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maanujaanu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 January 2011 at 2:09pm | IP Logged
hey i missed yr update dis morning whn i woke up
m soo used to reading ur updt

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mirnalini Goldie

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:54am | IP Logged

Part 22:

As expected, Yash had very well managed to burn the Aloo-gobhi he had attempted to cook for Geet.
The kids were away for a sleepover birthday party. And since the aloo-gobhi plan had turned out exactly as Geet had predicted, they decided to dine out.

Maan had gotten very restless after learning about Geet's date with Yash at the conference hall. So he had managed to retrieve her address from the office and was now standing outside her living room window, peeping in, trying to see what was happening inside. He couldn't let their date be successful.
The moron lover had burnt the aloo-gobhi that he had declared to cook so proudly. Maan groped to see more. They kept going in and out of his view so much that it was very difficult to make out what was happening. His back was aching like hell and his muscles burned. But he'd not leave before making sure that their date was a complete disaster, which wouldn't take long since the food had already gotten burnt.
But what was this!!!, they were going out!!!
Maan now hid behind the bushes, as he saw their car run past him. He quickly got into his car and raced after them. They went to an Italian restaurant, and Maan did not like what he saw there. He did not like it at all!!!


They went to Le' Italia, the best Italian restaurant in Boston. Though Geet preferred Indian food over any other cuisine, Yash simply loved Italian. Plus they had Indian every day at home so Geet didn't mind the change.

Since they were frequent customers there, they were showed to their special table. But to Geet's amazement the table was set up for a romantic date! With exquisite aroma candles, roses, red wine and violinists!
"What is all this Yash?", Geet asked him, shocked at the romantic arrangements when they were there for a simple dinner.
"I don't know!", Yash replied, equally bewildered, when the manager of the hotel walked up to them.
"Hello Mr. Yash!", he greeted them. "Hello ma'am!"
"I hope you liked our arrangements. Though this time we did it ourselves without your demands. You're such a special customer, and you always have it decorated thus when you dine here with your fiancee, that we thought we'd give you a surprise tonight!", and saying this he walked away.

Yash and Geet looked at each other and burst into peels of laughter. The manager had mistaken Geet for Yash's fiancee.
"So Ms. Handa, I had promised you a date at the office today, so, shall we?"
"Well,... why not!", Geet replied.
Yash pulled out a chair for Geet, and then got into his own.
Yash continued to crack his silly jokes and Geet continued to laugh.

Maan was standing behind a very tall plant near Yash and Geet's table, crushing the life out of the leaves in his hands. He had followed them in, and what had he seen!!!! exquisite aroma candles, roses, red wine and violinists!!! They were on a date!!!!!  And if that wasn't shock enough for a day, the manager had called Geet his FIANCEE!!!!!!!!! FIANCEE!!!!!!!! GEET WAS GETTING MARRIED AND THAT TOO TO THIS MORON YASH!!!!! THIS IRRESPONSIBLE MAN, WHO HAD NEXT TO NO SENSE AND WHO MAAN VERY EXPLICITLY WISHED TO THROTTLE RIGHT NOW!!!!

But why was Maan so concerned? She had deceived him for his money! Why was he bothered about what she did! Why, he loathed her to the core!! It wasn't becuz he still cared for her... no no!! That wasn't it!! He was simply curious.
But why was Geet marrying
him anyway??
It couldn't be for his money, since she was obviously richer than him, GOD! THE WOMAN OWNED A MULTI MILLION DOLLAR COMPANY NOW!!!!!!  So why marry a mere employ? Was it becuz she loved him??? 

This thought drilled holes through Maan's chest. The fact that Geet could so easily be happy with someone else while his happiness had been ruined forever did not agree with him!!
He would not let her be happy with Yash!! Never ever!!! He would forever ruin her happiness!! Even if it meant going against his own rules, what respect did she deserve from him anyway!!!! She was the one who had wronged him. She had to pay!!!! He was ready to cross all limits now!!!

Maan  had death in his eyes when he watched Yash dance with Geet to the music from the violins. His anger was increasing exponentially. He could no more take what he saw, and hence left.

But he'd make her pay!! He had been sober these past few days, but now  vengeance was all that was on his mind now!!

Precap: Maan goes to the office, swearing to make Geet's                             life hell... but with an aching back!!!

So that was part 22Wink
Hope you enjoyedLOL!!!!!!!!!!!!



Edited by mirnalini - 20 May 2011 at 3:14pm

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mrk-1 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
awsome yaar...loved it ...maan's revenge ???its more like geet's revenge on him LOL...continue soon

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heermeher IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
aching back loved ur precap

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rsroopali IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
maan nw is in full revenge mood n y is maan back aching
awesomeeeeeeee updateeeeeee
n thank god d children were safe frm yash brunt food

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Audiwalia IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:06am | IP Logged
Maan goes to the office, swearing to make Geet's                             life hell................ but with an aching back!!!............LOL LOL............... loved it...........but where were kids.....

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ammu5 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 January 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
loved ur update as usual

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