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OneShot- Bas thori si wafa chahiye - Pg 19 (Page 19)

thousandmiles IF-Dazzler

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Fantasia. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
beautiful princess ..this is again the story of every second household..

I don't blame if a girl gives her husband the place next to God, because i can understand a girl dreaming for her prince charming can end up scarifying her life for him when she finds him. 

In this case, the girl dream't of a perfect husband , but her reality is completely opposite. I know girls should maintain their dignity, but well..i don't know..i would prefer silent suffering rather than mis-behvaing or showing attitude or fighting for rights. I don't see any result of it, bcz the person won't change the either way..I can SO relate to the girl in your story!

anyways this was a beautiful piece princess..and ofcourse the song is beyond praises..

God Bless..

P.S -  u could have used other names..

Edited by Fantasia. - 30 April 2011 at 8:31pm

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--jiya-- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
you wrote this piece very beautifully Sajjal... it is actually the truth of every other household... thanks for sharing

God Bless You


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perkilicious IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 11:13pm | IP Logged

the story was very heart wrenching di...u wrote it in a wonderful manner..as always..!

thnx fr d pm:)

Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 11 May 2011 at 5:33am
Kritianya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Nice 1
Silent.Dreamer IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 30 April 2011 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
BeautiFul Os Sajjal..
-Khushi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:00am | IP Logged
sajjal watever you have told in this os is true and even i have seen all this happening...
but u know we cant help it out we just watch the women with whom its happening and just feel sad for them...
but this man wat they think of themselves...
leave it ...beautiful and a truth os...

Wings-of-Fire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 May 2011 at 1:02am | IP Logged
i dont understand this- is a girl some kind possession that she has to belong to someone? why cant a girl belong just to herself? 

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