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OneShot- Bas thori si wafa chahiye - Pg 19 (Page 11)

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Posted: 13 April 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
awesome one sajjal
thanks for the pm

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Really liked it

though in our custom it isn't allowed

but loved d way u portrayed it

cont soon

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
mindblowing one...beautiful emotions

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Posted: 14 April 2011 at 2:29pm | IP Logged
Wow is the only thing I can say....

beautifully written, heartg wrenching but beautifully potrayed the emotions and feelings...

about the cousin thing its all so normal... Btw i'm very curious, I don't know much but if its allowed with cousin marriage in pakistam why not in india? Is it the religion or country?

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Posted: 16 April 2011 at 9:23pm | IP Logged
Yohoo ..reserved! Cool Approve

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wow!! firstly a bow for the title..EXCELLENT!

and the story is amazing, as always. You very well know how much i am a fan of your writing style. I just wonder in this story if destinies change.

Cont. soon.. God Bless..



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