I hate Shaan I think he needs whack...and what with OTT Khanak...she looks terrible and you have destroyed HER....is she going to the asylum..
I hate the track they way its dealt with..... immaturity and crap....no woman acts like the way Khanak is doing when she sees her ex... Sunny.....she never Killed the man...she loved him....i was so excited about this track and now i get annoyed with the show!!!
and what is with Rahul and Sam ...yeh kya hai!!! you think this will earn TRP!!! WATCH "Pratigya" or "Uttaran" same time slot.... there is story nevertheless... NO?????!!!!!!
why? why? why? why? why? why?
Originally posted by: dishbhanSuggestions:
Don't confuse the audience with different story lines ... and have a definite story line for 3+ months.Some basic things to consider when u articulate the guys character ...
- Continue with the rock star image of Shan ... Get him busy with his work and show the stress that families face with work taking a toll on family life.
- Get some complexities in with Rahul's financial issues and how Shan can help with his music shows - Get the responsible Shan back, with his mischievous side still intact, guys are like that, responsible when it comes to work and fun at home!
- Show how Khanak supports his schedule and is present for all his tough moments and relaxes him and of course their bickering as normal.
- Highlight that out of the hectic schedule Shaan is still around for Khanak and how they keep their love alive with small small things even with all the stress around ...
- After a few hectic scenes, you can show that the family plans an outing for them so that they can get together, even Rahul can pitch in for the help after all he is the owner of the company Shan contracted with. Maybe a honeymoon ....
Thats all for now ... hope it helps to make my favourite program better in the future.
- How can it be that a guy of 24-25 does not have anything better to do then play cricket in the hall when he has such a big house, is there no lawn? And nothing better to do?
- Another, how can a guy be afraid of dogs ... I haven't seen many who are afraid of dogs in my life!! And even if they are they manly enough to not show their fear and climb a sofa ... they will ridicule their wife who will be afraid of them!! Be a bit natural in this ya...
- Khanak is a bahu .... suddenly how can her MIL (saas) be so friendly suddenly with her?
- No bahu will talk about her pregnancy in front of her father in law like this ("I am not pregnant that does not mean I can't be"???? seriously no one sane enough will say that) ... u can check with variety of classes on this ... lower, middle and upper class.
~Cheers,
Dish
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