Pyaar Ki Yeh Dastaan III:Last Chap Page 88 Aug6th - Page 21

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Chapter 67

                The clock struck seven and everyone in the juneja mansion was deep asleep on the Saturday morning. He opened his eyes and saw his beautiful wife in front of him. The old smile that used to be on her lips was back. He caressed her cheek with love and she slightly smile, unknown to herself. She didn't need to be awake to know it was him; his touch was unique from anyone else in the world that she could tell it was him even with her eyes closed.  He got up and turned off the alarm so she wouldn't wake up and left. He wanted her to rest as she was awake almost the whole night trying to calm their daughter down and make her fall asleep. Even though he was awake with her, he couldn't help much as their daughter just loved mama's arms too much. Their little princess went to sleep at almost 3 in the morning and that's when heer could also fall asleep. In the room upstairs, she opened her eyes and turned to see her husband but he was gone. She got up and looked for him in the room and bathroom, but he was nowhere to be seen. Then, she went in the kids' room and saw them still asleep. Seeing that, she decided that she will freshen up and change so she took her clothes and left for the bathroom. Minutes passed and she returned dressed in a light blue sari with silver sequences on the borders and pallu. As she stood in front of the mirror wiping her wet hair, "yeh prem kaha hai? itni subhe kaha chala gaya?" she thought.  Right then, he walked in with the food tray, "good morning wifey" he said. She turned to him, "kaha chale gaye the tum itni subhe?" she asked. "meri pyaari patni kehliye breakfast banane gaya tha," he said placing the tray  on the table. "prem'tum itni subhe kyun udgaye sohna chahhiye tha kal bhi dher hogayi thi," she said concerned. "heer'maine kya kiya tha'bacchi koh toh tum samaal rahi thi na," he said as he arranged the food on the table. "par tum bhi toh jaagrahe the," she said. "heer'aabh chodo yeh sabh'jaldi aao breakfast thanda horaha hai," he said as she smiled. As she walked up to the table, he bowed down, "your breakfast is served mam," he said as she giggled. "prem!" she said as she hit his shoulder.  As she took a seat, he offered a bite of paratha. Before she ate, she broke off a piece too and they fed each other happily. After they fed each other, he took a small bowl with a lid from the corner of the tray and gave it to her. "issmein kya hai?" she asked. "kholke dekho," he said. She quickly opened the lid and her face lit up, "gajar ka halwa," she said surprised. "ha tume yaad hai tum mujhe kaise raat koh utakar halwa maanga kiya karti thi," he said remembering of past moments. "ha par woh main nahi tumare prince aur princess joh andar sohrahe hai woh maangte the," she said as they both smiled. "yeh maine tumare liye banaya hai'kake batao," he said. She took a spoonful and ate it. She smiled without saying anything. "heer'batao na'accha bana hai keh nahi?" he asked anxiously. Seeing his face, she didn't want to hurt him. "bahut accha hai'bahut hi," she said as she ate another spoonful. "aree saara tum hi khaloge kya? Mujhe bhi doh?" he said. "tume meri liye toh banaya thana toh main tume kyun doh," she said. "heer'mujhe halwa doh'I want to taste it," he said. "nahi," she said moving the bowl away from him. "heer doh," he said and they started to fight for the bowl. Prem finally got the bowl in his hand. He took a heap full and put it in his mouth. The next second he spit it out. "ewww'issmein toh namak baara paada hai," he said as she looked at him. "tumne mujhe kaha kyun nahi?" he asked. "kya?" she said acting innocently. "heer'keh issmein namak hai," he said. "mujhe toh sabh theek tha issliye maine khaliya," she said. "maine itni meinat se banaya tha," he said sadly. "prem'mujhe toh yeh halwa bahut pasand aaya. Toh kya huwa keh tumne issmein galti se namak dal diya mere liye toh yeh tumare pyaar se itna meetha hogaya tha keh utna meetha toh duniya ki sabh se acchi cheeni bhi nahi karsakthi thi," she said as he looked at her. "tum itni acchi kyun ho heer?" her asked. "prem'aisa kuch nahi hai'main toh..," heer said when he interrupted, "duniya ki sabh se best patni ho," he said. "aur tum duniya keh sabh se best husband ho," she told him. "aur woh kyun?" he asked her. "duniya ki aisi kitne wives hai joh yeh kehsakthe hai keh unke husbands unkehliye morning breakfast bana keh laate hai," she said as they both chuckled. " "thanks heer meri zindagi mein wapaas aane kehliye," he said pulling her in a tight hug.

                Later, they both went downstairs for the morning puja. After heer gave prasad to everyone, the family started the arrangements for the puja that evening. Heer went upstairs so she could give the kids a bath and get them ready and prem went along so he could help her. Prem and heer walked into the kids' room to see their daughter awake and playing with herself. Hearing his sister, their son also woke up as they walked in. heer smiled as she walked up to them, "toh aap dono udgaye'aapko paata tha na keh mama aur pappa aap koj leyne aarahe hai'kyun?" she said as her children looked at her. "aabh'hum aap dono koh ek warm shower denge," prem said. They bought the kids back to the room and kept them on the bed. As heer undressed them, prem got the bath tub ready with warm water. He also took some toys with him so the kids wont cry much when taking a shower.  Prem and heer took their time with the kids as they played with them as they gave them a shower. The boy cried a little but he was fine as he saw the toys and quieted down a bit, but their daughter wouldn't just stop crying. After the bath, prem and heer wrapped the kids in a towel and bought them back to the room. Heer placed them both on the bed, "main abhi aati hoon'inn dono keh kapde lekar," she said to prem and left. As soon as her mother disappeared from her eyes, their little princess started to holler. "heer'dekho yeh rohrahi hai," prem called out. "aayi prem'bas ek minute," she said from the kids room. Prem knew she wouldn't be quiet but he was going to give it a try anyways. He picked her up in his arms and tried, but she only screamed more. Heer quickly returned, "kya huwa prem?" she asked as she put the clothes on the bed. "dekho na heer'yeh'," he stopped as she turned to look at him. Prem looked down at his shirt which his daughter just wetted. "toh aap koh yeh karna tha," he said looking at his daughter and she chuckled  at him. Heer tried to control her laughter as she covered her mouth with her hand. "chup chup keh kyun haas rahi ho'mujhe paata hai keh tum ma beti issmein mile huwe ho," prem said and heer broke out laughing. "prem'tum bhi na. isse mujhe dehdo aur jaake change karlo," heer said as she took the little girl from prem's arms and he left to change. Heer started dressing the kids and right then, meher walked in. "hi bhabhi!" she said. "hi meher'tum itni subhe subhe ready hogayi shopping jaane kehliye aur tumare bhaiya ki jaib khali karne," heer said teasing her. "kya bhabhi'aap bhi," she said with a sad face. "aree maazak karahi ho'waise kya leyne ka plan hai?" heer asked. "paata nahi bhabhi'prom ki theme keh issab se kuch miljaye," meher said. "waise theme kya hai?" heer asked. "woh actually like royal theme jaise kuch hai. woh purane kings aur queens ki tarah kuch pehena hai either Indian or western royal families," meher replied. "wow sounds exciting," heer said. "I know'but yeh bhaiya kaha hai?" meher said getting impatiently. Just then, prem walked out of the bathroom. "loh aagaye tumare bhaiya," heer said. "wahi toh main sooch raha tha keh meher koh shopping jaana hai aur woh aabhi tak nahi aayi," prem teased. "prem'usse thang karna band karo'aabh tum dono jao aur jaldi wapaas aana," heer told them and then prem and meher left.

                After prem left, their daughter fell asleep and heer put her in the crib and went downstairs with her son. Walking into the living room, she saw lalit, gayatri, and kulraj in the living room discussing about the puja and party that evening. "almost sabh hogaya hai'bas aabh khaana banjaaye aur pandit-ji koh bhi phone kardiya hai ma," kulraj said to gayatri. Seeing heer enter, "aree aao beta'kaisa hai mera chota rajkumar," lalit said as heer smiled and gave her son to lalit. "aur humari rajkumari kaha hai?" gayatri asked. "ma woh toh sohgayi isliye main yaha neeche aagayi isse lekar," heer said. "accha kiya woh toh tume bahut thang karti haina?" gayatri said. "ha usse bas godh mein rako neeche khabhi utaro," heer said as everyone smiled. "issmein toh woh bilkul prem peh gayi hai woh hamesha mere paas hi rehta tha," gayatri told heer. "main aap logo ki kuch madad kardo shaam kehliye?" heer asked. "nahi beta'sabh hogaya hai'tum chinta mat karo," gayatri told her. "ma'woh mujhe aap aur babuji se kuch baat karni thi," heer stated. "ha beta bolo," lalit said. "woh main'mujhe'woh," she fumbled not knowing how to start the topic. "aree heer'bol bhi doh'aise bhi kya ha?" gayatri asked. "woh ma'main sooch rahi thi keh jab aabh sabh theek hogaya hai toh kyun na aap log preet ki shaadi keh baare mein sooche?" heer suggested as lalit and gayatri looked at surprised. "preet ki shaadi'," gayatri said. "uss gadde se kyon shaadi karega," lalit said. "babuji," heer said and gayatri turned to give him a look. "theek hai kohi na kohi toh karega'sooch the hai," lalit said as kulraj giggled. "aap aisa kyun bolrahe hai babuji'preet toh aabh bahut zimedaar hogaya hai, woh toh aaj kal prem ki office mein madad bhi karaha hai," heer said. "theek hai par yeh acchanak?" lalit said. "ha babuji'.humari ghar mein itni saari problems aayi hai toh kyun na thodi khushiya bhi ley aaye," heer said. "theek hai heer phir uske liye ladki tumhi doond khe laana," gayatri said. "main?" heer said. "ha'tumari jaise ek acchi aur sanskari ladki leyaana joh humare ghar mein aur bhi khushiya lekar aaye jaise tum laayi ho," gayatri said as heer smiled. "main bilkul aapni parchayi lekar aaungi iss ghar mein'preet yeh baat sunkar bahut khush hojayega," heer thought. "main abhi aati ho," heer said as she left to go upstairs.

                He sat in front of his laptop. His eyes glued to the screen hoping that she will come online and give him a chance to explain to her. He had been trying to talk to her ever since she has returned but he got no reply to his emails, she hung up on him on the phone and she never came online anymore. He sat up and opened his night table drawer and pulled out their picture from the trip they had taken to Niagara Falls. He smiled remembering how happy she was that day and how much they had enjoyed. He heard someone knock and looked at the door. "surprise!" she yelled. "ashlesha'tum yaha!" he said surprised. "mere baare mein hi sooch rahe the na toh main aagayi," she said. "tume kaise paata keh main tumare hi baare mein sooch raha tha?" he asked. "come on preet, tum meri photo haath mein lekar aur kiske baare mein sooch sakthe ho. Aur agar soocha bhi na toh main tume jaan se maar dalungi," she said threatening him. "but really ash, main tumse sorry kehna chatha hoon. Joh bhi huwa.." he said. "aree preet. Forget it na. mere matlab sabh bhul jao. Joh huwa woh hogaya. Hum humara future kyun karaab kare. Hum sabh bhul kar ek nayi shuruwat karte hai," she said. "tum saach kehrahi ho ash?" he said as he stood up from the bed. As he raised his hand to touch her cheeks, someone knocked at the door. He turned back to see her gone. "ashlesha kaha chali gayi'iska matlab main'woh yaha thi hi nahi," he thought as he looked at the place where he felt like she just was. As he saw the door open, he quickly put the picture away and looked at the door and saw heer walk in. "aree bhabhi aap'aaye na," he said. "sabh neeche tayaari karahe hai aur tum yaha akele kyun baite ho. Hamesha toh tum hi saari cheeze karte ho," heer said. "nahi bhabhi woh actually kuch kaam tha," he said. "main disturb toh nahi karahi hoon na," she said. "nahi bhabhi'aayiye na'baitiye," preet said moving his laptop so heer could sit. "preet kohi problem hai kya? Tum bahut chup chup ho?" heer asked. "nahi toh bhabhi'main aur chup chup," preet said trying to smile. "tumare liye ek bahut acchi kabar laayi ho," heer said. "kaisi kabar?" he asked. "aree guess toh karo," she said. "batayiye na bhabhi," he said. "preet'maine ma aur babuji se tumari shaadi keh baare mein baat ki hai. maine unne ashlesha keh baare mein kuch nahi bataya kyun ki tum sabh koh batana chathe the. Aabh tum sabh koh ash keh baare mein baata doh aur phir main bhi baba se baat karlongi," heer said excitedly and preet sat there not knowing how to react. "tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho?" she asked. "kuch nahi bhabhi'woh baat yeh hai keh maine aur ashlesha ne faisla kiya hai keh hum aabhi shaadi nahi karenge," he said. "kya? Par kyun?" heer asked surprised. "bas bhabhi main thoda business mein settle hojao aur ash bhi padna chathi hai," preet said. heer didn't know what to say. She was so happy that preet and ash's relationship which has stopped because of her would go ahead but that wasn't going to happen. "par preet baba ash ki shaadi kehliye ladke doond rahe hai agar tum aabh baat nahi karoge toh shayad bahut dher hojayegi. Please at least ma aur babuji se baat karlo phir shaadi baad mein karlena kahi kohi problem na hojaye," heer told him. "theek hai bhabhi main ash se baat karlonga," preet said and heer smiled hearing that. Later, heer  left from there. She was confused. "yeh acchanak inn dono ka faisla badal kaise gaya'kahi kohi problem toh nahi hai par hai bhi toh kya? Ashlesha bhi mujhse baat nahi karahi hai'mujhe kissi bhi taara paata toh karna padega aur prem se bhi baat karni padegi," she thought as she walked down the hallway.

                 There was an hour or so left for the puja and heer dressed the kids and was looking through the cupboard to find something to wear for her. "paata nahi yeh prem aabhi tak kyun nahi aaya'shayad meher koh dress nahi milli hogi," she said to herself as she looked through her saris. "agar prem hota toh ussi se pooch leyti keh kya peheno," she said. She took out one sari at a time and checked in the mirror but she didn't seem to like any of them. He walked in to see their kids playing on the bed and to see his dear wife searching for something in the cupboard. He tiptoed up to her and encircled his arms around her. Feeling him suddenly, she jerked. "prem'tumne toh mujhe darayi diya," she said. "I love you," he said nuzzling her cheek. Turning around and putting her hands around his neck, "I love you too!" she said. "kya doond rahi ho?" he asked. "woh party kehliye sari. Kuch bhi acchi nahi hai'tum meri help karona," she said. "bas itni si problem'aisa solve karta hoon," he said snapping his fingers. "woh kaise?" she asked. "ruko," he said and went to the bed and came back with a cover. "yeh kya hai?" she asked. "tumare liye hai'khol keh dekho," he said. She opened the bag to find a box inside. Opening the box, she found a light brownish sari inside. "wow prem yeh sari toh bahut acchi hai'kiske liye?" she asked innocently. "padosan kehliye," he said. "kya?" she said. "Obviously Mrs. Heer Prem Juneja kehliye," he said as her cheeks turned red. "main chatha hoon keh tum aaj shaam kehliye yeh sari peheno," he said. "ok. Par prem tumne kohi naam soocha hai baccho kehliye," she said. "ha'soocha toh hai," he said. "kya naam?" she asked excitedly. "main nahi bataunga," he replied. "prem'batao," she said. "nope," he said. "theek hai main bhi aapne naam nahi bataungi," she said. "tumne bhi naam soocha hai'kyon se?" he asked. "main kyun batao," she said trying to hide her laughter. "ok agar main baatao toh tum bhi bataogi?" he asked. "soochongi," she said. "theek hai'main chatha hoon keh humare bete ka naam prateek ho," he said. "aur beti ka naam chahat," she said excitedly. "tume kaise paata?" hr asked. "kyun ki maine bhi yehi naam sooche the'humari pyaar ka prateek aur meri prem ki chahat," she said as they both smiled. "yeh naam toh best hai bilkul humare baccho ki taara," prem said as she nodded. "chalo aabh ready hojate hai'humare baccho ka mood thodi dher kehliye accha hai," heer said as they started to get ready.

                Minutes later, he walked out the bathroom dressed in a sherwani. It was a creamish brown shwerwani with golden sequins around the neck and at the end of the sleeves. His eyes looked through the room for her and found her in front of the mirror dressed in the sari he had given her. She has added matching necklace and earrings. She had put her hair up in a bun so it would be easier to handle the kids. She was checking herself in a mirror when he walked up and stood behind her.  Looking at him, she smiled. "aaj meri angel mujhe wapaas mil gayi hai," he said turning her around. "saath janam ka vaada kiya toh itni jaldi kaise thod sakthi ho," she said. "meri liye tum aaj aur hamesha iss duniya ki sabh se khoobsurat ladki rahogi," he said. "aur tum mere handsome husband," she said. "heer'tum theek toh hona'tum aur romantic dialogue," he teased as he pretended to check her temperature. "kyun sirf tum romantic bansakthe ho?" she said. "nahi aisa kuch nahi hai bas meri tareef sunne ki aadat nahi haina," he said while heer giggled. "time horaha hai'main jaarahi hoon," she said. As she started to walk away, he pulled her back in his arms. "prem chodo'puja shuru hone wali hai aur mujhe abhi tayaar hona hai," she said. "hey'mujhe banao mat'tum toh puri tara tayaar ho," he said as he kissed her nape. She felt her body shiver as it felt his lips after so long. "prem'saach mein mujhe tayaar hona hai," she said again. "accha," he said kissing the corner of her neck. "prem'kohi aajayega'mujhe aabhi tayaar hona hai," she told him. "aree aise bhi kya tayaar hona hai?" he asked. "mujhe kuch pehena hai," she said. "aur woh mujhse bhi zyaada important hai?" he said. "ha hai'aabh chodo mujhe," she said trying to get out of his hold. "aisa kya hai?" he asked. "chodo'phir bataungi," heer said and he let her go. She went to the cupboard and took something out, a rectangular box. "issmein kya hai?" he asked. She opened the box and a smile crept up on both their faces. "tumne yeh kyun nahi kaha keh tume mere diye huwe payal pehena hai," he teased. "ha prem'aaj itne dino baad hum ek saath hai, khush hai aur yeh payal mujhe uss waqt ki yaad dilate hai jab hum pheli baar ek saath khush the aur aaj toh humara phele function hai humare baccho keh saath," heer said. "ha'aur aabh aage humare liye sirf khushiya hi khushiya intezaar karahi hai," he told her and she smiled. He took the box from her and took her hand in his and they went towards the bed. He made her sit on the bed. Sitting down, he took her feet and placed it in his lap. Lovingly, he made her wear the payals. The love in his heart reflected in his eyes and her happiness had no bounds. They were together after so long and he was with her and their kids were with her'all the happiness was in her hands and she couldn't ask for anything more. Without even knowing, tears fell from her eyes. As he finished putting the payal, he looked up happily and the smile from his face fell when he saw tears in her eyes. "heer'kya huwa?" he asked as he came to sit next to her. "kuch nahi," she replied. "heer kuch toh huwa hai'tum itni khush thi aur yeh acchanak," he said. "prem'tum hamesha mere saath aise hi rahoge na'khabhi mujhe chodkeh nahi jaoge na?" she asked scared. He pulled her into a hug, "heer'tum yeh kaisi baat karahi ho'main aur tume chodkeh'maine ek baar tumse door hone ki galti kardi'phir khabhi nahi karonga heer'khabhi nahi," he said as she hid herself in his arms never wanting to let him go. Right then, someone coughed and they both broke apart. "sorry mujhe tum dono koh disturb nahi karna lekin puja ka mohurat shuru hogaya hai issliye tum dono koh ma ne neeche bhulaya hai," kulraj said and prem and heer just smiled. "hum aabhi aate hai di'ek minute," prem said and kulraj left. He then turned to heer, "humari khushiya humara intezaar karahe hai. main tumari aankhon mein khabhi aansoo nahi dekhna chatha aabh sirf muskurahat dekhna chatha hoon'chale?" prem asked. She smiled nodding and they picked up their kids and went downstairs.

                As they started to walk down the stairs, the family stood in the living room happy to see the couple together smiling and walking down together. They have all seen how much prem and heer have suffered from the past months and they couldn't thank the one above for giving their family's happiness back. The puja was to consist only of family members and some close friends. So, the puja was going to be held in the mandir as it would be enough to fit all the people. As prem and heer reached the living room, everyone sat down and the puja started. Prem and heer prayed for their togetherness and the happiness of their family. The family on the other hand prayed that prem and heer are always together and happy. Everyone felt peaceful as they sat through the puja and it ended. "accha aabh tum logo ne kya naam soocha hai baccho kehliye?" gayatri asked. "ma'woh humne bacchi ka naam chahat aur bacche ka naam prateek soocha hai," heer told everyone. "aree wah'yeh toh bahut pyaare naam hai," lalit said. "ha babuji bilkul humare chote se heer aur prem ki tarah," kulraj teased as both prem and heer blushed. "aabh toh yeh humare prateek aur chahat hai," meher said and everyone smiled.  Later, the pandit-ji gave prasad to meher so she can disturb it to everyone. Prateek was with gayatri and chahat of course with her mama. Chahat was been sobbing and wouldn't stop crying so heer came to the corner of the room to quiet her daughter down. As meher walked up to prem with the prasad, he took his prasad and his eyes searched for his dear wife. Seeing her in the corner, he quickly went to find her. "heer'tum yaha kya karahi ho?" prem asked. "shhh'aabhi sohi hai," heer said as she looked at chahat. "oh sorry'yeh lo maine tumare liye prasad laaya hai," he said quietly. "tumne khaliya?" she asked. "tumare bina khabhi khaya hai," he said as she smiled. He took a bite of the ladoo and gave it to her and she ate it too. "tumne khaana khaya?" he asked. "nahi'woh tab se yeh roh rahi thi issliye mujhe samal na paada. Aabhi baadi muskil se sohi hai," heer told him."kohi baat nahi'main tume khilade tha hoon," he said. "yaha sabh keh saamne'paagal hoka," she said. "ha'toh kya huwa? Tum meri patni ho," he said. "parmeet aunty aabhi ma se complain karahi thi keh tum mere peeche ghoom teh rehte ho'agar unone dekh liya na toh bas," she said as she chuckled. "toh kya huwa main toh saari duniya keh saamne khabul karlo keh main biwi ka ghulam hoon," he said spreading his arms in shahrukh way. "theek hai tum aise hi kade raho aur sabh koh baatana main isse upar sohlakar aati hoon," she said as she giggled and left upstairs.

                The party started in a few hours and the guests were starting to come in. She stood at the entrance waiting for him. She called him yesterday and invited him to the party because she was going to tell him her feelings today. After so long, she had gathered courage to tell him and she just hoped that he also felt the same for her. Right then, she saw a car pull into the driveway and him stepping out. A huge smile crept up on her face. He was here! She thought. He looked handsome in the blue sherwani, she thought as her cheeks turned red. As he started to walk towards the main door, he saw her dressed in a light pink anarkali dress. He saw the blush on her cheeks and smiled. She looked different today, he thought. She looked gorgeous'her hair in curls'her simple makeup that added to her beauty. He seemed mesmerized by her beauty. "yeh main kya sooch raha hoon'meher meri dost hai. aisa soochna galat hoga. She is just a friend!" he thought to himself. He was confused on why his feelings were suddenly changing into something more. "hey Harman'kya huwa?" she asked bringing him out of his thoughts. "kuch nahi'hi!" he said. "mujhe laaga tum nahi aaoge," she told him. "aisa kyun kehrahi ho meher'tumne bhulaya hai then why wouldn't I come?" she asked. "paata nahi bas aise hi," she said. "ok'heer di aur bacche kaise hai?" he asked. "sabh theek hai'tume paata hai bhaiya aur bhabhi ne unka naam chahat aur prateek raaka hai," she said. "wow yeh toh bahut acche naam hai," he said. "I know'chalo andar chale," she said and they started to walk for the inside. "I am so happy you're here. Aaj ki raat main tume sabh kuch baata dungi, mujhse aur sabar nahi hota. Mujhe jaan na hai keh tumare dil mein kya hai. I cant wait anymore!" she thought. "kya?" he asked. "kya huwa?" she asked. "tumne kuch kaha?" Harman asked as she looked up at surprised. "nahi toh'kuch nahi," meher said. "oh ok," he said. "kash tum meri dil ki baat mere bina kahe hi sunlo'kash," meher thought to herself. "you know meher'aaj main bahut khush hoon," Harman told her. "kyun? I mean kya huwa hai?" meher asked. "bas aaj tum phele tayaar haas rahi ho aur dil se muskura rahi ho yeh dekhar mujhe bahut accha lagraha hai," harman said. "Of course, heer bhabhi theek hogayi aur ghar aagayi sabh theek hai, ghar mein sabh khush hai aur," she said as she stopped realizing she might say something that she didn't want to. "aur kya?" he asked. "kuch nahi'woh main tumse baad mein kahongi," she said. "baad mein kyun?" he questioned confused as to what she was talking about. "tum na bahut sawaal karti ho'kuch special baatein na kuch special time peh honi chahiye issliye main tume party keh baad kahongi," she said with a smile as she left from there. "yeh aisa kya kehna chathi hai meher mujhse'woh bhi kohi special baat?" he thought to himself as he stood there looking in the way  meher has just gone.

                She stood by the window as she saw her kids peacefully sleep in their cribs. She smiled seeing the full, glowing moon in the sky. "paata nahi main aap ka shukriya aada kaise karo. Aapne meri duwaye sunli aur mera sabh kuch mujhe lauta diya bas yehi meri liye bahut hai. Aabh toh bas yehi duwa hai keh mera prem aur mere doh pyaare bacche mere saath huwe aise hi rahe," she said to the one above. "aisa lagtha hai keh saari khushiya mere haatoin mein wapaas aagaye hain bilkul jaise jab pheli baar prem mere zindagi mein aaya tha uss din mandir mein mujhe samala tha, aaj tak mujhe samal tha aaraha hai," she thought as she remembered their first meeting. Just then she heard her room door open and she walked out the kid's room and into her room. "aree heer tum yaha ho sabh tume neeche doond rahe hai," he told her. "woh prateek aur chahat koh bhuk lagi thi aur phir unne sohlana bhi tha," she said. He just stood there watching her, happy to see that glow on her face with happiness. "kya huwa? Tum aise kyun dekh rahe ho?" she asked. "bas yuhi dekh raha tha," he said caressing her cheek. "kya? Mujhe?" she asked. "nahi'tumare chehre peh joh khushi wapaas aagaye hai bas usse hi dekh raha hoon," he said. "khush toh hongi na mera prem aur uski nishaaniya mere saath joh hai aur mera pura parivaar bhi," she said with a broad smile. He smiled. He had missed seeing a true smile on her face since months. Even if she smiled, there used to be a scare on her face that she was going to lose everything she had. But, today he could see the old smile back on her face. "aaj iss khushi se tum aur bhi zyaada khoobsurat dikrahi ho phele se bhi zyaada," he said as he slowly took a lock of hair and placed it behind her ears, to make his view clearer. Her cheeks turned red hearing his words. "kuch bhi badal jaaye heer, ek baat toh khabhi nahi badal sakthi," he said as he encircled his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. "woh kya?" she asked puzzled. "jab tum shar mati ho toh uss chand se bhi zyaada khoobsurat lagthi ho," he said. "prem," she said as she hid herself in his arms. "I love you," he whispered as he placed a kiss on her forehead. "main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon," she said as she hugged him. At that moment, both the kids woke up and they heard holler from the other room. "yeh lo woh dono bhi iss pyaar baare hug mein shamil hona chathe hai," he said as she laughed. They broke apart and heer walked into the room followed by prem. They both quiet down chahat and prateek. "hume chalna chahiye'ma babuji intezaar karahe honge," prem said. "ha chalo," heer said and they both left for downstairs.

The party has just started and everyone was eager to meet the new member of the juneja clan. As lalit and gayatri saw prem and heer walked down with chahat and prateek, lalit went to the middle of the hall and one of the servants handed him the microphone. "ladies and gentlemen'if I may have your attention please'I would like to introduce my grandson and granddaughter prateek and chahat juneja'the new members of our family," he said happily as everyone welcomed prem, heer, and family with huge applauses. Time passed as one guest after the other wanted to meet the little junejas. Prateek was all happy to hop from one pair of hands to the other; chahat didn't really want to go anywhere. All she wanted to do was be in her mama's hands and sometimes she was fine with gayatri but that's about it, she didn't even want to be with prem. Minutes passed and the music started to play and couples who desired to dance assembled in the middle of the room. Prem walked up to heer, "toh aaj shaam ka dance tum mere saath karna chahaogi?" he asked. "kash prem'par tumari chahat mujhse paanch minute kehliye bhi door nahi hona chathi," heer replied. "aree tum isse ma koh dehdo aur chalo mere saath," prem said. "ma keh paas already prateek hai issliye Mr. husband aaj main tumare saath dance nahi karsakthi," she told him. Before prem could reply, "aree tum dono yaha kyun ho'chalo tum aur prem dance floor par," kulraj said as she walked up to the couple. "nahi di main yahi theek ho. Yeh abhi abhi sohi hai agar utjayegi toh bahut rohyegi," heer said. "kuch nahi hoga'tum isse ma koh dehdo aur phir jaana," kulraj said. "ma toh already prateek toh samal rahi hai," heer said. "prateek koh main samalungi aur ma chahat koh'aabh tum jao," kulraj said as she called over gayatri. Gayatri came over and gave prateek to kulraj and took chahat from heer. "aabh toh tum jao," gayatri said. "ma par main," heer said. "heer'aaj itne dino baad tume mauka mila hai prem keh saath dance karne ka'don't miss it," kulraj teased as heer blushingly smiled. "aur prem'tume kya hogaya hai?" kulraj asked. "jee di'main kuch samaja nahi," prem said. "tum toh phele bahut romantic huwa karte the aur aaj heer koh yaha akele chodiya," kulraj said as prem and heer looked at each other. "aisa nahi di woh chahat koh dekhrahi toh main'," he said. "bahana accha hai'aabh chalo heer koh dance floor peh lekar jao," gayatri told her son. Prem smiled as he bowed, "may I have this dance, Mrs. Juneja," he asked putting his hand out. "I would love to," heer said as she placed her hand in his. Together they moved to the dance floor and the music started:

Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun

[Having her back in his life was the biggest gift he could ever receive from the one above]
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Kisi zaaba mein bhi, woh laafaz hi nahi
Ki zin mein tum ho kya tumhe baata sakoon

[She was most special person in his life. The most beautiful person he has ever met not just by external beauty, but with a innocent and pure heart]
Mein agar kahoon tumsa haseen
Kaayanaath mein nahi hai kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin

[Words seemed less to tell her what she was for him. No matter how many times he told her that she was nothing less than the moon in the night sky, even that wasn't enough to describe her simple beauty]
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun

Shokion mein doobi yeh aadayein, chehare se zalki hui hai
Zulf ki ghani ghani ghataein, shaan se dhalki hui hain

[He caressed her cheeks as she looked up at him and he pulled her closer]
Lehrata aanchal hai jaise baadal, bahoon mein bhari hai jaise chandini
Roop ki chandini

[He pulled her closer and they were an inch away from each other. He bent down and pecked the tip of her nose. Her cheeks turned tomato red thinking about everyone present]
Mein agar kahoon yeh dil kashi
Hai nahin kahin, na hogi kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun

[He swirled her around and hugged her from behind]

Tum huwe mehrabaan toh hai yeh daastan
ohhoh tum huwe mehrabaan toh hai yeh daastan
Ab tumhara mera ek hai karwaa, tum jahan mein wahan

[She wrapped her arms around his neck and they both swayed to the music with happiness filled in their hearts]

Mein agar kahoon humsafar meri
Apsara ho tum, ya koi pari
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin
Tumko paaya hai to jaise khoya hun
kehana chahu bhi tho tumse kya kahun
Kisi zaaban mein bhi, woh laafaz hi nahi
Ki zin mein tum ho kya tumhe baata sakoon
Mein agar kahoon tumsa haseen
Kaayanaath mein nahi hai kahin
Taaref yeh bhi tho, saach hai kuch bhi nahin

As they danced on the tunes of the song and their love, it seemed like the stars in the sky have blessed them both to be together forever!



Hey guys

First of all, I want to thank you all for the wishes for the trip...had an amazing trip and prayed for u all. πŸ˜ƒ Also I want to say thanks for being so understanding that I am not able to update for so long. Ever since I returned I have been sick and got really busy with school. But back with the update...so I hope you guys like it and cant wait to see your comments...😊



love
Afreen

Edited by premeer928 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
YAY me first πŸ˜ƒ
Benefit of being a stalker πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ 
K imma reading this and heading to bed.
Will comment tomorrow! πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
 
 
 
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OMGSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This part was such a sweet treat! Afu, what more can I say! You leave me speechless with your brilliant updates. Dude, itna aacha likha hai and you told me that you have no freaking idea about what you were writing. Have I told you how much I missed your work? I seriously did. No kidding!

Your updates always cheer me up. It always comes with some extra unique finishing touch in it. Ok, so THE part! MARVELOUS – what more can I say? LOL I know I said I would comment long but I am really running out of words. It was simple yet amazing and that too right from the beginning. It had that flow where I just couldn't stop reading. Even though the part was long enough it felt like it ended up so quickly. Reading this part was not like reading a story but a reality.

It just feels so much better to have Premeer back! It like the jaan of the story is back. All those pyaar and masti is back. Afu, those lines- seriously how do u get them. They are like so heartwarming. So lovely and fascinating! All those small talks and habits of premeer are just awesome. I can't wait to know what happens between Meher and Harman!!!! They need to confess like ASAP… would love to see there love side now. And not to forget Ash and Preet!!!!! They are like the main fun part of the FF. They aint together and really seems like something is missing. They need to get together. I know you already have some idea for them in ur mind. Just apply them soon, I can't wait for the marriage. Hehe!

&& oo yeah how can I forget to mention about the newcomers in the Juneja house. Adorable, cute, jaanemaans. Haha I like how cool Pratheek is and Chahat bilkul nakre wali. Hehe!!!!! They are like choooo cute.

Kk idk wht more to write….it just gets difficult explaning how fantabulous this part was. And also you don't expect my mind to work at 12am… ROFL!!!!

Anyways, done with my bakbak! I know you have college and other life but do try updating this as time permits. Can't wait to read more.

Much love,

Alisha. 
Edited by shininggal2008 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
me 2nd..
finally  YES!
thank u so much affuπŸ€—
u know how much I missd tthisπŸ˜†
can't wi8 to read it
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Edited by Sweet_Kandy - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by shininggal2008


YAY me first πŸ˜ƒ
Benefit of being a stalker πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ 
K imma reading this and heading to bed.
Will comment tomorrow! πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—
 
 
 
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lol...you are probably the one stalker that i dont want to get away from...haha. ok thats fine...good night and sweet dreams...πŸ˜ƒ

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update..........loved evry bit of it.............it was lovely update.......
loved d kids name prateek n chahat.........prem heer scenes were lovely...........thnx for d pm.............
Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the update. Hope Preet n Ash sort out the probs soon. Loved Premeer scenes. 
Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow what a part i loved it...finally some happy family scenes b/w Premeer n the kids.
Awww Princess don't like staying away for mommy i don't blame her i was like that too...my brother hes my twin was all quite but i was the noisy one who wouldn't even stay a minute away from mum but as i got older i was alright.
Ahh they names the kids Chahat n Prateek just perfect...loved the names and the song and Premeer dance at the end was just great.
Update soon n thnx for the PM πŸ˜ƒ
 
Edited by Xxcoolchick1xX - 12 years ago

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