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Abhay to Piya:poem

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Hi everyone I wrote a poem From Abhays point of view
Im not a poet so please bear with me
Click the like button if you enjoy it
Im open to critisism as it will help me improve so please give your feedback Embarrassed


   My life is no longer lifeless
   With you in it its priceless
   Love passion devotion
   Forgotten were these emotions
   You brought them back with a click of your finger
   Now they are here forever to linger
   I have but one wish my dear
   Never to see a glimpse of your tear

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
wow amazing! loved itThumbs Up

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
AmazingClapLoved it
Please continue writing....you are really talented

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 1:36am | IP Logged
@ka7eela thank you very much Big smile
@kritz08 aww so sweet of you I will try to write more Embarrassed
thanx for the encouragement guys

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 1:43am | IP Logged


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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pallavisarkar



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Thanx Embarrassed
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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:07am | IP Logged
hey very nice poem pls continue writin !!SmileClap

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Posted: 30 December 2010 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by niru273

hey very nice poem pls continue writin !!SmileClap

Thanx this just came to my mind after such a beautiful episode if more comes to me I will write for sure Big smile

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