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Kaho na pyar hai...(monaya) updated pg 51 (Page 11)

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Posted: 12 January 2011 at 6:54pm | IP Logged
nice 
i can't wait for more 
 

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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 4:18am | IP Logged
update sooooooon tanzi.....
im waiting desperately!

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thanx everyone for liking it and for replying ur comments mean alot to me and i love reeding them

but i cant reply to each one of ur comments ryt now because of stupid exams i will try and update asap
love u all
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Posted: 14 January 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Look At me i cudnt comment
see i comment aftre 10 dayzzCry
woh bhi on my bestie's FF
sorry toh nahee keh saktee but yu know SKOOLZ!!!!
waise the first part was AMAZING!!!!
i luved it and parents ko manana trip ke liye 
waiting for monaya meetDay Dreaming
awesome part
do cont soon
also send PM as usual

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
plz do cont sooon n do add me in ur PM list

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Episode 2
Kaho na pyar hain..........
The sunrays came in throught th window and fell upon her face, which disturbed her sleep, she tried going backk to bed again but then her alaram clock rang, she turned it off and again went to sleep.........then all the sudden she jumped out of bad with a shock look on her face
S; oh shit..........mujhe toh ab tak nikal jana chaiye tha.......sarre mera intizar kar rahe hongein..........Sanaya ajj toh tu sabse pitne walli hain
she hurried and ran to the washroom to freshen up good thing she did all her packing last night she came out of the washroom wearing a light blue jeans with a white tang top and over that she put on yellow skin tight hoddie looking very soimple yet cute she ran out of her room and rushed down stairs.........
S; ma main late ho rahi hoon breakfast kaha hain
SM; toh marhanhi ab uthi hain........kabse awaz laga rahi thi main....
S; sorry mom woh akhn hi nahi khulhi main kya karti......
she quickly did her breakfast and said bye to her family then ran out towards the bus stop where she was sappose to meet her friends....as the driver stopped the car she ran to her friends
S; sorry sorry soorry......woh late hogayi par kya karthi neend nahi toothi
pata hi nahi chala kab subha ho gayi
R; sanaya tum na ajj agre bus miss ho jati toh
S; kaha na sorry baba....
T; acha koi bath nahi par jis tarah tum chal rahi ho na mujhe toh lag ta hai ke iss trip main ek dafa toh tum bus zarur miss karro gin
S; tum kuch acha nahi bul sakti yar..
R;acha acha chalo ab iss seh pehle ke hum sab ki bus miss ho jaye
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On the other hand mohit was still sleeping in his room......he had no intention of waking up because he loves his sleep...... his favorite pass time............ sleeping!..........He slept peecefully on his bed with a cute januable smile on his face
MM; hey baghwan yeh larka bhi na.....kabhi nahi sudrein ga........har cheez idhar udhar pekhi wi hain or khud aram seh sora raha hain yeh bhi nahi hosh ke jana hain isse........mohit mohi beta utho mohit
M; mom sonne do na itni jaldi kyu utha rahi hou..........mujhe itni achi neend a rahi hain
MM; kal jab minatte kar ke trip pen jane ki permission li thi tab sochna tha na ke subha jaldi uth ke jana parre ga
M; trip! he jumped out of his bad with a horrifyed look on his face..........mujhe toh jana tha time kya ho raha hain
MM; agre toh bhag ke jayye ga toh abbhi puch chaye ga chal jaldi kar warna bus miss ho jaye gin
Mohit rushed out of bed and into the washroom he put on his dark blue jeens and a black t shirt over it  and then he ran out grabbing his bag skipping breakfast he ran to the bus stop...................
A; yar yeh mohit kaha reh gaya hain
B; pata nahi yar yeh khud toh late hoga hammarhi bhi bus miss kar wayga
AR; woh a gayain bhai sahab
they all turn into the direction and saw mohit running towards them
M; sorry guys main late ho gaya i slept in
A; koi bat nahi abhi time nahi hain bus jane walli hain charo bus main....
They sat in the bus and left..................
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People going on this adventure trip had to register with the company organising the 1 month long trip...no metter what city they were from they are all sappose to meet in Lucknow and all together proceed from there........
At the bus stop in lucknow is where everyone met to proceed all busses were already here but they were waitng for the group that was coming from dilhi............
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At bus stop
S; guys pata nahi or kitna intizar karna parre ga is dilhi ki bus ka main abhi washroom seh hokke ati hou ok
R; ok sanaya par jaldi ana pata nahi kab bus ajaye or kab hum sab ko jana parre
S; alright main abhi ayi..........
as Sanaya left the bus from dilhi arrived and everyone came down at the end was mohit with his bag on his one sholder and a smile on his face he got down with his friends
M; guys main abhi aya washroom seh hokke
A; jaldi kar dude
M; haan bas abhi aya
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Adventure trip organiser= ATO
ATO; attention everyone ap main se jojo yaha is adventure trip ke liye ayye hain woh plese yaha mere pas a jayi yeh plese jaldi a jayi yeh
everyone gather around though mohit  and sanaya were still in washrooms
ATO; ok ap log woh do busse dekh rahe hain ap loggo ko unmain bethna hain they will take us to our destintions.........now before we go main ab sab koh bata na chata hoon jaha hum ja rahe hain waha aksar network nahi attein so its possible that ur cells wont work isi liye hamesha group main hi travel kariye ga........ok now bakki ki instructions waha poch ke now load the buses guys we are gona have a blast this month..............
everyone cheered and headed towards the busses........
A; yeh mohit kaha reh gaya hain
B; pata nahi yar
ATO; any problem guys
A; hamara friend washroom main hain
ATO; dont worry il go get him ab log jaye behteh
everyone goes and sit on the busses now finally sanaya comes back but she sees that the bus her friend swere in was full so she had to go to the next bus so she went and sat there and then finally mohit came to his friends were also in the other bus so he had to sit in the other one where there was only one seet avalibal next to sanaya...........
then the busses started
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for a while niethe rone of them said any thing to each other then finally sanaya couldnt stay quiet because she loves alking so she turn towards him and spoke
S; hi my name is Sanaya
Mohit looks towards her and smile
M; hi main mohit
S;.........hmmmm so where u from
M; main dilhi seh
S; wow dilhi main hamesha waha jana cha thi ti by the way main mumbai seh hoon
M; cool......
S; so tum yaha akele i mean tum is trip pei alone kyu aye hoon
M; mere sath mere friends hain par woh dusri bus main hain or tum
S; same....meri sari dostain us bus main chali gayi or mujhe yaha ana parra (she said making a sad face)
S; so tum kartein kya hoon, i mean u a student kya?
M: hmmm yup
S; kya hmm yup main borr ho rahi hoon atlest talk to me na
Mohits pov; pata nahi kesi larki hain dikh nahi rahan im not intrested in talking, na jan na pechan main tera mehman hmmm oh god mujhe toh neend a rahi hain phir seh kash yaha ek takiya hota main so hi jata
Sanayas pov; lagta hai quiet rehne wala larka hain a little shy ya phir mujh seh bat nahi karna cha tah... isko dekh khe to lag raha hain yeh kisse waqt bhi so jaye ga........main toh akele behtei behtei borr hon gi..........ap kya karro yeh toh so gaya......umm idea jab tak yeh so raha hain main ganne sun ti hoon
in that way sanaya got busy listning to songs and mohit got busy completing his sleep which got disturb in the morning but the journy was just starting they had no idea what was awaiting them ahead..............................
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precap; Monaya talk
S; ab hum kya karre
M; pata nahi tumhe hi shock ta apni dost ke pas behtne ka
ap bhuktoh
Sanaya gets really woried and almost teary whicch mohit notices and........
 
ok guys this was episode 2 of kaho na pyar hainWink i hoped you enjoyed it plese do tell me what u thought of it
 
love u all
tanzeel

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Posted: 16 January 2011 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Res. Update 2mrw.
 
*edited*
 
cute update.........
 awww mohit sleeping........he's looked so cute while sleepingLOLEmbarrassed
awwww sanaya getting bored.........finally they met..........now waiting form sparks
update soon.
thanks for the pm.


Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 17 January 2011 at 7:11am

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