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OneShot- Bas thori si wafa chahiye - Pg 19 (Page 20)

-Khushi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
sajjal watever you have told in this os is true and even i have seen all this happening...
but u know we cant help it out we just watch the women with whom its happening and just feel sad for them...
but this man wat they think of themselves...
leave it ...beautiful and a truth os...


Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
i dont understand this- is a girl some kind possession that she has to belong to someone? why cant a girl belong just to herself? 

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valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:44am | IP Logged
Beautiful OS Sajjal...!!!
cutiepie12 Goldie

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 2:34am | IP Logged
sajjal...beautiful wrok dear.. n its all soo true...i hav even seen such cases...gurls consider deir husbands next to GOD n wht dey do is simply pathetic...nowadays dis is a story of every 3rd house

beautifully written
cont soon
loads of love

Edited by cutiepie12 - 01 May 2011 at 2:51am
Bhawna_arti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 3:00am | IP Logged
Nice os.
crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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drfizaahmed IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:40am | IP Logged
very weel written sajjal..a fairtale turning into a reality...excellent
..-Ayesshhaa-.. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 4:47am | IP Logged
beautiful OS

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