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Cry  NT is really a bitch 
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mirnalini Goldie

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Introduction of new character:
He's a very old and dear friend of Geet.
He used to live next door to her in Hoshiarpur.
He's a year older to her. They've been best friends ever since they can remember.
When Geet turned seventeen and Rahul eighteen, he left for US to study Mechanical Engeneering from The Masachusettes Institute of Technology aka MIT in Boston.
His family recently met with an accident and he has come to India right now to sell all his family property in Hoshiarpur so that he can permanently move back to US. He has no family left now.
When he went to Hoshiarpur he got to know about all that had happened with Geet and read In the papers all that had happened with her in Delhi as well. He was devastated to learn what hardships his dear friend had to go through and was very mad at himself for not having been there when she needed him the most. He's now looking for her in Delhi. He learned that she was getting married to Maan Singh Khurana. So he was headed that way when he saw Geet, clad in Bridal clothes and jewellrey, walking along a deserted road. It was nightfall, and he couldn't understand what she was doing here like this.
So guys, that was it. A new entry!!!!Wink
Geet's life's gonna take a turn for the better nowLOL
So stay tuned for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Tongue

Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 2:32pm

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plz do pm me

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mirnalini Goldie

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I hope you liked my new character.
Part 5:
He suddenly stopped his car. He had been looking for her for over a week now and here she was, right in front of him, walking aimlessly in her bridal trousseau.
"What's she doing here?", he whispered to himself, "isn't she supposed to be getting married right now?", "Geet!", he called after her, to no reply. "geet!!", he again called, this time higher, he rushed out of his car towards her, "Geet! It's me, Rahul", he said, but to his surprise, she still did not react.
Geet was strolling cluelessly on the roads of Delhi. She had no idea about where she was going or what has happening around her. All her senses had left her. She could not hear or feel anything. Suddenly her surroundings started to spin. Everything had turned black as she felt her legs give away under her weight, and after that, felt nothing at all.
To his horror, Rahul saw Geet sway, and collapse, as he caught her in his arms. He gently lifted his friend and placed her in his car. He immediately took her to a hospital in Gurgaon, close to the place he was staying. He knew that Geet  was pregnant, he had got that intelligence from her sister back in Hoshiarpur.
The doctor notified him that Geet's blood pressure had suddenly dropped  and she was in a very critical condition."Had you been even a minute late we would have certainly lost the child, and your friend would have slipped into a coma. You were just in time Mr. Garewal." "Do whatever it takes doctor, she is all I have left now in this world. Nothing should happen to her.", he said, very very worried.
Geet had been unconcious for two days now. The doctor said that everything was under control and that both the mother and the baby were fine, but they had to wait for her to regain conciousness.
Rahul hadn't left her side for even a minute. He had seen her after one and a half year, and that too in this state!
Geet slowly opened her eyes. She did not recognise her surroundings. Everything was white. Was she in heaven? She felt at peace, so for all she knew, she could be. But then she saw someone move beside her and press a bell. She could not see his face, and then the door opened and a kind looking middle aged woman wearing a white coat and a stethoscope round her neck came into view.
"Everything looks normal. She just needs to rest", said the lady with the kind face.
So she was in a hospital. Then the peace must be the tranquilizers at work. Geet went back to sleep.
She again opened her eyes. She saw that Someone sitting beside her. As she was feeling much stronger now, she decided to sit up. That Someone helped her "Careful Geet!", he said.
She knew that voice, she'd know it from a mile afar. She looked up, and her suspicions were confirmed, why, if it wasn't  Rahul, her childhood friend.
But Geet was still very numb, her mind was not reacting to what she was seeing. She could see Rahul, but could not react to his presence. Maan's words were still echoing in her ears and she had no mental strength to spend on anything else around her.
So guys, that was the 5th part.
Hope you enjoyed. I know it's been sad so far, but don't worry, Geet will revive in the next part.
Happy New Year by the way!!!!!!!Smile 

Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 5:53am

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it was a nice part
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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Awesome update
loved it
loved the new character
glad geet and her baby are fine
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
mirnalini Goldie

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Part 6 people, Part 6 :
Geet had been in the hospital for a week now. Though the doctors said that she could be taken home, Rahul did not want to take any risk with his friend's well being. She had not uttered a single word since she had regained conciousness. The doctor said that she was in shock. Rahul had read in the paper that Maan Singh Khurana's marriage had not concluded, for a reason unknown to all.
No one knew where Geet was, and Rahul decided to keep it that way. He did not want nagging reporters to add to her woes. What ever had happened at the wedding was the reason behind Geet's current state. They had to wait for her to snap out of this trance before they could say anything.
A psychiatrist examined Geet, and said "She's obviously in shock. She hasn't expressed herself. She hasn't even cried about whatever misfortune has struck her. We need her to react. And the reaction may come for something very close to her heart, something that is more important to her than whatever or whoever is the cause of her state."
"Her baby!!", yelped Rahul "She's pregnant doc, if she feels her child, she'll probably be pulled back to reality!"
"That's a good idea.", and saying this, the doctor connected Geet to a sonography machine.
A strange yet beautiful sound fell on her ears, she felt a weird sensation. She looked up, only to see an image that touched her heart. There, right in front of her, on a black screen, she could see the life growing inside her. Could hear its heartbeat. It was echoing in the room, the most melodious sound her ears had ever heard, the most soothing image her eyes had ever seen. It was her baby, her baby, her baby.
Geet's eyes welled up with tears at this. And after seven days' incessant trials of all the doctors and her friend, she cried, cried like she had never cried before. All that had been bottled up inside her came to the front, and she let it out, sobbing very hard. The man she had tursted the most, given herself completely to, had broken her in the worst way possible. He was her life, her soul, her everything, but he had severed all the threads tieing them that day, that day when he had hurled those baseless accusations at her one after the other. He had destroyed everything, their relationship, and hence ,her. How could he be so heartless, how could he do something like that?
Why, she was such an abominable fool! Crying over someone who neither cared about her nor respected her. Who had absolutely no faith in her, someone whose trust could be shaken by mere proofs and words was not worth her tears.
But what right did she have to blame Maan for her grievances, or anybody else for that matter. It was her own fault. Everything wrong that had happened to her was her own fault. She had been weak all her life. All her life she had sought external protection and comfort. Putting her trust and herself in the hands of her benefactors. First her family, then her husband Dev, and then Maan. Hadn't she promised herself to be independent after she had left Hoshiarpur! But no, she had then come under Maan's care. Why had she never taken her own responsibility, been her own strength, supported herself on her own? Why? Even now, it was her friend suppoting her, she was still not taking care of herself.  She gently looked up at her baby. She was not alone now, she had a responsibility. Did she want this same life for her child? A life of dependence, helplessness, an inferior life, a cursed life. What right did she have to bring her child into existence if she could not support it. Could she afford to repeat her mistakes now? She had made the same mistakes over and over again all her life and had suffered their consequences. But now her baby will also have to suffer, And she could not let that happen! She could not put the welfare of her child in someone else's hands. She had to take it in her own hands. She had to become the pillar of strength that her child could rely upon. She had no right to inflict pain upon an innocent who had still not come into this world.
Geet lifted her hands, wiped her tears off her face, and placed them gently on her womb, "I'll protect you", she whispered to her bump. "I'll shield you from all that goes around in this unfair world, I'll be the haven that you can seek in distress, one that I looked for, but never found. But I cannot look for it now, 'cause I myself have to be someone's haven, yours." And saying this she planted a kiss on her stomach.
She looked up to see a relieved Rahul. "I'm fine. How have you been?", and saying this she got up and hugged him. She had put everything behind her, and for now was just very glad at seeing her old friend back.
So that was the 6th partTongue
Hope you enjoyed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Wink
And yes, stay tuned for a lot of fun ahead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Smile

Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 2:33pm

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