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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 11:24am | IP Logged
First nd foremost, Good Luck with your examsSmile....... Do WellSmileSmile.......
 
The update was really goodThumbs UpStarClap..............Glad to hear that writing it eased you off a bit........Nd don't worry much, concentrate on your boards nd update if you get timeSmile.........
 
 
Loved the chapter a lot, short but very nice and the best bits were the end ones nd ofcourse, the precapDay Dreaming.......Poor girl might pour some of her heart out ha!!! I loveHeart drunk Roops with Baji, she ends up doing totally crazy stuff without ny inhibitions nd he ends up with no clue how to handle herDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming................This is for drunk RoopsPartyDancing..........
 
 
Alcohol + Ice Cream ha, ye Roops bhi na, I hope she doesn't end up getting sick after that.......Oh nd Baji is concerned for Roops nd didn't notice Madhu at firstBig smileBig smile.............
 
More written space, hmm... not too sure but I vote Roops-Baji..
 
Eagerly waiting for your next update of course, but as always, do it in your own timeSmile...............
 
 
Nd abt MR fiasco, I felt really cheated nd disappointed at first but now not so much, no clue why though, I am totally confused as to why I am not feeling more outragedConfusedOuch..........May be it's because we are doing our bits right, we are trying everything that can be done from our part, Signing the petition, Mailing every single individual concerned, Posting at Colors's website nd also their Youtube channels, in short every single thing that would make our voice be heard nd valued.....Now,if even after all this also things don't work out, dats beyond us... It will be not because of us not trying enough but others not giving it enough due or because they have their reasons to it, whichever it might be, it's beyond our control.....So for now, lets jst enjoy our ride nd try our very best to make sure that our voices are indeed heard nd properly acknowledged.................I totally applaud everyone at IF who are wholeheartedly trying to do anything at all possible to save our dear showClapClapClap.........So be happy Yumyumz, things will come around sooner or laterSmile............
 
Once again, Good Luck with your examsSmileSmileSmile................
 


Edited by rayjst - 08 January 2011 at 8:11am

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
hey rli nyc upd8..nt borin at ol..i rli likd hw roopz flt guilty..wud luv 2 c mor of dat lol n rli lukn 4wrd 2 seein roopz drunk n baji handlin hr lol.x
 
i wud actuali luv 2 c duji intractn mor..cnt c baaji bein treatd lyk dat ol da tym..plz brng duji bak 2gva..baji dsnt hav en1 els oda dn naku hu carez 4 hm..mayb roopz dus abit nw bt stil....x
 
thnx 4 pm upd8 soon.x

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged

Chapter 5

Normal P.O.V

 

"Ice cream kahne?" his voice boomed through they gardens and the both turned towards the bodyguards cautiously to see them both still asleep. 'No wonder anyone can come in anytime'. Baji had a good mind to go and kick those lazy, good for nothing bodyguards but Roop's voice halted him.

            "Ssshhhh''" she placed a finger on her lips to emphasize her point, and than began to stumble towards the gate again.

He grabbed her hand and his angry gaze meet her confused one, "Yerri ho gai hai tu kia? Itne raat ko kidhar jaegi?"

She looked thoughtful for a second than gave a cheeky smile, "Silly Baji, mai bahar jaonge or kahan?"

"Kyun, kia ghar mai ice cream kahatam hogai?" he knew for a fact there was a box of oreo ice cream still in the fridge.

Rage filled her eyes and he confused by the sudden change, "wo Bhau ke pasand ke hai mere nahi." She shook her head from left to right.

"Per tu nai he to kaha tha jo bhau ke pasand wo teri pasand," he argued.

"wo kala tai ne kaha tha kehne ko." Her eyes saddened, "ab mudge jane do."

"Mai tere ko kahin nahi janey dega or waise bhi it ne raat ko door door tak dokanei band hongi."

She stared at him once again than she looked about to make sure no one was there before motioning him towards her. He leaned towards her as she stooped up and his lips near his right ear, before yelling at the top of her lungs, "TO MAI BHOT DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOR JAONGE,"

Her giggle echoed through the garden as he jolted back and tried clean his ear and make sure they weren't damaged. He sighed normal Roop was bad enough but drunk Roop was so much more stubborn. Baji realized he was going to have to get rough with her, "tu kahin nahi jaegi apne kamre ke elawa."

"Nahi mai ice cream kahne jaonge," she pouted stubbornly, "or waise bhi to hota kon hai mujhai roknai wala?"

"Tera bodyguard or ager tu nahi sune gi to mai terey ko utha ke leke jaega."

"Ager tum ne aise kiya to mai bhot zor se chilaongi," and with that she gave a loud scream.

He covered her mouth, "ssshhhh'.. Acha mai tere ko lake jaega."

"Yay!" she clapped her hands excitedly, "ab chal."

"Arre roke, itne jaldi kiya, apun ko shirt to pehen ne dai, itne dairse apon sirf vest mai phir raha hai." He pointed at his black vest.

"Doesn't worry Baji, tum aise bhi achi lag rahai ho," she smiled.

This confused him and he stood startled for a second, had she just complemented him? A goofy grin graced his face and he followed her.

 

 

Baji realized that most stores would be closed at two in the night so he decided to drive her to a shop further from the house. He also didn't want anyone recognizing them.

Silence had taken over them and he sneaked a look at her only o see that she was staring at him, "kiya hai?"

She came quite and her gaze went towards her seatbelt, "dard hota hain?"

Baji kept his eyes on the road, "kis cheese ka?'

Her well manicured fingers touched the cut on his cheek and he flinched, "Yerri ho gai hai kiya?" his voice became harsh, "dekh nahi rahi ke mai drive kar raha hoon."

She sat back frightened, "I am sorry," with that she touched her ears and pouted, "mere waja se bhot dard howa na?"

Her attitude surprised him and he didn't know how to react so he avoided it all together, "Dard to jab hoga, jab apun ghar jaega or bhau mere bhajai mai chai ke chai goliyan utare ga."

"Chal he stopped, a gaye tere ice cream, shop."

"Ice Cream!" she seemed like a little kid as she skipped down to the shabby looking place, "mujhe jitney bhi flavors hain sab chahiyan."

The man behind the casher looked helpless and Baji went to help him, "isse sirf mango wali dei," he smiled remembering her favorite flavor.

"Nahi she stomped her feet, "aj mai kisi ke bhi nahi sunu gi, ajj mujhe koi kuch nahi bataige."

Baji sighed, irritated, "tu itne sare ice-cream kaise kahai gi?"

"Baji please aj to tum mujhe mere marzi se jeno do," her eyes started to get teary, "mujhe koi bhe mere marzi se nahi jene dei ta, na kala tai, na Leila tai, na bhau or nahi aye sahib, please mujhe aj raat ice cream kahne do."

Something struck in him but he still tried to clutch on to whatever argument he could think of to try and make her understand that it was only because no one wanted to see her hurt, "they care about you."

"Care?" she snorted, "then why are they always trying to use me for their own good? I am only important because I am a pawn in their game. No one cares about me; no one has EVER cared about me." Her eyes gained a distant look, "bhau did at one point than Seema came into his life and he punished us for it, "he tore himself from the rest of the world including us."

Baji was speechless; he couldn't believe some one like Roop was suffering so much.

Her eyes bore in to him, "I lost my brother, my happiness to Seema and now I am loosing the only person i have left to'''. Madhu."

 

 

Cliff hanger MUHAHAHHAHA!!!!!!

 

 

*PRECAP*

 

She rested her head on his chest and cried, cried all her hate, problems and love out''''..

 

N.B "" means someone is talking

'' means someone is thinking.


*QUESTION OF THE DAY*

 What's your favorite flavor of ice cream?

Mine is mint chocolate chip.

 

 

*Personal Responses*

 

Suvi7884

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, and the exam wish.Big smile

 

Ushankitvc

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and I will try to full fill your wishes and bring in more dutta-baji-nakku-roop relation.Big smile

 

shruti10august

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and I will try to full fill your wishes and bring in more naku-roop-naku-dutta-baji.LOL

 

cutegurl224

Awww you like my fic so much? I am blushing now'.Embarrassed Thank you so much for the lovely comment.Big smile

 

kiran255

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. If you keep on giving me such amazing ideas I doubt I am going to get a reason to bash them.LOL

 

Shallymann

Thank you so much for the lovely comment and I will try to full fill your wishes and bring in more dutta-baji-nakku-roop relation. Yep Baji is slowly but surely falling for Roop.Wink

 

Shashikalasm

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, and the exam wish.

Love you 2!Heart

 

 Rayjst

Thank you so much for the lovely comment, and the exam wish. Plus I will try to add more Roop baji lovey dovey. Your comment helped ease me about the MR thing your right we have done all we can. It's all hope now, keep your fingers crossed.Wink

 

mIsHeZ.x

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. And as for Duji, I am planning to make Dutta a main character after the intermission which should be in 3/4 chapters so you will see Duji than hopefully.Big smile



Edited by watevewriter - 06 January 2011 at 3:14pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:22pm | IP Logged
yayyyyyyyyyyy First one to comment 
feels great after many days Big smile
Oh i just love ur Ff Smile
its going so well 
i cant believe im liking ROOPs (shocked *)Shocked
well love Baji n Madhu interaction :)
Wink
Thanks dear u are giving me too much confidence on my ideas :P
feels gr8 Embarrassed


well ice cream anything in which has CHOCOLATe in it 
oh i could eat buckets of it :PPSmile


Edited by kiran255 - 06 January 2011 at 3:32pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
res..x
 
edited;
 

Awhh rli nyc upd8..it wz so nyc 2 c roops wivowt planin sumthng agaisnt tasha 4 1ce...rli emotinol wen she sed she wntz 2 liv 4 hrslf 4 1ce n hw ppl of use hr 4 der own gud (ref 2 kala/leela) .. bles er..am actuali strtin 2 feel sympathy 2wrdz er..

 

Thnx 4 pm hun..hmm lukz lyk v gna hav anova emotionl n amazin upd8 :-)  lol lukn 4wrdz 2 it

 

Tc

Xxx

 

Ps. Omg dd u jus say au gna ryt bou tasha afta da!! :D am sooo hapy thnx hun...wz rli strtn 2 miss em lol wud luv 2 c sum luvey dovey scnz b/n dem hehe ;-) x



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 06 January 2011 at 5:11pm

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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
Awww roops poured her heart out... I feel sorry for her... poor girl lost everything... N now shes losing baaji to Madhu...
Fav ice cream flavour is Chocolate lolLOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. CTRL+F5 reloads the whole page.
Great update.. Thnks for the PM...


Edited by Sophia21 - 06 January 2011 at 3:42pm
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged

oopps sory 4 dubl post hun.x



Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 06 January 2011 at 5:10pm
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Posted: 06 January 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
gud one yumna. I knew it that roop vl definately pour her heart out while drunk. I knw now she vl share all her sorrows wid baji. I lyked it gal[:-)].

Nd my fav ice cream flavour is vanila. I don't eat any other flavour.

Thnx for PM nd update soon. Big smile

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