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MaanEet - OS - Geet Ki Lagann (my 2nd OS)

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 11:55pm | IP Logged

I am back with another OS . hope u all like it ... just a little try .

OS - Geet Ki Lagann - imagination 4 2night's episode

This is in regard with today's episode as geet unknowingly made maan angry & how she is going to try to make up for that ...

As we all saw from the FB pics that geet has taken annie's help . so that she can please maan & reduce his anger for her & so that maan can be the same lovey dovey maan to his geet ....

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Now my imagination starts ...

 please read & do comment  as you all know I love to read your comments & do press the like button if u like this post ... thank you ...

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We all know that maan told dadima that he will be at home & asked adi to come home .... well he changed his plan all of a sudden as he was feeling embarrassed to be at home with geet , dadima & annie ... so he calls adi & informs him that he is coming to office ... & no need to come to the mansion ...

Geet & maan go to office in maan's car ... but maan does not talk to her all through their journey to office & as it is not enough he keeps on avoiding her in the office & locks himself in his cabin ... not allowing any one to enter his cabin ...not even his geet ... & giving strict orders as to not to disturb him ....

Geet could not bear this .... Geet is also mad ...

Geet to herself -"oh  babaji ... yeh maan bhi naa ... wo mere saath mazak kar sakh thae hain '...par wohi mazak agar main karthi ho tho bura maaan jaathae hae ..."

Geet was thinking what should I do that will make him forget his anger for me & he will be once again my sweetu maan ...

she then bumps into annie while she was walking up & down outside maan's cabin staring at maan & giving him looks .... maan is totally ignoring her ...

Annie asks geet what is the matter ... Geet tells annie that maan is mad at her because of the breakfast table incident ... & he is not talking to her & avoiding her & tells Annie that how Maan misunderstood her totally .... & tells her every thing what happened between her & maan after the breakfast table incident & how angry he was with her & how he stormed out without even allowing her to give her piece of mind to him ...

Then after that annie takes her inside the conference room & switches the TV on & gives her some tips on to how to cool maan ... geet as she also knows that she is a chalthi phirthi disaster queen & messes up things when worried & may not remember all the incidents so she takes down the instructions in a piece of paper ... so that she does not mess it up ... as she wants maan to be happy .... is ready to do what ever she can ... so that maan just forgets & forgives her ...even if she is not wrong ....

Then annie tells geet that geet needs a ward robe change so that geet can please maan & reduce maan's anger ... annie takes her to a boutique .... & selects red color mini for geet ...geet does not want to wear it ... but as per annie's orders geet takes the dress & then geet goes back to the mansion to arrange special bath for maan ... & then give him a surprise later on after the baath ....

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In the office ....

Maan now is missing geet ... he was actually stealing glances at Geet when she was walking up & down in front of his cabin before ... but now as she is out of sight ....

He is worried that where did she go all of a sudden ... he enquires from adi .... adi tells him that as per his orders no one disturbed him & geet went out early with Annie ...

Maan notices that annie is back in the office .... He now calls annie to his cabin ...

Maan - annie where is geet .... I heard that you both went out ...

Annie - why bhai ...

Maan - actually I have some work with her ... & need her help for a project ...

annie - oh bhai geet was very sad & she did not want to come back to office so she want back home ... 

maan - what ... she went back home .... She is not coming back ...

annie - yes bhai ...

maan - it's ok annie .... u can go now ....

maan to himself - "lagtha hain geet ko maine kuch jyada hi keh diya hain ... ghar jaake ab usse manana padega ..."

maan then storms out of his cabin ...

maan tells adi that he is going home ... & he starts for KM ... Annie was watching maan walk out of KC & she quickly calls geet to inform her that maan was coming home ...

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Geet gets a call from office from annie saying that maan left for home ...

First geet gets ready ... she wore the red mini & she walks towards maan's room ...

Geet kept a note on maan's dressing table ... where he can find her after his bath ...

Now Geet is in maan's bath room & is preparing for his bath as per the instructions given to her by annie .... she now arranged the candles all next to the bath tub ... & showered red rose petals on the whole bath tub & it's sides & showered some in the bath tub tooo ....

Now checking the time .... thinks that maan might have entered the mansion .... started filling the tub with hot water .... checks the hotness of water by sprinkling it on her face ... & is thinking what else is left .... is reading the instructions once again so that she does not miss any of them ....

She starts lighting the vanilla scented candles ... maan has already entered his room ... & he can smell the vanilla scent coming from his bath room ... so he quickly walks over there ....

Geet finished lighting all the candles & then she turns ... she wanted to give maan surprise but ... she is surprised to find maan in front of her ... geet did not want maan to spot her like that in his bath room ... she was planning on arranging some thing else for him after the bath ...

But seeing maan all of a sudden in her room ... she tried to walk away from there as he was advancing towards her ... geet unknowingly while filling the bath tub ... did not notice that some water fell on the ground & while trying to walk away from there ... she slipped  & lost her balance & fell inside the bath tub ... which she prepared for maan ...

Maan after watching this ... broke into laughter ... geet is mad as maan broke into laughter ... geet now gets up from the water & sits inside the tub & mad that her plan to please maan backfired & instead of maan she landed in the bath tub & is in a mess & is busy in herself taking off the petals off her hand ... she did not notice that maan was sitting on his knees in front of her near the tub & looking at her adoringly ....

Geet now slowly lifts her head & spots that maan is staring at her ... geet Is feeling shy & trying to go away from there ... but maan is quick for her .... Holds her hand & pulls her towards him i.e. the wall of the tub .... Then as usual holds her chin  & pulls her face towards him ...

Maan - geet yeh sab tumne mere liyae kiya tha....

geet nods her head in a yes ...

maan - kis liyae ...

geet does not speak any thing ... but is quiet ...

maan - mujhae manane kae liye ...

geet is looking into maan's eyes & then blinks her eyes in a sort of yes ...

maan - main tumse kitnae daer tak naaraz ho sakhtha hun .... janthi ho ek bath kahun ... waise tum iss dress main bahut achi lag rahin ho ...

geet's feeling shy .... maan touches geet's forhead with his forehead & they both stay like that for some time ... maan pours more water on geet ... they both are looking into each other's eyes ....

after some time ... geet gets up & slowly releases herself from maan's grip while maan is looking at her ... geet wants to get up & she gets out of the bath tub ... but is standing outside the bath tub with her back to maan .... Maan then pulls his soft white towel from the cup board and wraps it around geet & hugs her from the back with his hands over her hands & their both hands laying on geet's belly ... he starts feeling her wet hair with his face ... geet turns her face .... & is looking into his eyes & maan looking into geet's eyes .... they both now realize that they are standing in front of the mirror ... geet trying to free herself ... as his closeness to her is making her heartbeats raise & she was definitely looking vulnerable in that wet outfit ....

geet - mujhe chodiye ...

maan - kyun ...

geet - aap shayad bhul gaye ... ki aapne kahan ki aap mujhae ... chuyengae nahin ... hamare shadi tak ...

maan - oh is liye ... tumne yeh sab liya ... thaki main ... tumhare paas aa jao ... hain naa ...

geet - nahin ... maine yeh sab kiya ... thaki aap ki naaraz gi dur ho ... naaki iss liyae ... ki aap yeh shaitani Karen ... Ab mujhae chodiyen ... main ja rahin hun ...

Maan - kahan ... aise bhegi bhegi kapdon main ...

Geet notices that she is all wet and maan was covering her with his towel ... as maan is very close to her & he is still hugging her ... geet is feeling shy & her heart is beating at a speed unknown to her ... geet now trying to release her self from maan ...

Geet - mujhae chodiyen ... mujhe jaana padega ...

Maan - nahin ...

Geet - please ...

Maan - dekho ab tumne mere liye ithni mehnat kiya hain ... tho main tumhe kaise chod sakhtha hun ... nahin chodunga ... tumne yeh sab iss liye kiya tha naa .... ki meri naaraz gi dur ho jaye aur main tumharae paas aa jao ...

Maan -yeh kapde tumne mere liye hi pehnae hain naa ... jab ki tum iss dress main kitna uncomfortable feel karthi ho main jantha hun ... phir bhi yeh sab tum ne mere liye kiya ... hain naa ...

Maan - wiase yeh idea kiska tha ...

Geet - annie ka ...

maan - geet ek aur baath kahun ... agar tum yeh sab nahin bhi karthi ... tab bhi main tumse jyada daer tak naaraz nahin reh sakhtha hun ....  
 
 
Then geet turns & hugs maan ... they both are lost in the hug like that for some time ... maan now no more angry over her ... removes the wet tresses which were covering over her face & then maan slowly comes close to her cheek ... geet thinking that he is going to hug her .... but maan now slowly plants a kiss her on her cheek ... to which she is surprised .... & then bends her face in shyness ... & they again continue their hug like that for some more time ...

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Ok now please please let  know how u liked this OS ... Waiting for ur responses ...

 


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Edited by dewdropred - 21 April 2011 at 5:55am

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:08am | IP Logged
bravoPartyClapClap.....very nice...really a very sweet imagination....kaash aisa hi ho!!!Day Dreaming

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kawaii_geet

bravoPartyClapClap.....very nice...really a very sweet imagination....kaash aisa hi ho!!!Day Dreaming
 
 
thnks dear ... for liking it ... hope fully ... it may happen Smile
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:28am | IP Logged
di cool imagination... loved it...

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:31am | IP Logged

Originally posted by aarthirajendran

di cool imagination... loved it...
 

 
thnks arti ... just remembered tht i forgot to add 1 more line will add tht wait ...

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by dewdropred

Originally posted by aarthirajendran

di cool imagination... loved it...
 

 
thnks arti ... just remembered tht i forgot to add 1 more line will add tht wait ...
wic line di...

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 12:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by aarthirajendran

Originally posted by dewdropred

Originally posted by aarthirajendran

di cool imagination... loved it...
 

 
thnks arti ... just remembered tht i forgot to add 1 more line will add tht wait ...

wic line di...
 

 
 
here is the line which i added ...
 
maan - geet ek aur baath kahun ... agar tum yeh sab nahin bhi karthi ... tab bhi main tumse jyada daer tak naaraz nahin reh sakhtha hun ....  
 
 
in the ending before geet hugs maan ...


Edited by dewdropred - 30 December 2010 at 12:35am

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Brilliant OS!! very nice loved it.

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