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Chapter 64

He left early from the office so he could go home and spend some time with his wife since he knew she would be sitting in their room, getting bored. "just a few days left, then he will be a dad to not one, but two kids," he thought as a smiled crept up on his face. "but his heer? What was going to happen to her? No matter how hard he tried to think positively, the doctor's words rang in his words. The fact that heer's life depended on less than a 10% chance," he thought as he pulled into the juneja mansion driveway and parked the car. As he walked into the house, "aree'prem agaya beta'main tera hi intezaar karahi thi," gayatri said. "kya huwa ma?" he asked. "heer ne lunch nahi kiya'kehrahi hai keh uska maan nahi hai'main usse maana ne bahut kosish ki aur usne kehdiya keh woh baad mein khahegi'tu usse baat karna," gayatri said worried about heer's health. "uski tabeyat toh theek haina?" prem asked concerned. "ha, woh subhe usse thodi chakkar agayi thi aur usse ulti bhi aarahi thi'par kulraj ne usse dawayi dehdi hai. Shayad issliye woh khaane kehliye dar rahi hai," gayatri said. "main dekh tha hoon'aap tension mat lijiye," prem said and left to talk to heer. He walked into their room to see her lying on the bed with her eyes closed. He wasn't sure whether she was asleep or just resting. Hearing someone enter the room, she opened her eyes and saw her husband placing his bag and coat on the couch. "tum aagaye,"she said as she sat up. "ha'aur tumari complaint already mil chuki hai mujhe," he said. "complaint? Maine kya kiya hai?" she asked confused. "maa ne bataye keh tumari tabeyat subhe se theek nahi hai'kya huwa? Tum theek toh hona?" he asked as he took a seat next to her on the bed. "ha woh subhe se bahut uneasy feel horaha hai'issliye kuch khaane ka maan nahi tha," she said. He could see there was sadness in her eyes and no matter how much she tried to hide it, she couldn't hide it from him. "heer'kya baat hai?" he asked taking her hand in his. "tum aise kyun pooch rahe ho? Aisa kuch nahi hai," she replied. "heer'mujhe bhi nahi baataungi keh kya baat hai? Kya huwa? Tum itni udaas kyun ho?" he asked again. "prem'mujhe baccho ki room dekhna hai," she told him. "baccho ki room'iss waqt?" he asked. "ha prem'mujhe abhi room dekhna hai'please," she said. "heer'tum toh jaanti hona keh ma tumari kitni chinta karti hai'woh iss waqt tume kuch nahi karne denge," prem said. "par mujhe room dekhna hai'please," she pleaded. "theek hai'tum aabh khaana khalo'phir main tume raat koh ley jaunga," he said. "raat koh?" she asked. "ha'sabh keh sone khe baad'aabh khalo," he said. "tum saachi ley jaoge na?" she asked making sure. "ha baba'pakka ley jaunga....aabh haas toh doh," he said as she smiled. Later, he went to gayatri and got food for heer and fed his wife so she can rest again.

Heer waited patiently for everyone else to go to sleep. After checking that no one was in the living room or the kitchen, prem came back to the room. Picking her in his arms, he slowly took her upstairs. Reaching the room, he placed her back on her feet and opened the door, letting her in and he followed. The room was same as they it had been when they came there a few weeks ago. Heer walked in and took a seat in one of the couches. She looked around and smiled feeling the warmth inside that her babies will spend their childhood in this room. She may or may not be here, but at least her touch'her memories'her feelings will be there. She got up and touched the cribs, the strollers, the picture frames, and finally the jingle. Prem knew how heer felt each time she came into this room, so he just stood behind her letting her take her time. As she looked at everything, her heart clenched in pain that she wouldn't be there. She wouldn't be there for her kids....to care for them'to protect them'to love them'to play with them. As soon as she bought them in this world, she would leave them all alone. Thinking about this, made her burst into tears. Prem ran up to her, "heer'kya huwa?" he asked. Without saying anything, she threw herself in his arms and started to cry more. "heer'samalo apne aapko'kya huwa hai?" prem asked not sure what had caused her to cry. "main apne baccho koh dekhna chathi ho prem," she said in between her sobs. "tum humare baccho koh zaroor dekhogi heer'tume kuch nahi hoga," he told her. "hum dono jaante hai keh kya hone wala hai'meri wajase humare baccho ek ma nahi milegi'uska pyaar nahi milega'sirf meri wajase," she said as tears wetted her cheeks. "heer'issmein tumari kohi galati nahi hai'tum apne aapko kyun doshi maan rahi ho," he said wiping her cheeks. "tume paata hai jab mujhe paata chala keh main maa banne wali ho toh mere andar ek alag ehsaas jaagaya tha. Aur main jaana chathi thi keh joh ehsaas mujhe unne mere andar paake hota hai'kya wohi ehsaas aur wohi khushi mujhe unne inn haato mein lekar bhi hogi. Par aabh main shayad khabhi nahi jaan paungi," she said as she looked at her bare hands. "tume kuch nahi hoga'humare bacche aur tum dono theek honge'bas bhagwan peh baroosa rako," he said. "humare saath hi kyun prem? Kyun? Humne toh khabhi kisika bura nahi chaha phir bhi mujhe hi itni baadi saaza kyun? Pure nau (nine) meine maine dono jaano koh humne andar paala hai'mehsoos kiya hai aur shayad main unne dekh bhi nahi paungi," she said as she collapsed to the floor. Prem stood there dumb-folded as tears rolled down his cheeks. He didn't know what to tell her or how to comfort her. May be he couldn't comfort her. What she felt only she knew. He had been there all through the pregnancy, but only she feels what it is like to be a mother. He has the chance to see their kids for the rest of his life. He will have a chance to see them group up. He will know what they will be like when they were adults, but she didn't even know whether she will see them right after they are born. He sat next to her and cuddled her in his arms and let her cry because it seemed like the best way to help her pour her heart out. Sometimes, life becomes so helpless that even the last tear is not able to conquer the pain your heart feels.

The clock struck twelve and she was cuddled into her warm blanket as it was perfect for the cold, rainy night outside. She moved in her asleep and slowly opened her eyes. Seeing the sight in front, surprise and shock both hit her. She closed her eyes thinking that she might be dreaming, but when she opened them again, it was still the same. She moved her eyes around the room and a smile crept up on her lips seeing the flickering lights. The room was decorated with white and pink candles and red roses. Going around the room, her eyes stopped in the middle where her husband stood, dressed in his night tracks, with a gift wrapped box in his hand. She slowly sat up, "prem'yeh sabh kya hai?" she asked. He smiled and walked up to her, "Ek saal phele aaj keh din kuch huwa tha? Something very special," he told her. She tried to remember but she was too tired to think, "kya huwa tha? Tum hi batao na," she said. "heer'guess toh karo," prem said. "prem'tum raat keh baara baje ek 8 months pregnant lady koh quiz karahe ho'its not going to work very well," heer said as he chuckled. "ok'main hi baata ho. Ek saal phele aaj keh din ek handsome hunk from Canada joh shaadi se dhoor bhaagta tha woh ek ambala ki  bholi aur khoobsurat ladki se mila tha," he said. Realization hit her! How could she forget? It was today that they had met at the mandir one year ago. "I am so sorry prem'paata nahi main kaise bhul gayi," she said feeling guilty. "hey'its ok...tum udaas mat ho'aaj keh din toh nahi," he said as she smiled. "waqt kitna jaldi badal jaata haina? Ek saal phele hum ek dusre kehliye ajnabee the aur aaj'," she stopped getting emotional. "hum ek dusre ki duniya hai aur saari duniya humare liye ajnabee hai," he said completing her feelings. "tume yeh sabh kabh kiya? Mera matlab tum toh mere se phele sohgaye the?" she asked. "aisa tume lagtha hai'main toh natak karaha tha," he said pretending to raise his collar showing off his smartness. "wow Mr. Juneja'I am impressed. Tum toh kaafi smart ho," she said as they both giggled. He was happy to see her laugh out loud after almost weeks. After the godh bharai, heer's health was worsening constantly. From the past few days, she has become extremely weak and wasn't even able to walk the small distance that she used to before. She hated lying on her bed all day and the worst was all the medicines that she had to take which even made her sick sometimes, but she didn't say a word as she knew that it was necessary to take them for their children. "prem'kaha kohgaye?" she asked bringing him out of his thoughts. "kuch nahi'bas sooch raha tha keh tumne mujhe uss din kaha accha sajaya tha," he said reminding her how she had messed his white kurta with colors. "sajaya nahi tha'woh toh rang lagaya tha woh bhi galti se," she said. "uss galti ka kuch afsoos hai aap ko Mrs. Juneja?" he asked teasing her. "afsoos? Woh meri zindagi ki best galti thi," she said as they both smiled at each other. "yeh tumare liye," he said as he took a rose from the side table and gave it to her. "aur yeh bhi," he said placing the gift box between them on the bed. "yeh kya hai?" she asked. "khud dekh lo," he said opening the box. "Chocolate cake?" she said as her face lit up like a kid. "nope'its black forest chocolate cake with chocolate frosting and with chocolate chips on top," he described precisely as heer felt her kids crave for the dessert. The both took the knife and cut the cake celebrating their first meeting that destiny had set up to tie their lives together forever. He took the piece and offered it to her. She took a little piece from the one he was holding in his hand and they both fed each other happily. She smiled as she threw herself in his arms. He smiled as he wrapped his arms around her, both remembering their life's sweet memory that will stay in their hearts till eternity.

She was eight months and two weeks into her pregnancy and it was time to go to the doctor. Each time it was time for an appointment, she felt her heart speed up and her palm sweat. Even though, no one knew about the complications, they both did. She didn't care about her, but if anything happened to the two lives inside her, she will not be able to forgive herself because no matter what, she felt that it was because of her that all this was happening. If she was strong enough, then her babies and her prem wouldn't have to go through everything they were. "heer'kaha kohgayi?" he asked brining her out of her thoughts. "kuch nahi'bas kuch sooch rahi thi," she replied. "aabh chalo'hum late horahe hai," he said and that's when she looked around and saw that they were already at the hospital. Prem got out of the car and came to the other side to slowly help her out. He made her sit on the wheel chair and started to wheel her in. Walking into the room, "hello Mr. and Mrs. Juneja," the doctor greeted. "hello doctor," they both said in unison. "so how are you feeling heer?" the doctor asked as she took a seat in front of them. "I am fine," heer said still nervous. "Don't worry'it's just a checkup'just a few more days and they will be with you soon," the doctor said referring to the babies as heer and prem smiled. They then went into the check up room next door and prem was with heer as he knew how nervous she got everytime they had to come here. He stood next to her holding her hand, supporting her and telling her that everything will be ok. Few minutes later, they returned to the doctor's room and took a seat. "Is everything ok doctor?" heer asked when the doctor didn't say anything for a few seconds. "yes heer. I just have a few more tests I want you to have done. For that, we will need some blood samples and my nurse will take you down to the lab," the doctor replied. "blood test?" heer said as she looked at prem. She hated needles and she hated when someone poked into her. "just a few tests, it wont hurt," the doctor said. The nurse came in and took heer with her and prem was left with the doctor. "prem'I needed to talk to you," the doctor said. "yes doctor?" prem said becoming attentive. The doctor started talking and prem listened carefully as he didn't want any mistake when it comes to heer's health. "I am sorry prem'I know I have to tell heer all this but knowing you two from the past few months; I think its best if you talk to her about this," the doctor said. "It's ok doctor, I understand," prem said. Just then, heer came back. Seeing prem, "kya huwa? Sabh theek toh haina?" she asked. "ha heer'sabh theek hai? Tume zyaada dard toh nahi horaha haina?" he said looking at the band-aid on her arm. "thoda thoda," she pouted. He smiled, "chale?" he asked and she nodded and they left from there. On the way, heer kept seeing the little band-aid and making painful faces. He smiled'she called him a kid and now she herself is sulking over a small band-aid. Seeing something at the side of the road, an idea popped into his head. He pulled the car to the side and parked. "prem'kya huwa? Ruk kyun gaye?" she asked. "Tum yahi raho'main doh minute mein aata hoon," he said. "par tum jaa kaha rahe ho?" she asked again. "heer'I will be back in a minute....tum yahi raho," he said as he got out of the car and heer sat there wondering where he was going. Heer waited patiently and prem returned in a couple minutes. "yeh lo?" he said handing her a white, round plastic box. Heer took the box and opened it. The box was full of her favorite sweet'.rasgulla. Her face lit up in a smile, "yehi hassi dekhna chatha tha," he said as she smiled more hearing his words. "aabh aise hi dekhthi rahogi kya? Chalo khao," he said. Heer just sat there looking at him. He was the best husband a girl would ever want. She never had to tell him anything, yet he understood it all. She was really fortunate that she was his wife and was going to be the mother of his kids.

He searched for her everywhere, but she was nowhere to be seen. He had checked the caf, the library, the music room, but she wasn't there anywhere. As he was looking around, he saw a common friend of both. "hey jess'seen ash anywhere?" he asked. "I saw her going towards the auditorium," the girl said. "oh'thanks," he said as he changed directions to go to the auditorium. "why has ash gone to the audi? Whats happening there?" he thought as he was walking. Opening the door to the auditorium, his eyes looked around, but failed to find his love. As he was about to close the door, he saw someone sitting in the upper corner of the top bench. If it weren't for the shadow, he probably wouldn't even know that somewhere was there. He quickly walked up to the person and saw that she was lost in thoughts that she didn't even know that he was there. "hey ash'kaha kohi huwi ho?" he asked taking a seat next to her. Coming to reality, she quickly wiped the tears to hide them from him, but they didn't miss him. "ash'tum roh rahi ho? What happened?" he asked turning her to face him. "nothing preet," she said hiding eye contact with him. "ash'batao kya huwa hai. Kisine kuch kaha?" he asked worried. "kisine kuch nahi kaha'I am fine," she said. "theek hai mat batao'mujhe pooch na hi nahi chahiye tha," he said pretending to get mad. "aisa nahi hai preet'woh main bas heer keh baare mein sooch rahi thi," she confessed. "kya huwa bhabhi koh?" he asked concerned. "nothing now, but jaise heer ki tabeyat garaab horahi hai'mujhe bahut dar lagraha hai," she told him. "don't worry'woh bahut jald theek hojayengi," he said. "woh theek toh hojayegi na preet....kyun ki mujhe bahut gabrahat horahi hai," she said as tears filled her eyes. "ash'please roh mat'agar tum aise rohne lagogi toh bhabhi koh himmat kyon dehga'hum sabh toh unki takat haina'hume strong rehna hoga," he said wiping her tears. "I hope woh jald se theek hojaye'I cant see her like this," she said as she threw herself in his arms. "I am sure ash keh bhagwan hum sabh ki baat sunrahe hai aur woh bhabhi koh kuch nahi hone denge," he said as he caressed her hair. "dar toh mujhe bhi lagtha hai ash'tum toh saach bhi nahi jaanti aur tume itni takleef hoti hai. Main toh pal pal yeh sooch keh jeeta hoon keh agar bhabhi koh kuch hogaya toh kya main aapne aap koh khabhi bhi maaf kar paunga. Aur PB aur unke baccho ka kya hoga? Kohi bhi baccha aapne ma keh baigar nahi jee saktha. Meri bas yehi duwa hai keh bhagwan itna katoor dil bhi na ho keh woh ek nahi balki doh doh nanni si jaan se unke maa sa saaya cheenle," he thought as he wiped his own tears.

It was a beautiful evening and the weather was perfect for a movie night. Looking at the night sky outside, she turned to see the person in the driver's seat and smiled. Reaching their destination, he parked the car and they both stepped out. Walking in, "Harman'tumne toh kaha tha keh baaki sabh yaha wait karahe hai. Yaha toh kohi bhi nahi hai?" she asked looking around. "woh actually meher'woh'," he fumbled. "kya huwa? Where is everyone? Yeh theater hi haina?" she asked. "kohi nahi aane wala hai," he managed to get out. "matlab?" she said confused. "I lied'.maine kisiko aaj keh plan keh baare mein bataya hi nahi," he said not sure how she was going to react. "par tumne toh kaha tha keh tumne sabh koh phone kardiya hai," she said remembering their conversation on the phone yesterday. "ha woh maine jhoot bola tha'maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai," Harman confessed. "but why? I mean kya baat hai?" she asked still confused why Harman would lie saying that all their friends were going to the movies, but actually not tell anyone. "meher'main tume akele yaha laana chatha tha bas issliye'please don't be mad at me!" he said scared. Meher looked at him for a minute and smiled, "akele laana tha toh kehne nahi sakthe the'buddu kahi keh," she said as she giggled. "matlab'naraaz nahi ho," he said surprised. "nahi'tumare saath rehna toh mujhe bahut accha lagtha hai," she said as her heart was jumping with joy. "I mean'hum toh dost haina toh mujhe kya problem hosakthi," she said trying to hide her feelings. "oh'ok. Chalo'movie start hoti hi hogi," he said and they both went inside. "accha'mujhe yeh batao keh tum mujhe yaha akele kyun laana chathe the?" she asked as they both waited at the popcorn stand. "woh'mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi," he said. "toh bolo na," she said. "aisa nahi'phele movie dekhenge'phir main tume ek special jaaga leyke jaunga'phir hi batunga," he said as he took the popcorn and started to walk. Meher felt her heart skip a beat, "what was so special that he wanted to tell her alone? That too by taking her to a special place? Was it the same thing that she had kept in her heart and wasn't able to tell him?" she thought. Harman stopped when she realized that she wasn't with him. He turned to see her still standing her at the popcorn place, "hey meher'what happened? Lets go'movie is starting in five minutes," he said. "oh'sorry," she said as she caught up with him. Hoping that she would be able to tell Harman her feelings that night, she walked into watch the movie.

After the movie, Harman took her to a nearby favorite Italian restaurant. Meher's instincts were getting stronger, "aabh toh baata doh keh kya baat hai?" she asked him. "nope'I will tell you after dinner," he said. "oh come on Harman'whats the big deal? Tell me," she said getting impatient. "maine kaha na keh bas thodi dher mein baataunga'phele khao," he said as she pouted and continued to eat. As she finished dinner, they decided that they will take a walk to enjoy the weather under the nightly sky. As they walked, "yeh Harman kuch kehtha kyun nahi'kuch toh bolo na," she thought as she saw him walking without saying anything. As they reached an intersection, he covered her eyes. Meher was taken back, "harman'yeh kya hai?" she asked. "surprise'aabh jaisa main kehta hoon waisa hi karna," he said as he covered her eyes with one hand and held her hand with the other to help her walk. Meher felt his breath at the corner of her cheeks and felt her body's temperature rise up. Being so close to him, triggered her feelings even more; it was getting hard for her to control the feelings that she had kept hidden deep in her heart. As they walked few more steps, they stopped. "ok'ready?" he asked. "ha'please jaldi kholo," she said as she couldn't wait to see what he wanted to tell her from the evening. As she opened her eyes, she saw a huge white teddy bear sitting on the bench in the park. She smiled. "harman'iska matlab kya hai?" she asked turning to him. "woh bear tumse kuch kehna chatha tha," he said pointing to the card in the bear's hand. She walked up and took the card. Opening it, "to someone more than a friend'to someone who has made a special place in my heart'the one who has taught me to give life a chance again'and to my best friend, would you like to go to prom with me?" she read and a big smile crept up on her face. "Harman," she said as she turned to look at him, but he wasn't there. She looked down and he was on the ground on his knees. "will you be willing to go with me to prom?" he asked again with a white rose in his hand. Meher was kind of happy and sad. She was happy that Harman has proposed her for prom, but she was expecting something more. "yes'I would be happy to," she said as she took the rose from his hand. Harman stood up and engulfed her in a tight hug. Meher was surprised that he hugged all of sudden, but she smiled as she hugged him back. "I am so glad you said yes," Harman said. Coming out of the hug, "but Harman'aise acchanak'tum mujhe propose karna," she said wanting to know his real feelings. "I know prom almost two months keh baad hai par woh kya haina sabh kehrahe the keh mujhe jaana chahiye par I didn't know whom to ask. But, then I thought who better than my best friend. If you want to go with someone else, then I wont force you," he said thinking that she had someone else in mind to go with. "no no Harman'mera woh matlab nahi tha'bas I was really surprised. I wasn't planning on going with anyone else," meher told him. "so, ready to tolerate me for a evening?" he asked. "well'aaj karliya hai toh tabh bhi karlongi," she said as they both chuckled. "ghar chale?" he asked. "yeah'late horaha hai," she said and they both left from there to get back home.

When prem told heer about going to hospital and getting admitted, she was really unhappy. She hated hospitals and she couldn't think about a week or so there. But, prem has somehow managed to persuade her and she agreed to go the next morning. However, the harder part was telling the family and explaining them why heer was going to the hospital, but together prem and heer convinced the family and everything was set. The next morning, heer desired to eat breakfast with everyone at the dining table and it was granted as she was going to the hospital that day. The family was awfully quiet as they all were worrying about heer. As they all pretended to eat, "aap sabh aise mat rahiye'mujhe mere purana wala parivaar chahiye'joh dining table par masti karta tha...please aap sabh aise chup mat rahiye," heer spoke up. As everyone looked at her, "ha'heer hospital jaarahe hai aur woh chathi hai keh woh aap sabhki acchi yaadein ley jaaye," prem said as he motioned everyone to act normal as he knew that heer was already nervous about going to the hospital and he didn't want the family to make it any worse. "aisa kuch nahi beta'woh hum sabh kal dher se sohte na'bas issliye," gayatri said trying to handle the situation. Then, the family started to act normal even though all they could think about was heer and her health. It was around mid-afternoon when prem and heer along with the family left for the hospital. Getting heer checked in and after all the tests and everything was done, she was finally admitted around six in the evening. After that, the doctor told prem that if they wanted to, two people could stay with heer as she knew that heer was a very nervous and it would probably hurt her health more. Gayatri said that she would stay, but prem objected saying that it could affect her health. Kulraj was second, but prem told her that the kids needed her. "main rahunga PB keh saath," preet spoke up. "nahi preet'tujhe college jaana hai," prem said. "PB'main handle karlonga'main aapko chodkeh nahi jaaraha ho," he said knowing how much prem needed support when heer was in such bad condition. "theek hai'preet aur main yaha rukte hai'aap sabh jayiye," prem said. All the family members went inside and met heer and left for home. "aap andar jayiye PB'main yaha wait karta hoon," preet said as he took a seat in the lounge and prem went in. He walked in to see her on the bed. They had a heart monitor and an IV running for her constantly tracking her situation. She smiled slightly looked at him as he took a seat in the chair next to the bed. "issliye main hospital nahi aana chathi'dekho'yeh sabh dekhe main aur bemaar hojati ho," she said looking around disgusted. "heer'bas kuch din'main tume jaldi ghar wapaas ley jaunga," prem said. "saach? Tum mujhe jaldi ghar ley jaunge'tum doctor se baat karo na," she said like a kid. "hum yaha doh banke aaye hai'par chaar banke jayenge'sabh saath saath," he said as she looked at him hoping his words would come true.  

A week passed with the same routine. During the day, gayatri, lalit, and kulraj came to stay with heer while prem went home to freshen up and check- in at the office and preet went to college as his exams were going on and he couldn't miss them. One such night, prem sat next to heer as she fell asleep due to the medications. As he sat there looking at her and smiled, she suddenly woke up from her sleep. Opening her eyes, she felt a jolt of pain in her stomach. "ahhh!" she yelled as she clutched her bulged belly. "heer'kya huwa? Are you ok?" prem said as he stood up and went close to her. "dard horaha hai'bahut," she said as tears came out of her eyes and she tried to catch her breath. "doctor'someone call the doctor!" prem called out. Preet, who was walking in with coffee for him and prem, heard prem. He quickly set the coffee on the side and ran to get the doctors. Within minutes, two doctors and three nurses from the ER came running into the room. Prem and preet were sent outside as they checked heer. As the doctors treated heer inside, prem stood outside by the wall not knowing what to do. What if this is it? What if this is the moment that he has to make the decision? Was he really ready? He came out of his thoughts as he felt preet's hand on his shoulder. "sabh theek hojaya PB'chinta mat kijiye," he said. "mujhse nahi hota preet'pichle kuch meino se joh horaha hai'she doesn't deserve this'she doesn't. Maine vachan liya tha keh main usse hamesha khush rakonga'par main haargaya'I lost!" he said as he collapsed on the floor with tears. Preet engulfed his brother in his arms as tears felt out of his tears. "nahi bhai'aap aisa nahi bolsakthe'mere PB bahut strong hai aur woh khabhi nahi haar sakthe'woh jeetenge'unke pyaar kehliye aur unke parivaar kehliye," he stated as prem looked at him. "ha PB'aapne hamesha har muskil mein mere saath diya hai'mujhe ladna sikaya hai aur aaj aap kaise haar sakthe hai woh bhi tabh jab heer bhabhi koh aapki zaroorat hai'jab aapke baccho keh aapki zaroorat hai'you have to fight PB'for heer bhabhi'for your kids and most of all, for you kyunki aaptoh unn sabh keh bina adure hai," preet said as he gave his PB a hopeful smile. At that moment, the doors of the room opened and heer was wheeled out in a stretcher. Prem and preet both got up and ran up to heer. "what happened doctor? Is heer ok?" prem asked. "we have treated her pain temporarily, but we cant say anything yet. We are waiting for her primary gynecologist, she is on her way," one of the doctors said. "but where is she being taken?" prem asked. "to the ICU," the doctor said as they started to take her as prem and preet followed. Soon, heer's doctor arrived and checked heer. Prem saw the doctor walk out, "prem we need to talk alone," she said. "he is my brother'he knows everything. But what is it doctor? How is heer?" prem said. "prem, you already know the complications, but it is worse than I expected," she said as prem looked at her shocked. "what do you mean?" preet asked. "well, I have her on a oxygen pump now so she can breath, but that's not going to help long. I have to operate on her in the morning," she told them. "operate?" prem said. "yes. I was hoping that I could do a normal delivery, but I have to do a C-section now, I am afraid I don't have a choice," she explained. "please doctor'save my heer," prem pleaded. "I will try my best prem'rest is in god's hands," she said and she left to get everything ready for the surgery.

He turned around and saw her through the glass opening. Seeing her lay there, he felt an arrow run through his heart. The heer who used to run around the house taking care of everyone, the one who used to be always smiling, the heer who put up with all his childish acts was now laying there'lifeless. As the moments spent with her flashed in front of his eyes, he wiped the tear that came down his cheeks. Seeing his brother, preet knew that the one person who could handle prem in this situation was his mother. He quickly dialed home and told gayatri and everyone else about heer and the surgery that was scheduled to happen in a few hours. In an hour, the whole family was in the hospital next to prem. Walking in, gayatri saw prem stand like a statue at the door and walked up to him. Feeling a hand on his shoulder, he turned to see his mother. Seeing her, he landed into his arms and started to sob. "sabh theek hojayega'tu chinta mat kar. Bhagwan peh baroosa rak prem," gayatri said as she ruffled his hair consoling him. "meri heer theek toh hojayegi na ma'mujhe meri heer wapaas chahiye ma," he said. Coming out of the hug, she wiped his tears. "prem'tu aisa toot na saktha'tu himat rakni hogi'sabh theek hojayega," she said. Right then, a nurse walked up to them, "Mr. Juneja, I need you to sign these papers," she said. prem wiped his tears, "papers?" he asked. "They are consent for the surgery," she said. He was scared to sign them. He felt as if he was signing heer's fate with his own hands. Gayatri stood next to him and placed her hands on his shoulder telling him it will be ok. With the support of his mother, he signed the papers. An hour or so passed and she opened her eyes coming back to conscious. "good morning heer'how are you feeling?" the doctor asked as heer slightly smiled. She looked around searching for prem, but saw him nowhere. "I know your looking for prem, but he is outside, he couldn't come in," she told her. Heer tried to remove the oxygen mask so she could talk. "heer'you have to keep that on'don't remove it," the doctor said. "I want to see prem," heer said. "heer'you need to rest'we have to take your in for surgery in a few minutes," the doctor said. heer removed her mask, "please I want to talk to prem one last time'please," heer pleaded. The doctor felt bad. She had come to know prem and heer very well in the past few months and she knew what they meant for each other. "ok, I will call him, but only for five minutes," the doctor said and heer thanked her. The doctor walked out and told prem that heer wanted to talk to him, "but be careful prem, she shouldn't be talking for long," the doctor said and prem nodded and left.

Opening the door, he walked in not sure if he was ready to see her. The more he saw her in this condition, the more it hurt him that he had agreed to let her keep the babies. It wasn't like he didn't want to have a family or be a father, but he just couldn't see her like this. Seeing him, she felt somewhere better inside. Taking a seat next to her, "aabh kaisa feel karahi ho?" he asked as he caressed her cheek. "main theek ho'tume joh dekh liya hai," she said as she held his hand. "prem'mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai," she said. "heer'hum baad mein baat karenge'yeh sahi waqt nahi hai'tume rest ki zaroorat hai," he told her. "nahi mujhe aabhi baad karni hai'paata nahi phir mauka mile ya nahi," she said. He covered her lips, "heer'please'phir aisa mat kehna," he said. "prem'aabh waqt aagaya hai keh hum saach koh apna ley na chahiye'mujhe meri baat kehna ka mauka bhi nahi dohge," she said. "theek hai'kaho kya kehna chathi ho?" he said. "prem'main jaanti hoon keh pichle kuch meino mein maine tume bahut takleef di hai," she said when he interrupted her, "heer aisa kuch nahi hai," he said. "prem please aaj mujhe kehne doh'main kehna chathi hoon," she said and he nodded. "prem'jab se tum meri zindagi mein aaye ho maine har pal puri taara jiya hai. Tumne mujhe joh khushi di hai woh maine khabhi samne mein bhi nahi soocha tha. Main bahut khush kismat hoon keh mujhe tum jaisa jeevan saathi mila aur main bhagwan se zaroor kahongi keh woh mujhe agle jaanam mein bhi tume hi mera jeevan saathi baanaye," she said as they both felt the pain in their heart and it could be seen in their eyes. "heer'main jaanta hoon'tume yeh sabh kehne ki kohi zaroorat nahi hai," he said wiping her tears. "phir bhi main kehna chathi hoon. Prem, mujhe tumse ek vaada chahiye," she said. "kaisa vaada?" he asked.  "Mujhe nahi paata keh yeh operation mein kya hoga par kuch bhi ho mujhe vaada karo keh tum humare parivaar mein kisiko bhi mere yeh haalat ki saachiye nahi baataoge chahiye kuch bhi hojaye," she said as she put her hand out. "heer'yeh kaisa vaada chahthi ho tum?" he said. "please prem'main nahi chahthi keh unne ya humare baccho ko kuch bhi paata chale. Agar unne paata chalgaya toh woh zindagi bar khud koh blame karenge aur yeh main khabhi nahi chathi. Promise me?" she asked with her hand still out for him. He didn't want her to go through more stress than she already was. He placed his hand on hers promising her. "mujhe paata hai keh mujhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi par humare baccho ka khayal rakna. Unne kehna keh unki ma kahi bhi ho unne dekh rahi hai aur unse bahut pyaar karti hai aur agar hosakhe toh zindagi mein aage badjaana," she said as she turned away not able to face him anymore. She didn't want him to spend the rest of his life alone. She wanted someone to hold his hand and take him through his tough times. She wanted someone to do what she couldn't fulfill. Prem turned her back to face him, "heer'tum meri zindagi ho. Aaj kuch bhi hojaye tum meri ho aur main sirf tumara bankar jeeunga," he stated as they both looked at each other as if taking in the image of the other person to keep with them forever.

At that moment, the doctor walked in, "sorry to interrupt, we have to take her to the OT," she said. Prem moved away and allowed them to fix the bed and they started to wheel her away. He went closer and held her hand and she pressed it tightly. As they went out the room, heer saw everyone in the family and memorized their faces as she saw them for the last time. As they reached the entrance of the OT, "main tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon prem," she said as his hands slipped out of hers and he felt his heart stop as she saw her go away from him. The doors closed and the time wall between them started. Hours passed and prem waited and waited. He just sat there without saying a word and that worried everyone more. Gayatri sat next to him consoling him, but nothing seemed to make it better. The pain that his heer was going through inside he felt in his heart. Every time he tried to close his eyes, all he could see was his heer walking down the stairs in the brial dress on their wedding. The smile and blush that was on her face was haunting him each second he waited. He will never forgive himself if something happened to her'.never! No one knew what to say that could make prem feel better. Lalit and gayatri were trying to console prem. Kulraj was trying to control herself and meher, who was crying and kiran was trying to make both of them feel better. On the other hand, ash was crying as well and preet was trying hard to make her stop crying telling her it will be ok. Three hours past and the doctor finally walked out. Seeing her, prem ran up to her, "doctor'how is heer?" he asked. "dont you want to know about your kids? congratz prem, you had a boy and a girl," the doctor replied. "how is heer?" he asked impatiently. "we tried our best prem, but she slipped into coma. I am sorry," she said as prem and everyone else stood there shocked. Hearing those words, prem felt his world blank out and his life stop at that second. "no'aisa nahi hosaktha'meri heer koh kuch nahi hosaktha'nahi hosaktha," he said to himself as he moved back hitting the wall. Sprawling to the floor, prem turned and saw the operation theatre door inside which was his heer. His world revolved around her and without her, everything was meaningless'his life'his love'and him!

 

Hey guys

Back with the next update'I know you all have been patiently waiting and I am really sorry for the delay...Cry. I moved from home to the dorms just two weeks ago, so I am still getting used to the new life and college and everything. Also, school is getting tougher as I am moving up in college so I will try to update as time permits, I hope you guys understand. Embarrassed Well, about the update, this is the twist you are waiting for'so let me know what you guys think? And plz no threats'I didnt kill heer...lol. One more thing is that if you guys have any name suggestions for the kids'I would be happy to know them. Big smile

 

Love

Afreen



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well it ws a beautiful post!!!!!
the part b4 heer went fr the operation brought tears to my eyes!!!!!
hope comes out frm the coma soon....i mean in the nxt update only!!!!
pls can't see them cry nymore!!!!
enuf of their cryng!!!!!!
nw wanna see a happy family wid their two kids!!!!!
n thnx fr nt killing heer!!!!!
n prem...he's really a very sweet n caring husband!!!!

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