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Poem on NAKSH...

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:36am | IP Logged

Hello guysHug...I'm back with my second poem.. this time its on our beloved onscreen couple  Naksh.. ..!! Hope U like it . Plz do give ur feedback ... it means a lot n wishing all the members of YR forum Happy New Year in advance...thank you...Big smile

 

 

Some couples are hot, some couples are cool,

But naksh is a couple who is super cool...

 

Their innocent love story is close to reality,

As two strangers discovering love, shown with sincerity...

Their strenght as a couple lies in its simplicity,

With very cute romance, shown with decency....

 

Their love for each other is simple and sweet,

Followed by music instruments, which makes it unique....

Just by a simple touch, the magic occurs,

'Jaadu yeh kya kar diya' is very adorable....

 

Their relationship reflects, trust and care,

As they understand and relates, each other very well...

'Khamoshi ki bhasha' reflect in their love,

As they willingly believe it to be the basic step....

 

Their romance is filled with lots of freshness,

As naitik grabbing her, every time she slips...

Her cute 'baalon ki lath' increases his desire,

Helping their chemistry to reach another attire...

Their bonding has increased, with each passing day,

Which not only makes akshi,but everyone 'Piya bawari'....

 

Gone were the days they used to fight,

Coming are the days they're planning their life...

But thanks 2 Rajanji for making this show,

As we'll can relate to this beautiful journey...



Edited by gutky - 30 December 2010 at 6:58am

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:46am | IP Logged
really very niceSmile loved it keep continuing.......StarStar
ClapClapClap........

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Only one word coming in my mind now.....AwesomeClapClapClap
you are very creativeStar
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saman.17

really very niceSmile loved it keep continuing.......StarStar
ClapClapClap........

thank u so much samanvitha...LOL 
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 6:52am | IP Logged
 
Originally posted by anu93

Only one word coming in my mind now.....AwesomeClapClapClap
you are very creativeStar

thanks anu .. waise this is part of my job coz i'm copywriter Smile


Edited by gutky - 30 December 2010 at 6:53am
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wah wah  kya khub likha haiClap 
luv u 4 dis again di grat workWink  Cool
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 7:03am | IP Logged
fabulous job di...!u r a very very good poetess...!StarStarStarStarStar/5 stars!Thumbs Up
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hey another great attempt yaar...its too good...Clap 4th n 5th stanzas are very good...keep it up Vini......Thumbs Up

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