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-pixie-

@-pixie-

IF-Rockerz

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Wow Sharmishtha! That was brilliant!

Now be a doll and email this to the writers pronto!😆

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236577

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

I loved it. Especially the part where he escaped from the party. I originally thought he was going to make her jealous but he's so in love, he just can't resist her. 🤣
Great job. 👍🏼

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555070

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee
hi i want cv to read these line and add it in the show as it is... loved it thanks for posting

I wish 😍😆

Originally posted by: Bul3
LOVELY..the dialogues were outstanding..would really really love to see something similar on the show!

Me to 😛 😆

Thanks for the nice words.

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566134

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

Very well written. (:

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555070

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Urvi-
Wowzaa!! You've really kept the characters in consideration when writing this haven't you? It seems so real!

Yeah. I try to keep the character as in the actual story. Glad that it came out that way to the readers too. 😊 Thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: -sofiya-
very niceeeeeeeeeee OS
love it

Thank you 😳

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome OS..
Loved it
Gr8 job

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555070

Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmiiish
will read later;)

Please do 😳 😆

Originally posted by: zaqxsw
Beautifully written...
I just loved reading it... 😊
Please write more soon...
Now m off to read ur other OSs as well... 😊😊😊😊😊

Thanks! Do let me know the feedback on other ones too. 😊

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey mishta it was a really nice OS, btw can u pm me next time you write anything?😊

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@roseinbloom

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

What's really outstanding about this is that this is the kind of situation...these are the kinds of dialogues and emotions we would see in the actual serial..

You really captured their emotions/reactions well that I am dying to see this EXACT scenario in GHSP ! 😍

Great Job! 👏

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 13 years ago

Heyy

OMGG this was beautiful!!...brilliant job at portraying geet's innocence and maan'strue love for geet....cuz it is soo mskish to leave his own bachelor's party cuz someone here can't stay without geet!😆😉

can you please add me to your pm list if you have one?😳

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