Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee


Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Holding Hope ---OS------

blueangel1308 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:17pm | IP Logged
Holding Hope
She did not know where she had gone wrong.

Thinking back to breakfast today, she keeps replaying the scene over and over again.

She cant figure it out, he had been fine before, flirting with her as usual, so why the sudden anger?

Tears threatening to over run her eyes, as she sits on the passenger side of the car. Her face is turned away from him, looking out into Delhi's streets as he drives them home from work.

Normally their drive home, would consist of her chatting away about this or the other topic but today the silence threatens to overwhelm the car. She cant find it herself to get back her equilibrium, to act like herself.

And normally, if something was bothering her, he would be there, using some or the other tactic to pull her put of that mood. She recalls his slight manipulations, his white lies, his romance, his love, his care, his anger, he had used all those in the past to make her fell better. She did not think, there were many things which they had not done for each other. So why this, all of a sudden, why this?

The boundaries of her existence had been so limited before she had met him, so focused on her small existence and the confines up bringing, but he had changed that. This force which came into her life and completely re-shaped it. He gave her new dimensions of life and made her existence grow, so full, seemingly without end. So why was he misunderstanding her now, why was he so angry at her?

He was the one who slowly broke the boundaries she had built around herself. First with a small touch here and there, then with using his hands to guide her and using those arms to always catch her, then with hugging her and with carrying her, and finally with holding her hand and his caresses where the baby was resting. He was the one, who taught her to not care what people thought, he was the one to teach her so many things, so why was he now acting like this?

This whole day, they had not spoken. Yes there was communication between Mr. Khurana the boss and Ms. Handa his secretary, but they Maan and Geet, a couple shortly to be married, one which was very much in love, had not spoken.  They had been around each other all day, with her fulfilling all the duties of her positions, that of his secretary and his fianc. She brought him coffee, she took dictation, she arranged meetings, she filed; and she talked to annie and him regarding some venue choices, about the progress on their marriage outfits, about how the preparations were going. But in all this, never had Geet and her Maan spoken as they usually did, with their hands and their eyes.
He had not taken the moment she gave him his coffee to slowly take the cup from her hands, lingering on their brushing fingers and with staring into her eyes. Where previously writing dictation was an easy form of flirtation, he had not strayed from business matter for even a moment. Before their hands lingered and their fingers twined where transferring a file between them, today they were asked to be left on the table.

She was not one to lack initiative, not when he had taught her that sometimes that was the best way to gain your hearts desire, but today brought a new doubt, or should she say an old one, a hesitation at the rightness of her actions. With so many actions, he had given her rights over him, she struggles to see if she had abused those in any way. Was the acknowledgment that he was holding her hand, that too only in front of their family, such a wrong thing. Was she wrong to point that out, to have some fun and have some joy in that fact.

She knew she was usually the one hesitant, pulling out of their embraces, like a child caught with a hand in the cookie jar, any time she heard footsteps approaching them, but she had thought, that after all that had happened in the past weeks, especially after what had happened yesterday, considering their undeniable closeness now, that this was ok, this teasing. She still had too many reserves to do this in front of anyone else but she thought at home this was ok.

She still remembers the night where he first proposed, well asked her to pretend to be his fianc. That day, they had still not gone through all their trials together, yet on that day he had been so reluctant to let her go, to set her down on the ground, even with Daadimaa's presence and her teasing. Then another incidence which comes to mind, when Annie catches them in a half embrace when they were wishing on a falling star. Even then his arm had lingered and he was hesitant to let go. From there yesterday comes to mind, at his pleasure with the kiss. She knew for a fact that he loved it when she was demonstrative of their love. So why was today going so wrong.

She did not know what she had done wrong. He was so angry at her, why?, she hesitates to ask, not wanting to face his terrible anger.

They are minutes away from arriving home, she realizes as she sees their car turning onto their street. Quickly running a finger around her eyes, she checks to see and make sure there is no moisture there. Whatever is happening is between them. She, they, had tried, had done their best to not alarm anyone at work, or to disturb annie. They would do the same for Daadimaa.

She hopes tonight brings some answers to the questions now lingering in her mind. This night is still young, maybe making a few wishes on the stars might help. At best she hopes tomorrow morning brings a new start, maybe a fresh perspective, maybe a ray of hope.

Walking beside him, with eyes lowered, face neutral and her hands slightly clasping each other, she sees no path but that of holding onto hope


Comments Please, let me know what you think

Edited by blueangel13 - 29 December 2010 at 7:17pm

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:38pm | IP Logged
Beautifully well written!! ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:42pm | IP Logged
One can only hope for better.
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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
Very well written, you've captured Geet's confusion and hesitation! Is there a part 2 to this? Or another OS from Maan's POV? 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nikipuki

Very well written, you've captured Geet's confusion and hesitation! Is there a part 2 to this? Or another OS from Maan's POV? 

I agree!  And second the motion for part two or Maan's POV.... Please! LOL

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:09pm | IP Logged
great update loved itClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
thanks 4 pm
ninand IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
damn.. thats so what she must be feeling! down to the last word.... felt every bit of her hurt, her new doubts, her hesitancy... the chill between them, and the strange twist in her heart... very well written. 

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
another awesome OS, loved how you depicted Geet's confusion can't wait to read more!ClapClapClapClap

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