Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Holding Hope ---OS------ (Page 2)

Downhill IF-Addictz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:14pm | IP Logged

all the emotions so well captured................simply fantastic.............

amazing OS..............

keep writing


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YusLiz Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:23pm | IP Logged
loving it .. right on target on the whole scenerio please continue!!
macho_muffin IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:26pm | IP Logged
OMGG you completely nailed it!!Clap
geet's feelings....i am sure that is exactly what she was put it down soo beautifully in words and omgg your transitions from one moment to another were brilliant!!Embarrassed
pweez pweez tell me there is a second part to this....cuz you just have to!LOL
and loved your last line, you are can only hold on to hope at times like these!...brilliantly written once again!
zebronics Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:52pm | IP Logged

love this OS

continue it yaar, and pls Pm me

shaaranya IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:24pm | IP Logged

Very Beautifull written!!!

mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:25pm | IP Logged
hey we wanna see part 2 or maans pov, awsome update yaar..
-pixie- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
This cant end here...LOL

I know she has a lot of faith in the heavens above,..but she is definitely a woman of action too...So I want to know what happens next!!

Also we need another post from Maan's PoV...why did he react the way he did?

Love the way you write...Thanks for the PM.

Edited by -pixie- - 29 December 2010 at 9:37pm
swetha10 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
wow very nicely written...

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