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OneShot- Bas thori si wafa chahiye - Pg 19 (Page 15)

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resss Party

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as always beautiful. i love your writing style, so descriptive! Star

and the well the story didn't progressed much, but this part had some very important details. I loved the contrast welcomes they both got on coming back home..



Edited by Fantasia. - 20 April 2011 at 9:17am

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resBig smile

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i'm a li'll confusedEmbarrassed... and i want to know more soonBig smile
loved the way you portrayed the contrast of their livesStar

thnx for the pm

~jiya~


Edited by jiya_angel - 20 April 2011 at 9:25am

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Nice part.

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wow di nice part.....wanna read further though to understand the story bettr:D do cont soon..
tc keep smiling:)
n ur awesome!!EmbarrassedClapEmbarrassed


Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 21 April 2011 at 7:31am

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Nice Part Sajjal

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Amazing part sajjal...
Loved the way they welcomed zaib...
This part ws interesting...
Cont soon...

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Hey Sajju
fantastic update as usual- but i bit complex.lol
keep it up

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