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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
this is the story of almost every second home in Asia.

. Protection ends where the mind is suppressed, and from there begins suffocation, i really pray for the person from which this is inspired, May God bless her .
as usual it was brilliantly written.

P.S - i didn't like ur  note for the readers in the PM.



Edited by -Mehak - 30 March 2011 at 9:45pm

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
that was an extremly beautiful OS sajjal..............indeed it was very realistic..........loved it lots............do write more............

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Great piece of work dear...
Very much realistic and practical...

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
excellent.....

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Fab OS sajjal!
really very beautiful~
luvd it !

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
love when given more den it is required may turn into hatred....
lovely os sajjal

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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 6:05am | IP Logged
res!
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Rightly said, too much love isn't good
I feel so bad for this girl!
Inspite of having the best thing love,
her life is caged!

Beautifully expressed :)

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