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Kaho na pyar hai...(monaya) updated pg 51 (Page 8)

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Posted: 31 December 2010 at 6:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mulan.

firstly i loved the pics yar!!! :) :)
as for the ff !!!!! tooo goood!!! u write really well yar!
m looking farward to more!
 do continue soon and thanks for the pm!! :) :)
hi glad u love the pics
and thanx am glad u love the ff
will update soon
and no prob about the pm
 
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srry fr the late entry but me totally in ...............

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Episode one:

In a neighbourhood of Delhi there was a ground where boys around the age 22-23 were playing cricket, the team that was balling was losing badly as the batter kept hitting straight sixes. No matter how fast the ball was, he hit it over the boundary every time. The last ball was left and they needed six runs to win the boy picks up the bed and hit the ball as it flies up over the boundary, the team burst into cheers. His teammates came and lifted him up in the air cheering for him. After a while, all the boys were just chilling and talking.

Karan; yar ajj teri waja seh hum match jeed gaye

Arjun: ha wakkai Mohit tumhari waja se hum log ye match jeed gaye

M: thanx wanx kyu keh rahe ho yar after all ye match toh humhe jeetna hi tha kuke hum sab ne itni mehnat jo karri thi

Benji: ha par tere bagair ye mehnat bikar main jati is ka credit tujhe hi jata hai kya shot mara tha tune unke fieldiers toh ball ko ghur the hi rehgaye (all of them burst in to laughter)

Just then another guy came running to them with a huge smile on his face

Jas: Guys guys guess wat papa ne ha kehdhi or sari peparetion bhi ho gayi

All: waht sachi main dude

J: haan haan hum sab ja rahe hai apne trip par

K,A, yes bare maza aye ga

B; ayashi karre gain

M; yar par shayad main na a sako

A: no way Mohit tumhe ana hi ho ga

M: ha par tum loog to mere dad ko jante hona woh hain hi ase

K: don't worry uncle koh hum samja lenge

 J; ha yar tere bina birkul maza nahi aye ga

M: acha theek ha main koshish karu gaan par tum sab ko meri help karni pare gi dad ko mana nein main

B: acha theek hai phir abhi chal kuke nikalna toh kal hi hai na

They all head towards mohits house to convince his dad and get permission for Mohit to come along with them on their trip

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In a crowded mall of Mumbai were sitting 3 girls in the cafe eating and talking there were a bunch of bags surrounding them it was obvious that they really have been shopping alot!

Rati: yar main neh toh khub sari shoping karli now im ready hamare trip ke liye

Taniya: yar wat do u mean tu hamare trip pei ye sab kapre lekar yai gi u know woh ek adventuureous trip hai or tu apne sarre naye kapre liya gi

Sanaya: taniya tu keh bhi kiss seh rahi hai yeh madam toh har jaga tayar hoke jati hai chaihe kuch bhi hojaye she said giggling (yes it is non other then Sanaya Irani)

R; atlest main toh a rahi hou tum toh sure bhi nahi hou

S; i know yar main kya karu mom permission dengi toh aougi na u know un ki permission ke bagair main nahi jaougi par pouch te wei darr lag ta hain agre unho ne mana kar dia toh sab jayenge is trip par sawaye mere thats why main right moment ka intizar kar rahi hou to ask her jab woh bhut ache mood main hongi na tab poucho gi then im sure shel say yes she said smiling

T: ha yar par tujhe permission mil jaye gin a

S: youall don't worry main ho na main mom ko mana lou gi then we'll go bhut maza ayega!

R:ok then aunty ko mana nei abhi chaltei ha because we have to leave tommarow na

S; thiek hai toh chalo mere ghar chal tei hai lets just home ke mom ache mood main ho

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At Mohit's home

A: plesee aunty plese Mohit ko hamare sat ane jidiye plese aunty plese uncle...

Mm: bacho Mohit......

K: dekh hum uska poora khayal rakhenge use kuch nahi hoga its an adventure trip but bhot safe hai

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At Sanays home

S; hi mom ab mere sath meri dostai bhi ayi hai

Sm: acha toh bulao na unhain andar

R,T : Hi aunty!

Sm; aoo bacho

S: woh mujhe ap se kuch bhut \arori bat karni thi

Sm: acha bulo na

S woh mom kya hai na woh main (she takes a deep breath and then starts speeking) woh mom kya hai bhot sari girlz ne milke plan banaya hai ek adventure trip jane ka joke kal jar aha or us trip pei mujhe bhi jana hai woh ek mahine ke trip hai plese mpm plese main jau (she said that all in one breath)

Sm; one month bte yeh bhot zyada hoga

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B: Uncle sirf one month kit oh bath hai hum kon sa Mohit ko apne sath hamesha ke liye lija rahe hai

Md: beta woh bat nahi hai par............

M; mom dad plese sab ja rahe hai or apko toh pata hai na mujhe is tara ke adventure trips kitne passand hai plesee

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S: mom anne ke bath ap jo kahe gi main woh karu gi ap ki har bath mano gi plese abhi jane dai

RT: plese aunty

Sm: ummmmm ok theek hai chali jao

RT:yes!

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Sd: alright Mohit tu chala ja........

A,k,b,J: yes!!!!!!!!!!!

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It was night now and Sanaya was in her room packing some how she was feeling that this trip will be way to good it will definetly be a trip she will remember all her life and she was very exited about it she kept thinking about it as she continued to pack her stuff

S: mujhe pata hai that i will always remember this trip doston ke sath bara maza ayega god im so exited zarur ye rip yadgar ho ga!

She continued her packing making sure not to pack to much or to little she was going for one month after all. She was going to miss home but this was a once in a life time thing she will not miss out on it no matter what.......

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Mohit was in his room, his room was a huge mess as everything was everywhere and he was in the middle of the mess packing away, he didn't have much time the bus would leave early morning tommarow he has to be there by 6 am so he had to do all of his packing right now. He was continuesly thinking about the trip while packing, some hoe he knew it would change his life he felt that it would change everything but he decided to shrug that feeling off.

M; pata nahi asa kyu lag raha hai ke kuch hone wala hai is trip pei kuch asa that will change me forever......mohit tu pagle ho gaya hai esa kya hoga is trip pei its just a adventure trip now focus on packing

He went back to packing his stuff he was packing very light as he didn't like travelling heavy he preferred travelling light. After he finished packing he went to bed with a cute januable smile on his face exited about tommarow.

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Precap:

Monaya meet for the first time

 

Hi guys ok this was the first episode of my new monaya ff kaho na pyar hai..... first of all sorry for updating a little late its just that my school have started all my final projects are due and at the end of this month my exams are coming so i have no time at all but i will try and update the next part as soon as possible

I do not know how this turned out i hope not to bad and hope u liked it also i know this update had alot of Mohit's and sanaya's friends involved in it to but later on like after one or to update that will change as it will mainly focus on monaya i need the friends in it for now

ps: i know it was short will update long one next time
 
Love

Tanzeel

 



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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Wao superb dear yar.plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
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tanzeel it was sooooooooo awesome love it

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mindblowing update....cont soon

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lovely updateee!!!! cant wait to see monayas first meet....plzz continue asap

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