin 2 himself)

oh pia to tum yahan ho...oh dekoto piane kya pehne hai SALWAR KAMEEZ...tumne mujhe bawakuf bananeke liye salwar kammez pehna hai...lekin afsos mein itna bawakuf nahi hoon ......ab deko mein kya karta hoon-DANISH

(he takes knife 4r his pocket and goes 2wards geet......geet turns bckside danish goes 2 stab geet but som1 caught his hand and it is abhay...danish bcomes astonished seein abhay and geet...and in a confusin mood he asks geet)

tum kon ho...kahin tumne mujhe bawakuf bananekeliye plastic surgery to nahin karli pia-danish

(geet becomes confuse...and abhay pulls danish 2wards himself and says in a angry mood)

mein batatahoon yeh kaun hai-abhay

(abhay strts beatin danish...danish becomes frightened and runs away...geet in a confusion mood goes 2 abhay but she gets slip and she goes 2 fall but abhay caught her in his shoulder and music strts)

(at the other side maan comes with water and c this ANHONI...and thn piya wakes up frm her behoshi and strted callin abhay wen she turned backside she saw geet in abhay's arms..she bcomes behosh again)

TO BE CONT....


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey yaar... kahani mein twist .... 😆... loving ur ff  yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome update

loved it loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Its an awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
                               PART-10

(Abhay leaves geet abd says )

tum logo ki problem kya hai?mere picha chor do-abhay

(abhay leaves and maan comes 2 geet and says)

yeh sab kya chal rahatha?-maan

kya chalrahatha matlab?-geet

tum us darinde ki bahome..-maan
maan aap aur ek shabd nahi kehna actually na aapko bussinessman nahi detective hona chahiye tha..aap ko shakh karne ki aadatjo hai-geet

geeet-maan

(geet gets angry and goes 2 the other side and stands thr)

acha tum mujse baat nahi karna chahtiho na toh tik hai dektahu kabtak baat nahi karti ho-maan

(maan turns the oder way and sits thr and the oder sise abhay goes 2 piya and shakes her face and pia gets up)

piya utto utto piya-abhay

ab..haay-pia

(pia gets up)

abhay woh larki kon thi jo tumaro bahonme thi?-pia

woh..woh ek batakti aadma hai-abhay

kya?..tum kya kehreha ho mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha-pia

tum woh sab bhul jao...pia yeh jaga safe nahi hai chal hum dono tentpe jate hai-abhay

(abhay catchs pia and helps pia to get up and on the oder side geet and maan still r angry wit each oder..suddnly anoder man comes out of a tree and this time its HOTTY BRIJJ!! he takes a gun and goes 2wards geet,maan does'nt c him..he goes 2 geet and goes 2 attack her but suddnly som1 pushes him and its maan,,thn maan and brij starts fighting..geet sees thm fightin and tries 2 stop brij but he pushes her very badly,geet falls on the ground and strt screamin bcoz she got pain in her pregnent belly..hearin her scream abhiya turns and says)

abhay yeh kon chilla raha hai..muje lagta hai koi musibatme hai-piya

chalo jakar dekte hai-abhay


TO BE CONTI.............