Posted:
13 years ago
*Edited*
Alrightey! I like how Nupur is portrayed and the rapport she and Gunjan have is really cool, I loved the initial parts of the update. And then the middle, dancing and romancing in the middle of a crowd - awesome. :| Okay, sorry - next time, I would zip up about the part I wouldn't like! The show stealer: Nupur, anyways. I like the pace, the actually thing is nearing. Looking forward to reading more!
Very well written girls, and your efforts are showing. Though, I guess you did not revise this one too. Nonetheless, you made a very good update! Very nice!
-Kankshita
Edited by -Kanky- - 13 years ago
