Posted: 13 years ago

Hello guys๐Ÿค—...I'm back with my second poem.. this time its on our beloved onscreen couple  Naksh.. ..!! Hope U like it . Plz do give ur feedback ... it means a lot n wishing all the members of YR forum Happy New Year in advance...thank you...๐Ÿ˜ƒ

 

 

Some couples are hot, some couples are cool,

But naksh is a couple who is super cool...

 

Their innocent love story is close to reality,

As two strangers discovering love, shown with sincerity...

Their strenght as a couple lies in its simplicity,

With very cute romance, shown with decency....

 

Their love for each other is simple and sweet,

Followed by music instruments, which makes it unique....

Just by a simple touch, the magic occurs,

'Jaadu yeh kya kar diya' is very adorable....

 

Their relationship reflects, trust and care,

As they understand and relates, each other very well...

'Khamoshi ki bhasha' reflect in their love,

As they willingly believe it to be the basic step....

 

Their romance is filled with lots of freshness,

As naitik grabbing her, every time she slips...

Her cute 'baalon ki lath' increases his desire,

Helping their chemistry to reach another attire...

Their bonding has increased, with each passing day,

Which not only makes akshi,but everyone 'Piya bawari'....

 

Gone were the days they used to fight,

Coming are the days they're planning their life...

But thanks 2 Rajanji for making this show,

As we'll can relate to this beautiful journey...

Edited by gutky - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
really very nice๐Ÿ˜Š loved it keep continuing.......โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘........

Posted: 13 years ago
Only one word coming in my mind now.....Awesome๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
you are very creativeโญ๏ธ
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by saman.17


really very nice๐Ÿ˜Š loved it keep continuing.......โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘........

thank u so much samanvitha...๐Ÿ˜† 
Posted: 13 years ago
 
Originally posted by anu93


Only one word coming in my mind now.....Awesome๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
you are very creativeโญ๏ธ

thanks anu .. waise this is part of my job coz i'm copywriter ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by gutky - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
wah wah  kya khub likha hai๐Ÿ‘ 
luv u 4 dis again di grat work๐Ÿ˜‰  ๐Ÿ˜Ž
Posted: 13 years ago
fabulous job di...!u r a very very good poetess...!โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ/5 stars!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 13 years ago
hey another great attempt yaar...its too good...๐Ÿ‘ 4th n 5th stanzas are very good...keep it up Vini......๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 13 years ago
its really amazing
write more
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Posted: 13 years ago

wow nice poem on naksha yarr it too good ๐Ÿ‘

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