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nice update sajjal...
waiting fr next part...
thnx fr pm...
next part soon...


luv,
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Lovly part.

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beautiful princess ..this is again the story of every second household..

I don't blame if a girl gives her husband the place next to God, because i can understand a girl dreaming for her prince charming can end up scarifying her life for him when she finds him. 

In this case, the girl dream't of a perfect husband , but her reality is completely opposite. I know girls should maintain their dignity, but well..i don't know..i would prefer silent suffering rather than mis-behvaing or showing attitude or fighting for rights. I don't see any result of it, bcz the person won't change the either way..I can SO relate to the girl in your story!

anyways this was a beautiful piece princess..and ofcourse the song is beyond praises..

God Bless..


P.S -  u could have used other names..


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you wrote this piece very beautifully Sajjal... it is actually the truth of every other household... thanks for sharing

God Bless You

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the story was very heart wrenching di...u wrote it in a wonderful manner..as always..!

thnx fr d pm:)


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BeautiFul Os Sajjal..

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