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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Amazing part sajjal...
Loved the way they welcomed zaib...
This part ws interesting...
Cont soon...

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
Hey Sajju
fantastic update as usual- but i bit complex.lol
keep it up

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
nice part dear...........

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
great part Sajjal
waiting ur updates thanks

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
lovely update
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
beautiful update sajjal.........
waiting fr next part....
its ok in urdu as i can understand some part of it ....but dont use more urdu words as many dnt understand it...

thnx,
khushi...

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
its lovely part sajjal..

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged

Just started reading, amazing story Sajjal...

The title is the best thing about it...
The story seems very interesting, much isn't known yet but you described everything so beautifully.
 
At least keep the dialouges in urdu, it makes the story more fun to read..
Continue soon...!


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