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VSai2008 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:00pm | IP Logged
plz continue soon

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seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Ummh maan is getting jealous and going to take revenge from geet cant wait for the next update, pls PM the next part as i did not get the PM for this update.

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gangesegb IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 November 2010
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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
great prt ......enjoyed cont soon

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 3:17am | IP Logged
heyyyyyyyyyy dear so hw r ur xams going

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mishtib Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
hey long time no update
plse updateee
cant waitt to see how maan is planning to take revenge

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trishap Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
plz update sooooooooonnnnnnnnnn

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mirnalini Goldie

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
Part 23:

 Maan's back was aching like hell from all the crouching and snooping he had been about the night before outside Geet's house. But he still reached office the next day, all set to make Geet's life hell.
However, all his plans were cast aside. Maan was there, his evil intentions were there, however the one on who the implications were to be inflicted was not. Geet had not come in that day, and Maan was not at all happy about it. He learned that she had taken an off that day. 
So now the only way to get his plans into action was to get Geet to the office. So Maan went about causing as much trouble as he could. He reprimanded her staff, yelled at the technical and creative teams of H&G, accused them all of incompetence and unprofessionalism, and rejected all their designs and ideas.

Yash was having a very hard time controlling the situation at the office. Maan was causing total havoc. Being from the finance department, Yash could not challenge whatever Maan was hurling at their technical department. Had Meera or Rahul been there they could've handled the situation, but now alone, Yash was at a loss of what he was to do.

Geet had not come in that day cuz Roshni was very sick. She had gotten ill at the sleepover party the night before and Geet could not leave her and come.

It was afternoon now, Yash had somehow gotten through half of the day, but it was getting impossible to control the typhoon called Maan Singh Khurana. Even Sasha was troubling Geet's staff now. What ever may happen, Yash was not going to trouble Geet with office worries right now when Roshni was unwell. He himself wanted to be home with her, but couldn't becuz of Maan. The guy was such a pain!!!!

The staff was missing their boss. Though a terror herself, she still had a soft corner for all of them and while she was around no outsider could trouble them. She shielded them like a mother. Everybody knew how motherly their boss was. So they all decided to call her for help. They did not know why she was away, otherwise they wouldn't have disturbed her.


Geet was sitting by Roshni's side, caressing her forehead. The doctor had just been there. She was much better. Just a little fever and weakness remained. Suddenly her phone rang.
"Hello", she answered it. It was her staff. They were very upset and troubled. Maan and Sasha had been causing havoc at the office since morning, and were literally torturing them.
"Don't worry, I'm coming"
Geet packed all the things she'd require for her unwell daughter, gently lifted her in her arms, resting her head all her left shoulder, and left for office. Yes her daughter was unwell, but she had to look after her staff too. She had always known that Maan was going to be difficult, and she couldn't leave her office and her staff to his mercy. And Roshni had been to the office with her tonnes of times before. When Geet worked non-stop for days at a stretch, coming home only as mere formality, Roshni came to office with her. And she rather enjoyed it. All her staff loved her a lot, and there were a lot many people to indulge her there than at home.

So, that was part 23
Hope you enjoyed!!!!!!!!!!!!Wink

I'll PM later.

Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 3:15pm

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VSai2008 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 28 January 2011 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
but u left us at a cliff hanger
cant really wait to see what happens next
how will geet manage maan?
n will maan b successful in troubling geet?
n what wud b maan's reaction after seeing roshni?
pls pls continue asap...

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