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awesomeeeeeeeeee os

very deep

beautiful

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Posted: 29 March 2011 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Sajju
its an excellent shot
u portrayed the char the child of a strict family beautifully
there is no doubt that  they  loved her a lot but  as u said their love, care, protectiveness was driving her insane
u r right t
oo much of anything-even love is not always a good for us.

she is dejected with all this things
she wants to enjoy her life, wanna take her own decision, she wants to see the world through her own eyes.
But her brothers sheltered and protective eyes didnt allow her to do it
its really very very sad.......
yah she is a doll - only a broken doll for them - who has no right to do something at her own.

sajju its a very very touching and sensitive issue of our society........

u r as usual best to portrayed the whole thing.....

i loved it totally
Mind-blowing work
keep it up

 

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sajjalthisos is really nice andit is true that even today many gals r treated like this....
 
humladkiyon ki to koi sunta hi nahi.....

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one of the most realistic oneshot i have ever read..................
loved it soo much dear......................

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Very Much related to Real Life...
Very Nice OS Sajjal

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wow sajjal really beautiful

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