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OneShot- Bas thori si wafa chahiye - Pg 19 (Page 16)

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
nice part dear...........

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
great part Sajjal
waiting ur updates thanks

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Posted: 20 April 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
lovely update
thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
beautiful update sajjal.........
waiting fr next part....
its ok in urdu as i can understand some part of it ....but dont use more urdu words as many dnt understand it...

thnx,
khushi...

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
its lovely part sajjal..

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 6:27am | IP Logged

Just started reading, amazing story Sajjal...

The title is the best thing about it...
The story seems very interesting, much isn't known yet but you described everything so beautifully.
 
At least keep the dialouges in urdu, it makes the story more fun to read..
Continue soon...!


Edited by princez_94 - 21 April 2011 at 6:27am

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Posted: 21 April 2011 at 6:34am | IP Logged
simply loved both da parts......Clap
loved da contrast.....Big smile
loved da title.....Smile
hoping to get update everyday...LOL

tczzz
loads of love

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Posted: 22 April 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Part 1:

nice part

unique story

cont soon

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