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FF:Save the last dance updt pg 9-4/1

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:28am | IP Logged
Hey,
 
As planned i am starting a Rashi-Jigar fanfiction. Hope you all like it.
 
 
Prologue
 
'What the hell?' shouted Jigar. He couldn't believe his eyes. The copy of his maternal grandfather's will lay before him. A man Jigar had never laid eyes on. A man who had , untill now never accepted his existance. His mom had married his father without her fathers permission. His father, Chirag Modi was a self made man and was not much wealthy when he courted Hetal Dinshaw. But after marraige he was determoned to prove himself to Mr. Jagnath dinshaw who always thwarted Chirag for his status.
 
Now Jigar couldn't believe that the old man had left his entire wealth to Jigar when he died with a condition that He marry a girl named Rashi dinshaw in 30 days. His mom had already asked him not to let her fathers wealth to be destroyed because if he didn't marry this rashi, the entire wealth will be transferred to his grandfathers distant relative, Umang rana.
 
jigar banged his fist on the wall in frustration. Who is this Rashi? As far as he know Hetal was his grandfathers only child which means he is the only grandson. But Rashi Dinshaw? The surname confused him. But he had to know if he wants his mothers wish fulfilled. Its not that he is in need of money, like his father he himself has proved his worth in business. But his mom will never forgive him if he doesnt make an effort.
 
He dialed his secretary's. " Pooja, please book an air ticket to Ahemedbad as early as possible and hold all my calls for the day". He then dialed his mom. hetal asked him " what did you decide , dhikra?" . Jigar could hear his mothers apprehension.
 
"I will decide once i meet the girl, mom. Anyway i am leaving for Dinshaw House asap" He could say he made his mom happy. But was he happy? Boy, he felt like hitting someone. Rashi.. the name kept comin to his mind.


Edited by Jake-neil - 03 January 2011 at 10:09pm

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:31am | IP Logged

INDEX

Prologue- pg 1

chapter 1- pg 4

chapter 2- pg 6

Chapter 3- pg 9



Edited by Jake-neil - 03 January 2011 at 10:08pm
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:51am | IP Logged
wow bro. i should congratulate you on your courage and for a fantastic start.
but what happened to the con is on when will you update it.

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Aapki himmat ki daat deni paregi Jakebhai! You are a great writer.. Why don't you try writing something on GoHem?

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 3:21am | IP Logged
wow Jake! Star Good start! Is this your first attempt? Then you had been hiding your creativity behind your BRATness. I like the name Dinshaw. Do the other Modi's (Aham, kokila, parag and Gopi)  come in this story? 
All the best in your attempt to redeem RashiLOL

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Interesting prologue, lets see how will the story pan out.

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 7:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jake-neil

 Boy, he felt like hitting someone. Rashi.. the name kept comin to his mind.

@ bold - ROFLROFL ROFL   I feel like hitting Rashi too!Wink  

Great start Jake!

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*oops*

Edited by saomom - 30 December 2010 at 10:55am

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