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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 4:58am | IP Logged
hey saj its beautifulSmile
really deep..!
really well writtenStar
loved it!!

love
tasfia

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 5:45am | IP Logged
Beautiful

simply amazing

loved d way u portrayed d character

loved it purely

do write more

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
beautiful! 

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:50am | IP Logged
Meethi i just read this...

I understood what this girl is going through...because most girls go through this at some point, especially if they are the only daughters in the family....the family thinks they are doing good for the girl...but sometimes it feels like they dont trust the girl enough to let her take her own decisions...maybe they fear that she might make a wrong decision, but then again they should let her make her decision and if it turns out to be a wrong one, she will learn from her mistake and they should stand by her and support her at every turn.....protectiveness is okay....overprotectiveness is not.....and it can cause a human a lot of harm at times....esp if that human has the adventurous spirit in her...and wants to experience life in her own way.....

You brought across a very sensible concept hun and in a very good way, as always.....

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire_girl

hey saj its beautifulSmile
really deep..!
really well writtenStar
loved it!!

love
tasfia


main ne socha yahan billi nahi ho gi par wo to already yahan haiROFL

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Wao so meaning full OS
beautifully written 
thanks for pm

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Posted: 30 March 2011 at 3:39pm | IP Logged
it was so realistic OS Sajjal
n beautifully written hun
awesome work
thanks for the pm

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