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maanujaanu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
u r truely awesum
plzzz give us 1 more update
call me greedy if u want
i really wanna c Maan's face after he c's Roshni

Edited by maanujaanu - 28 January 2011 at 1:31pm

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mirnalini Goldie

Joined: 16 October 2010
Posts: 1617

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Part 24:

Maan was standing in the lobby of the office, right outside Geet's cabin, screaming his head off at her employees. Yash was trying to calm him down, but to no avail.
Then suddenly a ting sounded as the elevator door opened, and Geet stepped outside, to her staff's relief. Phew!! Their boss was back. Now she'd show Mr. I-am-khadooos-Maan-Singh-Khurana who the boss was! They all smiled very broadly on seeing her, and Pari rushed forward to take the bag from Geet's hands. Their boss had brought her daughter too along with her. The day was getting better by the minute!!!
"Ma'am! Thank god you're hear." Pari exclaimed.

Geet handed her the bag, nodded at her staff's courtesies, gave Maan a cold stern look, and marched into her cabin.

Maan knew that all his attempts would eventually bear fruit, and that Geet would come, but he was still shocked at what he saw. Geet had come in with a very small kid in her arms. Who was she? He wondered. Was she her daughter? He was not sure.


Roshni was still asleep. Pari came in after her.
"Ma'am, thank you so much for coming. Mr. Khurana has had us all in an upheaval since morning.", she whispered, lest Roshni woke up.

Geet placed the bag besides the couch, covered the couch with a small mattress, laid Roshni on it, covered her with a small quilt, and then placed a child alarm besides her. It was to detect any movement from her. And if she woke up, Geet would immediately know from its counterpart that was with her.
Pari went back outside to tell Mr. Khurana that their boss would like to speak with them in the conference hall. But before she could get to Maan, Sasha came in the way and stopped her. The were all still in the lobby and everybody was gathered around them. Maan was standing behind Sasha when Sasha started abusing Pari.
"You lowly bi***. How dare you address MK thus! Don't you know the difference between him and the girls your kind. Who work as secretaries just to get into a high class zone so that you can get a chance with a rich man like MK! You and your boss, M. Geet Handa are just the same!"

"Ma'am plz! There's no need to get personal! I'm merely doing my job. And I'll tolerate absolutely nothing against Geet ma'am. She's the kindest soul ever to have lived, and the likes of you can never appreciate a woman like her."Pari replied in a hurt but determined tone.
"HOW DARE YOU USE SUCH A TONE WITH ME!!!!!!!", Sasha screamed, as she gave Pari a hard push.
Pari lost her balance and tumbled back, when someone caught her and saved her from falling.
Geet was shocked at what had just happened. Not only had Sasha abused Pari, but had also physically assaulted her. She recalled those torturous moments in KC when Sasha had insulted her in front of everybody. Just becuz she was poor, young, simple and alone. Now she was trying to do that to Pari. A fury erupted inside Geet, and she went forward and slapped Sasha hard on her right cheek.

"How dare you", she spoke in a bone chilling hissed tone.
"You come in my office and assault my staff!!!! Doosron ko unki aukad batane se pehle apni khudki aukad dekh liya karo Sasha!"
"I'm not going to spare you today Sasha!!!!!!!! You are now officially off this project! Get out of my office before I have you thrown out! And as for that contract, It did not specify  your team Mr. Khurana! I'd like to speak with you in the conference room right now!!"

Maan was in an upheaval and could not relate the several things that had just happened. First that child, then Sasha's preposterous behaviour, and then Geet's giving Sasha a very well deserved slap.
So he without any questions marched after Geet, dumbfounded.

That was part 24
Hope you enjoyed!!!!!!!!!!!!Wink

Will PM later.

Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 3:16pm

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Lip-a-Licious IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 8071

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:11pm | IP Logged

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felicitysmoak. IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 05 November 2007
Posts: 44357

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
awesome updates
loved them
roshini maan saw her
sasha what a tramp
glad geet came
loved that sasha is out
sasha so needed that slap
way to go geet
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon

Edited by kashndsel4eva - 28 January 2011 at 2:20pm

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maanujaanu IF-Dazzler

Joined: 20 August 2010
Posts: 4027

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:23pm | IP Logged
thank u thank u thank u sooo
sooo sooo much
\for dis awesum
wonderful update
n dat Slap on Shasha's face way 2 gud

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VSai2008 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 October 2010
Posts: 17393

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:28pm | IP Logged
awesome update
i love geet
she is too good
sasha deserved that slap..
i wonder what will geet say to maan now
n what will b maan's reaction ater knowing truth abt roshini
do continue soon

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kahkashansakina IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 28 December 2010
Posts: 18588

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 2:46pm | IP Logged
Amezing  23and 24 part
why she give 1 slap only more slap ....
maan saw roshni what his reaction......
pls cont soon we can't wait......

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Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 October 2010
Posts: 5870

Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:03pm | IP Logged
Finally shasha get what she deserved..... Loved d both parts..... Finally roshni is here i hope maan could meet her.

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