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||Odyssey - An MN & SG FF|| Promo-Pg 33 (Page 13)

_TheJoker- IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 4:39am | IP Logged
okay............so first of all a very very happy new yearHug..though its a bit lateLOL...now coming to the update........amazingBig smile ....too good...i must say its a perfect storyClap....loved sam-mayank and gunjan bondTongue...so mayank has a pastOuch...that roshnee part was hillarious ..."chipku"....is the perfect adjective for herROFL...but awesome part
continue soon

love
tashu

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged

Hey.. this Sharma-Shergill Group of Companies is like ur FF Shar and Cindy the update was Awesome

This is my first FF I am reading other than Maneet FF I am a crazy fan of MG but this FF I loved reading it is too good written very well liked the understanding btw SaJan n the respect Mayank has on Nupur was not able to stop smiling when he said "For the sake of Gunjan. For the sake of Gunjan" n Roshini is such a chipku that Mayank had to get rid of her n as mayank no one want to become kebab mein haddi would wait to see the entry of Nupur

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:09am | IP Logged
*Edited*

Lovely, girls! I liked the whole thing, all nicey for the beginning! Though, I guess you need to revise the chapter, there are a few grammatical errors if you notice. Embarrassed

I adore the bond of the Mayank-Samrat-Gunjan trio has, its really nice. And then we have Shilpa, I'd love to have her as a pivotal character here - no wonder, she tops the list of my most missed MJHT things. Roshni! :D Her portion was particularly the highlight, funny to the core. Lastly, just like Mayank - I don't understand why they are after him regarding the whole love thingie, let the fellow have his space and time. Poor thing! :P

P.S. Pardon me for commenting late. =)

-Kankshita


Edited by -Kanky- - 06 January 2011 at 9:13am

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged

dear S&S
Happy new year
the update was awesome
wonderful dear
loved it very much
keep it up

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 7:25am | IP Logged
hey 
read u r FF 
liked it 
waiting for the update

pls add me to u r PM list

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Oh Wow!!!!!!!!!! That was toooo good!!!!
I was able to imagine each expession by Mayank....u wrote so well!
 
Continue soon!
 
Love,
Palak

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
great update dear...............

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Posted: 04 January 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
So, I caught up with the update, and I'm not so late either. That's amazing!!!

You see, it was the title of this FF that first dragged me to read it, but now the characters seem engrossing too. I mean, each character has this sort of hidden depth in them which displays their inner qualities. I don't know whether it was intended to be so or not, but it surely has come across nicely. The portrayal of the Samrat-Mayank, Samrat-Gunjan and Mayank-Gunjan relationship is beautiful, but I liked the Mayank-Gunjan one the best.

I presume that it is on this 'cruise' that the readers will get to know about Mayank's past and Nupur's behaviour. I'm hoping this relation starts off on a positive note.

I'm glad to see such a positive response to your FF. God bless, may you have a better response next time.

Update soon, people. I'm eager to read more of this one.

With love,
Aishwarya

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