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OS - NivRen - Is This Love?

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Posted: 29 December 2010 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Okay guys many members insisted that I write FF's or OS. Now I am not good with keeping FF's on the long run, so once in a while i'll post up a scene or 2 on NivRen (Gosh you members like torturing me don't you! LOL First NivRen Vms and now scenes LOL)
Anyways this is my first ever OS on NivRen
 
 
Is This Love?
 
 
Niveditha languidly stretched, enjoying the warmth of the covers and the feel of the sheets sliding over her body. A slight smile appeared on her face when she remembered about her first date with Viren. The thought was interrupted as her hand came into contact with something rough, it felt like paper.

Turning, she spied a small note with a bouquet of white lilies and a box of chocolates nestled among the covers. Niveditha slightly smiled. "Viren!" Her eyes looked straight at the couch to just see a glimpse of Viren sleeping, but he wasn't there. Her eyes searched the room for viren but he was nowhere. Niveditha reads the note that read
 

"Kal ki shaam mere liye sabse haseen shaam thi. Main yeh shaam kabhi nahi bhoolnga. Thank You!

Tumhara, Viren <3"

Niveditha felt a smile appear on her face. "Viren..." suddenly she felt a flash on her face, she looked here and there but couldn't find anyone there. Suddenly viren appears at the door "6" and runs away. Niveditha couldn't help herself but smile. Her eyes turn to the clock and to her surprise she slept in. She quickly gets out of the bed to freshen up and heads straight down to the kitchen to prepare the breakfast. By the time she reached entered the kitchen the breakfast was almost prepared.

"chachi ji, maine aapki kuch madat kardoon?" vandana turned to look at nivi and says "arrey nahi beta sab hogaya hai." Vandana noticed that Niveditha was smiling, her face was glowing. "waise aaj tum bohut khush lag rahi ho. Kuch khaas baat hai kya?" Niveditha was clueless and didn't know what to tell vandana. What could she say that she was smiling because the wonderful evening viren and she spent yesterday?. "Nahi chachi ji woh..." suddenly a voice says "bhabi" chanchal walks in; her expression immediately changes as soon as she sees Niveditha. The smile had disappeared. "Bhabi, baahar sab breakfast ke liye intezaar kar rahe hai." Vandana says "haan, bas ho gaya, tum baitho, main lekar aati hoon." Chanchal gives a cold shoulder to Nivi and leaves. Niveditha says "chachi ji, main le jaati hoon." Nivi heads to the dining room with the tray. There he was sitting on the other end of the dining table, giving her that mischievous look of his. Nivi tried really hard not to smile but couldn't succeed, Viren's smile gets even bigger seeing nivi smile. Nivi has just finished serving viren, and was about to leave just when she felt someone grab her hand. The hand was soft, yet very strong. Nivi turned to look at viren in surprise, who smiles mischievously and then winks at her. Nivi's eyes widen seeing this, she struggles to get her hand away, she continuosly signalled viren to let go of her hand. Viren says "arrey tum bhi humare saath baith kar khao na." Nivi still struggling to get her hand away says "viren main baad mein khaungi." Chanchal's eyes were continuously on Nivi and Viren. "Niveditha" said chanchal sounding strict. Viren quickly let's go of Niveditha's hand. "Jao kitchen se jaakar mere liye chai lekar aao." Nivi gives a slight nod and leaves to get tea for chanchal, viren seemed a little annoyed at it, as he simply hates the way nivi is being treated by chanchal. "Ma...aap humesha niveditha ke saath aisa bartao kyun karti hai? Ghar mein aur bhi toh log hai na jo aapke liye chai la sakte hai?" says ivren sounding a little irritated. Nivi arrives with the tea and sees that Viren is arguing with chanchal. Viren stops the instant he sees Nivi indicating him not to say anything, chanchal too notices this. Nivi quietly keeps the tea on the table near chanchal and was about to leave when chanchal says "Bohut khush hogi na tum? Aise ma bete ke beech mein jhagda karwa ke." Viren has lost his cool and couldn't tolerate Chanchal's taunts; he immediately gets up and leaves the table. Nivi sees how upset Viren is and heads to stop him.

Angry Viren sitting on the bed, Nivi arrives and sees how upset viren is. She knew it won't be appropriate to raise the same issue again, but she couldn't see him this upset either. Nivi thought to still give it a try, she sits beside him and pretends as if nothing happened. "Hmmmm...kya hua?" Viren looks at Nivi and says "jaise ki tumhe kuch pata hi nahi." Nivi says "Viren, kya hoagaya agar ma ne kuch keh diya toh? Mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga." Viren says "Par mujhe bura lagta hai, koi tumse aise baat kare mujhe pasand nahi." Nivi sits there resting her chin on her palm and says "hmmmm...." she gets an idea to cheer him up and decides to look for something. "Uhhh..Viren, tumne mera braclet dekha hai jo karwa cauth pe tumne mujhe gift kiya tha?" Viren looks at nivi and says "kya?" Nivi turs to look at him and says "mera bracelet, pata nahi main kaha rakh ke bhool gayi." Viren says "wardrobe mein pada hai." Nivi opens her wardrobe and finds the gift box resting there just on her other jewellery boxes. "Mil gaya." She turns to look at viren who still seems a little lost. Nivi begins to look for something again. "Uhhh...viren...mujhe woh chocolates ka box nahi mil raha." Viren looks here and there and finds it resting it right next to him. "Yahaan hai." Says viren still not interested. Nivi looks at viren and then at the chocolates and gives a smile. "Lo saamne rakhe hai aur mujhe hi nhi dikhe." Nivi takes the box of chocolates. "arrey...ek aur cheez hai jo kho gayi hai. Kidhar hai?" nivi begins to look here and there again. Viren gets up and says "ab kya kho gaya?" Nivi looks at viren and says "actually mere dost ki hassi kho gayi hai. Kab se dhoond rahi hoon par mil hi nahi rahi." Hearing this viren feels a smile appear on his face. "mil gayi." Both share a small eye lock! "VIREN! MAIN OFFICE JAA RAHA HOON! TUM CHAL RAHE HO?" says siddarth out loud from the lounge room.

NivRen break their eye lock. Nivi says "viren, tum office jao."  Viren makes a puppy face and says "Jaana zaroori hai kya?' Nivi smiles and says "haan! Tumne mujhse promise kiya tha ki tum business mein interest loge. Yaad hai?" Viren thinking and says "really? Maine aisa kaha tha?" Nivi's smile gets even bigger, and seeing this viren too smiles. "ab jao, warna late ho jaoge." Says nivi. Viren was about to leave, when he turns around and walks back to nivi. He indicates her to come a little closer, nivi moves her face a little forward, viren tells her to come a little more closer, nivi again step a little forward, viren indicates her to step more forward. Nivi says "viren, kya hai?" viren indicates her to just come a forward. Nivi does it one more time, and suddenly she feels Viren's lips pressing against her cheek. Nivi's eyes widened and she looks at viren in surprise who has now run out from the door. She had no idea what had just happened. Did viren just kiss her? Nivi slightly brushes her fingers on her cheek and feels a smile appearing on her face.

 THE END!

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Edited by SanKi4eva - 29 December 2010 at 2:03am

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OMG sanju this is fantastic i loved it. welldone girl. OMG amazing i am out of words do write moreClap

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thanks priya and  shova.
not that romantic but this what i actually would've prefered the next morning of their date!
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simply loved it girl.....u r amazing writer to Hug
i have small request can u please give the English meaning  for the Hindi parts u have added 
i'm sorry  if is to much to ask .....i'm a Srilankan so i only understand Little bit of hindi ...if  u can fulfill my request it will be super Awesome girl

take care
Naley



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sanju ...just loved it..do keep writing.

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sooo sweeeet....thanku thanku thanku 4 dis os....2days sbs segment n ur os made my day....pls do make more....

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Hey Sanju, the OS was absolutely lovely. Thanks dear..

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